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by Jubee » Fri Jun 08, 2012 10:07 am
Silent Symphony wrote:@ Jubee: I honestly have no clue what I had in mind when I drew it. It was four A.M., so I was just going with any ideas that popped into my head. I guess it could be looked at as some sort of mutated Franken-canine((see what I did there? XD ))
On your art, I like how you did the shading in the hair. It just looks nice to me. 
haha, nice. |D
i've noticed that my art always looks better late at night. X3
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by emberonis » Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:22 pm
Soteria wrote:I am trying to work on my anatomy and I was wondering if I could get some pointers..
http://i50.tinypic.com/1jw475.pngon my current sketch, thanks to anyone who helps! ^u^
I am a visual person, so redlines would be loved but not needed ;u;<3
I think they look nice. =3
Neelix wrote:Silent Symphony wrote:@Lucifer;
It looks nice so far! What I would do is thin the back legs a bit, and give the stomach more of a tuck instead of sloping. c: hope that help a bit!
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I finished this awhile back, but I was wondering if there was anything I could do to improve the shading. It's traditional, of course: -X-
Very... interesting. I wish I could draw that well!I like the shading on the blood.

Edited. =3 Further advice is welcome, along with redlines and stuff. I know I've got a long way to go with this one still. Gosh, I'm just horrible with the eye! I can't get it right. Also, the chest is too rounded, but I have having a hard time with that. Reached the four hour point...
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by Mr.Milo » Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:11 pm
@Neelix: the legs front legs should be a bit longer and thighs not so rounded.
@Soteria: Looks great! though muzzles should be a bit thinner...are you trying to go for a chibi look or semi-realistic?
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by The_Tide_Keeper » Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:17 pm
Soteria,
click :3
Neelix, my brain is completely fried I'm sorry... but here's a sloppy sketch.
click.
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by Soteria » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:14 pm
I was trying for a semi-realistic :3
@The Tide Keeper: Aah thanks! I was wondering what the 3 up and 3 across was?
And I was also wondering if the right hind leg would be the same as the left since
I can't really see it, unless it's supposed to be facing towards the viewer like the
left front paw? (I dunno if I'm making any sense xD)
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by ★Raystar★ » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:35 pm
This is my FIRST time drawing a horse (It's a unicorn, but close enough!

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im not sure if its good or not, i didnt even refrence anything, just from when i used to ride horses, but i think i got the generall body down. . . oh i dont know! Please critique.

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by dizzy hurricane. » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:36 pm
✩★Raystar★✩ wrote:This is my FIRST time drawing a horse (It's a unicorn, but close enough! :D )
im not sure if its good or not, i didnt even refrence anything, just from when i used to ride horses, but i think i got the generall body down. . . oh i dont know! Please critique.
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Even a simple 'Wow, that looks really nice!' is better than nothing at all.
i.e; if you don't have critiques, you can still comment.
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by The_Tide_Keeper » Sat Jun 09, 2012 1:49 am
Soteria, all of those numbers are proportions based on the base circle you draw for the head. All of those are rough explanations, so they may be a little off lol. I was going off of the front right paw that you had originally (where you could see three or so toes), so the back and front paw is angled toward you.
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by kivr & fireflii » Sat Jun 09, 2012 3:44 am
Soteria ~ A quick redline for you ^^

just a small tip; the elbow and the knee should be somewhat in line with each other, though pending on the species; the thigh might be a bit higher or lower.
annnd redline for Neelix

you'd want to overall thicken the body and define the limbs a bit more ^^
I started the redline based on the headsize, so the body should be proportional to it.
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