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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Jubee » Fri Jun 08, 2012 10:07 am

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@ Jubee: I honestly have no clue what I had in mind when I drew it. It was four A.M., so I was just going with any ideas that popped into my head. I guess it could be looked at as some sort of mutated Franken-canine((see what I did there? XD ))

On your art, I like how you did the shading in the hair. It just looks nice to me. :D


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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Soteria » Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:42 pm

I am trying to work on my anatomy and I was wondering if I could get some pointers..
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on my current sketch, thanks to anyone who helps! ^u^
I am a visual person, so redlines would be loved but not needed ;u;<3
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby emberonis » Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:22 pm

Soteria wrote:
I am trying to work on my anatomy and I was wondering if I could get some pointers..
http://i50.tinypic.com/1jw475.png

on my current sketch, thanks to anyone who helps! ^u^
I am a visual person, so redlines would be loved but not needed ;u;<3


I think they look nice. =3

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@Lucifer;

It looks nice so far! What I would do is thin the back legs a bit, and give the stomach more of a tuck instead of sloping. c: hope that help a bit!

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I finished this awhile back, but I was wondering if there was anything I could do to improve the shading. It's traditional, of course: -X-


Very... interesting. I wish I could draw that well!I like the shading on the blood.

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Edited. =3 Further advice is welcome, along with redlines and stuff. I know I've got a long way to go with this one still. Gosh, I'm just horrible with the eye! I can't get it right. Also, the chest is too rounded, but I have having a hard time with that. Reached the four hour point...
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Mr.Milo » Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:11 pm

@Neelix: the legs front legs should be a bit longer and thighs not so rounded.

@Soteria: Looks great! though muzzles should be a bit thinner...are you trying to go for a chibi look or semi-realistic?

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Re: The Artist Army

Postby The_Tide_Keeper » Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:17 pm

Soteria, click :3

Neelix, my brain is completely fried I'm sorry... but here's a sloppy sketch. click.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby Soteria » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:14 pm

I was trying for a semi-realistic :3

@The Tide Keeper: Aah thanks! I was wondering what the 3 up and 3 across was?
And I was also wondering if the right hind leg would be the same as the left since
I can't really see it, unless it's supposed to be facing towards the viewer like the
left front paw? (I dunno if I'm making any sense xD)
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby ★Raystar★ » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:35 pm

This is my FIRST time drawing a horse (It's a unicorn, but close enough! :D )
im not sure if its good or not, i didnt even refrence anything, just from when i used to ride horses, but i think i got the generall body down. . . oh i dont know! Please critique.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby dizzy hurricane. » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:36 pm

✩★Raystar★✩ wrote:This is my FIRST time drawing a horse (It's a unicorn, but close enough! :D )
im not sure if its good or not, i didnt even refrence anything, just from when i used to ride horses, but i think i got the generall body down. . . oh i dont know! Please critique.
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby The_Tide_Keeper » Sat Jun 09, 2012 1:49 am

Soteria, all of those numbers are proportions based on the base circle you draw for the head. All of those are rough explanations, so they may be a little off lol. I was going off of the front right paw that you had originally (where you could see three or so toes), so the back and front paw is angled toward you.
***So, we've got a sun jewel, toxics, balloon dogs, you name it and 15 different characters. If you enter our contest. You've got a good chance of winning something. ***

────────────────────────────────
T I D E

[ WIN RARES LIST | Art Shop | The Artist Army

in Just-
spring         
when the world is mud-luscious the little
lame balloonman
whistles far and wee
and eddieandbill come running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring
when the world is puddle-wonderful
the queer
old balloonman whistles far and wee
and bettyandisbel come dancing
from hop-scotch android jump-rope and
it's spring and the goat-footed
balloonMan whistlesfarandwee
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Re: The Artist Army

Postby kivr & fireflii » Sat Jun 09, 2012 3:44 am

Soteria ~ A quick redline for you ^^
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just a small tip; the elbow and the knee should be somewhat in line with each other, though pending on the species; the thigh might be a bit higher or lower.

annnd redline for Neelix
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you'd want to overall thicken the body and define the limbs a bit more ^^
I started the redline based on the headsize, so the body should be proportional to it.
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