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Re: The Artist Army

Postby plum » Sun Jun 10, 2012 8:39 am

-headdesk-
I was attempting to draw a ball python on the oekaki.. scratched it pretty quick because I have no hand-eye coordination and couldn't get the face even. The sketch looked great, not the lines though. D:
I can draw snakes fine traditionally, but when I take out the tablet, lolnope.

@Soteria - The dewclaws should not be visible for the legs nearest to us, and personally I don't include them on my back legs, not sure if canines even have dewclaws on the rear legs. Also, on the paws farthest from us, try and draw them turned away, instead of inside like the paws nearest to us are. Not sure if that makes any sense, but look at this drawing of mine, I know it's not 100% anatomically correct, but see how the paws farthest away aren't facing the same way as the paws that are nearer?
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby tamed. » Sun Jun 10, 2012 9:22 am

Ahegsn.
Thank you guys for all the help. ;o; <3
I'll be sure to work oh those things asap! I would have never caught that on my own. Thanks again, guys. o v o

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby brian emo » Sun Jun 10, 2012 11:17 am

Soteria wrote:
Thanks for the comments last time, I cleaned up my sketch and tried again :3
I was wondering if I could get paw help, I looked into some tutorials but dunno if I got it right x3

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@Misty: I really like how you drew the soft lines and darker ones, pen pressure <3
Well I'm watching your LS so -u- -stalks and sleeps-

tamed: I don't know if it's just me but something about the right side of the hair
looks off? I think it should be the same length as the other side :3

quick "red"line for you.
lmk if you can't read my writing, lol. x3
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Soteria » Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:11 pm

(I would comment on more art but there's no new recent one ;u;..)

Thanks for all the comments you guys :3 I tried to keep each one in mind and think I got a good
final line, I'll take suggestions to see if need to fix anything else, I learned so much through this process xD ~

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Muggafinn » Sun Jun 10, 2012 3:33 pm

Thank looks so cute, Soteria! I am tired out of my mind, so I cannot give any real tips, but it's a great improvement.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby glitter. » Sun Jun 10, 2012 4:52 pm

Soteria, I really like the pose you have them in. It's really adorable. c:

If you want to, take a look at this chibi Fluttershy I drew. c: http://fav.me/d531jzb
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Soteria » Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:13 pm

Thank you both of you <3
Fluttershy is so cute DeathIsMe, you did a great job :3
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Catastrophic Blend » Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:34 am

I might join. For now I am going to hang out with you guys and get to know you more. :3
I would like to start out by posting this picture and getting some critique on it. (No red lines please)

Please note: I did this in MS Paint with a mouse. No smooth lines or anything like that. I don't have a computer so I go down to the library and work with what I got. Lol.

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby mistywren » Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:35 am

@catastrophic_blend - Please don't forget to comment on other people's art as well.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Catastrophic Blend » Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:37 am

mistywren wrote:@catastrophic_blend - Please don't forget to comment on other people's art as well.


Lol, I won't. :)
I am looking through some art now. XD
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