The Artist Army

[Veins Of Opal]

@Lucifer;

It looks nice so far! What I would do is thin the back legs a bit, and give the stomach more of a tuck instead of sloping. c: hope that help a bit!

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I finished this awhile back, but I was wondering if there was anything I could do to improve the shading. It's traditional, of course: -X-

[Zoë]

@Koi: That pose is ridiculously hard to do, and I think you pulled it off without any major flaw! Way to go!

@Lucifer: Looks pretty good!

Help me.
Haha, I've got so much that I'd really like your guys' input on, that I just threw it all into this.
Most of it's little stuff.
Obviously, I'm working on improving all of that right now, and I can easily find tutorials, but I wondered if anyone had any tips or tricks that they use to draw these things accurately.

[kivr & fireflii]

Ninth; No one was really getting mad or anything XD

Just pointing out things like normal. ovo
I'm sure no one was trying to sound rude or anything like that ^^

Koi - then maybe you can just rotate the muzzle so that it won't be as sharp? You can either do that to fix up angle mistakes or fatten them up; so I guess in this case rotate them in that size would be a better choice c: Ahhh. should of told me earlier XD
I understand how it is with modified species - I was just speaking it out of "normal" canine anatomy. ^^; The ears aren't really a major like you said, but just one of the tidbits that could be fixed if you want it to be closest to the original anatomy structure.

Wait, I don't understand why we should move away from it if there is nothing serious going on? OvO;

Lucifer ~ Very nice drawing :D
quite sadly, I have about .0000000001 knowledge about horses so I believe I can't help you there ;v;

[rheia]

Thanks for all the comments. c:
I fixed it up a little.
Also, I apologize for my bad camera.
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@Zoe: I like that. It made me chuckle. I would help, if I could, but I struggle with all these things also.

[Spotty]

Could i have a redline on this? i've had trouble with the back leg and definately the belly.
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I'm always happy to redline tealline^^'. I couldn't really get it's hip to look right, so don't trust that part too much, but there are some other things I think I could help a little with. I think the hind leg looks okay, but it could be a little slimmer. Longer front legs would help with the belly placement and the pose. I think that the head is slightly too big and the neck is a little too long, wolves are quite compact. Other than that I love how it looks so far, it's a creative pose.

I finished this awhile back, but I was wondering if there was anything I could do to improve the shading. It's traditional, of course: -X-

Wow, I love the amount of detail work in your drawing, every stitch is shaded so it looks almost real. I like the nice 3d effect that the shading brings. The only thing I could say for advice is that some really dark shades in some places (except for inside the ears/nostrils and so on) could make it pop out more.

-Link-
Haha, I've got so much that I'd really like your guys' input on, that I just threw it all into this.
Most of it's little stuff.
Obviously, I'm working on improving all of that right now, and I can easily find tutorials, but I wondered if anyone had any tips or tricks that they use to draw these things accurately.

Have you checked out the tutorials listed in the Art / Anatomy Tutorials list Susiron put together?
For the wolf fur length question, this is my favourite tutorial: http://nika-wolfgirl.deviantart.com/art ... -171326324

Thanks for all the comments. c:
I fixed it up a little.
Also, I apologize for my bad camera.
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@Zoe: I like that. It made me chuckle. I would help, if I could, but I struggle with all these things also.

The new version looks a lot better, the hind legs are just about perfect now. Did you make the head larger, because I think it might be a little bit too large^^.

[rheia]

No, I think it's because I reproportioned the stomach and legs. ^^; I'll need to fix it.

[NinthWolf]

Thank you so much for the teal line i really should sketch in a different color!
Thank you very much, it has improved it so much, you should share your skills with me. I need 'em. Thanks again Bro.

[emberonis]

@Lucifer;

It looks nice so far! What I would do is thin the back legs a bit, and give the stomach more of a tuck instead of sloping. c: hope that help a bit!

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I finished this awhile back, but I was wondering if there was anything I could do to improve the shading. It's traditional, of course: -X-

Very... interesting. I wish I could draw that well!I like the shading on the blood.



Edited. =3 Further advice is welcome, along with redlines and stuff. I know I've got a long way to go with this one still. Gosh, I'm just horrible with the eye! I can't get it right. Also, the chest is too rounded, but I have having a hard time with that. Reached the four hour point...

[Jubee]

@Lucifer;

It looks nice so far! What I would do is thin the back legs a bit, and give the stomach more of a tuck instead of sloping. c: hope that help a bit!

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I finished this awhile back, but I was wondering if there was anything I could do to improve the shading. It's traditional, of course: -X-

Very... interesting. I wish I could draw that well!I like the shading on the blood.



Edited. =3 Further advice is welcome, along with redlines and stuff. I know I've got a long way to go with this one still. Gosh, I'm just horrible with the eye! I can't get it right. Also, the chest is too rounded, but I have having a hard time with that. Reached the four hour point...

@ Silent Symphony
it looks very realistic! i wish i could shade like that digitally, let alone in pencil. :U
i like how the blood doesn't simply look like water.
if you don't mind my asking, what type of animal is it supposed to be? a canine of some sort?

@ Neelix
i think the arch in the back is a bit too sloped, and maybe the neck a little too short? i'm definitely not an expert at animals, so maybe this picture will help? it's more or less the same pose.
click.

here's something i made just now; it's homestuck art, in case you're not a fan. |D
any feedback, critique, tips? anything helps, redlines included. [:
click ~

[Veins Of Opal]

@ Jubee: I honestly have no clue what I had in mind when I drew it. It was four A.M., so I was just going with any ideas that popped into my head. I guess it could be looked at as some sort of mutated Franken-canine((see what I did there? XD ))

On your art, I like how you did the shading in the hair. It just looks nice to me.