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Who's Your Favourite EVIL Character? Who's Your least Favourite EVIL character?

Lily (evil Lucky)
6
27%
Red
6
27%
Nix
0
No votes
Cody
2
9%
Rhythm
0
No votes
Micky
1
5%
Cindy
7
32%
 
Total votes : 22

Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby Rebel Faery » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:40 pm

I just wanna write more...

They took me back to their shack- or 'lodge' as they called it. They gave me furs, and showed me my room, that I'd share with my supposed 'sisters', Indigo and Kiya.
Nobody met my eyes or talked to me. I was glad. And the longer I sat with them, the more I came to realise- how could these dogs be criminals?
I had no idea who was wrong and who was right. Was Red evil? Were these dogs evil?
I was so confused.
There was another dog who I did not recognise from my journal. This is her Image
Her name is Rayla,and she came about 2 weeks ago, according to Lilac, who I am supposed to call 'Mum'. She shares with Aaron & Phoenix, as the other rooms are full.
So build a new room, I tell them. Why not?
It's a little more complicated then that, Lucky.
Lucky. that's the weirdest part- having a new name. Lily, Lucky. Lucky, Lily. But who am I, really. I know who I've been, but who AM I?
I go to bed early. The beds here are tatty and wooden, with no mattresses- just sleeping bags and piles of furs. I'm not tired yet, though. I search under my bed- I find a sack full of things- pens, papers, drawings, a musical instrument, a shattered friendship bracelet. I find something caught in the lining, and tip it out. A sleek, smooth, golden edge appears in my hand. I pull gently, and reveal a photo. It was taken three years ago, I see- the date reads 3.3.2009. I would have been twelve, Indy four. And then there's another dog- Cindy.
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i stroke the golden frame, the glass covering the ink, and sigh. I wish I could remember.
Then, memories start coming back. Most are blurred and hazy, as if they never happened, images from a dream. But then comes one, one that isn't blurred, hazy or dream-like, but on as clear as day.
I was eight, if I remember correctly, and I was playing with my best friend. But not Cindy, or Jess- it was foxie. Yep, shy old Foxie from school. We were playing in my room, and we promised to be best friends forever.
What happened to us? I wonder, How did we drift apart? How did I forget, even when I remembered?
Then I realise the though that will haunt me my whole life.
How could I forget?
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:19 am

AWESOME NEW ENTRIES! :D Thank you for writing more. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby TPDebate » Tue Jun 05, 2012 11:35 am

your writing has gotten a lot better.
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Postby Rebel Faery » Tue Jun 05, 2012 6:43 pm

Thank you both!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby star star. » Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:38 pm

More?





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Postby Rebel Faery » Wed Jun 06, 2012 6:14 pm

Sorry, I've been a bit busy lately! Maybe later?
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby Rebel Faery » Thu Jun 07, 2012 11:59 pm

I made a banner!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Jun 10, 2012 12:56 am

Important announcement: I am seriously thinking of quitting this. :cry: As much as I like it, my inspiration is... dead. And my fans seem to have disappeared... I wont f you can convince me to continue.

Hi, J, it's me, Jessica, again!
You can't imagine the day Lucky came home. When Sara came knocking on our door, unnerved, I thought they were going to take another one of us. I hung close to Aaron, scared of losing him... We went outside to the Registry Plain as they call it, and waited as the dog, Red, appeared. She flung something to the floor, and that's when I realised... It was Lucky! I ran over to her, calling her name, hugging her.
She's my best friend, and I missed her.
Then she threw me to the floor and I felt confused. What was going on? She started yelling, and I got so scared... What had they done to her?
Sara came around a couple of days after, told us what Red had done. I felt so angry. Poor Lucky- or Lily, as she calls herself now. She's been a little strange since coming back. Some days, she calls herself Lucky, laughs and plays like before... others, she'll blank us and forget our names and what's she's doing here. And then there are the days when she sits in her room and cries, hiding away from the world.
I miss you, Lucky. Wherever you are, come home.
Please, come home...


Easter.
Todays one of my better days. Yesterday I had no idea where I was, and I forgot Jessica's name... how could I forget?
My memories have slowly been coming back... Old ones, like my tenth birthday party, and newer ones like the day Jo died.
Remember anything new? Jess asks me as I come into the room for breakfast.
Yeah. Um... WhenIndy and Kiya were born, When we found Phoenix, and... and... I struggle to remember. Something about a dark room... A cage... The chamber!
The day I lost my memories!
Everyone's alert, and I can feel the excitement buzzing in the room.
Tell us what happened, Lucky, Book says, Tell us.
It's hard to remember... There's a dark room, the Chamber. I'm out of my cage, and there's a table. Red, she's there... She tells me to get onto it. For some reason, I do as she says, and she straps me there. She lowers... something... over my head. I see images from my past... and then they're gone. Nothing but whiteness... Gone.
Think, Phoenix says, Can you see them?
Yes... No... Yes... Birthday parties... Cindy... Old promises... But they're blurry. I can't hear any words... No... Yes...No. I open my squeezed shut eyes. The memories had gone... I doubt I could get them back.
There's a loud knok on the door.
I'll answer it! I say, and jump up. It's one of the biggest shocks of my life who I see.
You! I say in astonishment. He nods. Me. Can I come in?
Um... Sure, I guess.
That's it, you've guessed it... Cody. I shut the door behind him and everybody stares.
Get out, Mum tells him. Get out and never come back!
Do you want to go home, or don't you? Cody asks. Everyone shuts up.
That's right, I'm giving some of you the chance to go home.
Some? Rayla asks suspiciously.
Some of you shall go home and get your old houses and jobs back. Some of you will go home and work in the Royal Palace. Some of you will join the guards up here and at home. But, it all depends on you Lucky.
I look at him as he says his next words in horror.
Lucky... Will you marry me?

End of Book Two : ~|Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life|~ !
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby star star. » Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:26 am

CONTINUE!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT LUCKY SAYS!!!!! PLEASE, JF AND I ARE TOUR BIGGEST FANS!!!





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Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Jun 10, 2012 1:31 am

Ok, ok! I will!
After I wrote that, I made this :twisted: face, laughed, and went "I'm so evil!"
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
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the cold never bothered me anyway
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