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Who's Your Favourite EVIL Character? Who's Your least Favourite EVIL character?

Lily (evil Lucky)
6
27%
Red
6
27%
Nix
0
No votes
Cody
2
9%
Rhythm
0
No votes
Micky
1
5%
Cindy
7
32%
 
Total votes : 22

Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby star star. » Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:45 am

RF (is it okay if I call u that?) I SO TOLD YOU!!!!





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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby Rebel Faery » Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:47 pm

Yeah, it's ok if you call me that. Most people call me Rebel, but either is ok.
And you told me what?
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby star star. » Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:12 am

Red's bar'd be a longest.





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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:16 am

Oh right. I voted her 'cause I like her. I don't know why, though!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Jun 03, 2012 6:28 am

Here's a little more!

I followed Red excitedly, Harmony beside me. We walked into the chamber, leaving the door open. Nix, who I had come to realise that he's not friendly, was standing beside a black-and-blue dog, who was strapped to a table. A large mechanism brought down knives onto her; her fur was bloodied and matted.
Curious, I stepped closer. The mechine was a wonderful thing; and if Red was right, this dog deserved it.
Can I have a go at something? I asked. Everybody stared at me in astonishment. I shrugged. What?
Red shook her head. Nothing, darling, nothing, chose a dog and strap her to that chair- She pointed at a worn leather chair.
I chose a dog- an orange-y dog with blue sparkles. I dragged her over to the chair and strapped her in. I noticed a control panel on one of the straps, and pressed a 'go' button.
The dog- Ezzie, Nix called her- screamed in pain. Fire lapped around her, and electric waves shocked her. Knives came up from the chair and back down again.
Ezzie was in so much pain.
I laughed, clapping my hands. Nix and Red exchanged glances behind me.
I didn't know what was up with them, but I was enjoying this.
The chair halted.
I had a sudden urge to do it again, but let commen sense get the better of me- didn't want her to wear out too early. Instead I threw her back down in her cage.
Harmony and Red high-fived.
That was awesome! You're truly one of us Lil! We thought losing your memories would make you soft, but hey! Look how that turned out!
I grinned. Red held onto our shoulders, stood behind us.
I think it's time our apprentices get promoted.




Who still likes Lily/Lucky?
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby star star. » Sun Jun 03, 2012 7:02 am

I still like her! (Even though she's gone mad...)





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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Jun 03, 2012 7:15 am

Yeah.. Lulu's gone a little crazy, hasn't she?
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby star star. » Sun Jun 03, 2012 7:45 am

Yup..... Oh, I've got an idea! Can I tell you it?





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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Jun 03, 2012 7:53 pm

Sure, PM me!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: Welcome To The Messed-Up Place I Call My Life-Untitled S

Postby Rebel Faery » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:15 pm

Time for more!

The graduation was short. We were given 'official' badges, and new beds in the barracks.
But that night, it all went weirdly wrong.
I heard voices, just down the hall. So, careful not to wake anybody, I crept out of the room and followed the sound. The murmurs came from the communication room, just down the hall. Red was sat there, talking to a dog I'd seen on TV once- Cody, I think his name is. I found one totally perfect to run the station in a few years! I erased her memory, and told her she had amnesia!
Great job! So, what's her name?
Well, I don't know her real name, but I called her Lily.
I gasped. I had no doubt she was talking about me. I was so confused. Who was I, if I wasn't Lily? Was I one of the roamers, who lived in that hut of a lodge? It couldn't be, could it?
Could this last month have been a lie?
Have you got a picture of her? Cody asked. i opened the door, flushed and angry.
No need, I said, glaring at Red, I'm here.
Lily! I- uh... Were you listening?
Yes, Red, I was. How could you lie to me? Tears began to fall. Who am I, Red?
I- I don't k-know...
Well, that's just great then, isn't it!
Red! You idiot! She's the one I TOLD you not to harm!
Oh... Oops. Didn't think that through, did I?
Well, why are you standing there? Go fix her!
I- I can't. The changes were irreversible.
Isn't there ANYTHING you can DO?
I can take her back to her friends. That's it. Maybe it will uncover several memories?
Fine! But if she's not well by Easter...
I got it, I got it! Come with me, Lily.
She led me out of the room, cutting the communication. She knocked on the door. Sara, go and get the roamers for a meeting.
It's six in the morning, Red.
Just do as I say, or you're fired.
Sara jumped to her feet and ran off. Nix and Harmony followed Red, who dragged me outside. The eight roamers stood outside in a line. Why do you want us here again- one of them started, then stopped, hands going to her mouth.
Lucky! one, a white-and-orange dog cried.
Jessica, I said, remembering my journal- the story! It had been the truth, not some fiction, not a fantasy. Red chucked me down into the snow. I looked back up at her as she closed the door. Fear shot through me. These dogs were criminals!
Red! I cried, fighting towards the door through the blizzard. But she had gone, taking the others with her. Jessica, Book and Heather - who I remembered from the journal - rushed over to me, and Jess hugged me, shielding me against the snow. Lucky! she cried, happiness in her voice. I pulled away from her, stood up in the snow.
Get away from me! I screamed at her. I don't know you!
Worry crossed her face. Lucky?
I'm not Lucky, and I never will be!
She took a step back, fear in all their eyes.
Great waffles, she breathed, What did they do to you?
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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