The Element: Book 1- Return (two chapters! NEEDED feedback!)

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Re: The Element: Book 1- Return (two chapters! NEEDED feedba

Postby Saphira54325 » Wed May 09, 2012 1:04 pm

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The girl you just called fat is overdosing on diet pills The girl you just called ugly spends hours putting makeup on hoping people will like her The boy you just tripped he is abused enough at home See that man with the ugly scars,he fought for his country That guy you just made fun of for crying his mother is dying Put this as your status if your against bullying I bet 95% of you wont re-post this but I'm sure the people with a heart and backbone will
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Re: The Element: Book 1- Return (two chapters! NEEDED feedba

Postby Saphira54325 » Fri May 25, 2012 2:13 pm

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Feel free to trade with me, or just contact me. I'm a fun person and always try to be fair. I'm somewhat new but I have friends who are veterans at CS. They are showing me the ropes and stuff.

Please check out this links!

I'm trying to collect every butterfly wolf ever. Please help!
viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1417830&p=42440210#p42440210

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The girl you just called fat is overdosing on diet pills The girl you just called ugly spends hours putting makeup on hoping people will like her The boy you just tripped he is abused enough at home See that man with the ugly scars,he fought for his country That guy you just made fun of for crying his mother is dying Put this as your status if your against bullying I bet 95% of you wont re-post this but I'm sure the people with a heart and backbone will
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Re: The Element: Book 1- Return (two chapters! NEEDED feedba

Postby Saphira54325 » Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:52 pm

For right now, everyone, I haven't written any more, and most likely there won't be much over the summer, but I will try. I promise. Right now I'm using my school laptop, and I don't get it over the summer. Thanks for asking though!
Feel free to trade with me, or just contact me. I'm a fun person and always try to be fair. I'm somewhat new but I have friends who are veterans at CS. They are showing me the ropes and stuff.

Please check out this links!

I'm trying to collect every butterfly wolf ever. Please help!
viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1417830&p=42440210#p42440210

My story. Needs feedback
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1163632


The girl you just called fat is overdosing on diet pills The girl you just called ugly spends hours putting makeup on hoping people will like her The boy you just tripped he is abused enough at home See that man with the ugly scars,he fought for his country That guy you just made fun of for crying his mother is dying Put this as your status if your against bullying I bet 95% of you wont re-post this but I'm sure the people with a heart and backbone will
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Re: The Element: Book 1- Return (two chapters! NEEDED feedba

Postby Saphira54325 » Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:08 am

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Feel free to trade with me, or just contact me. I'm a fun person and always try to be fair. I'm somewhat new but I have friends who are veterans at CS. They are showing me the ropes and stuff.

Please check out this links!

I'm trying to collect every butterfly wolf ever. Please help!
viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1417830&p=42440210#p42440210

My story. Needs feedback
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1163632


The girl you just called fat is overdosing on diet pills The girl you just called ugly spends hours putting makeup on hoping people will like her The boy you just tripped he is abused enough at home See that man with the ugly scars,he fought for his country That guy you just made fun of for crying his mother is dying Put this as your status if your against bullying I bet 95% of you wont re-post this but I'm sure the people with a heart and backbone will
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Re: The Element: Book 1- Return (two chapters! NEEDED feedba

Postby Saphira54325 » Fri Sep 28, 2012 12:58 am

bump
Feel free to trade with me, or just contact me. I'm a fun person and always try to be fair. I'm somewhat new but I have friends who are veterans at CS. They are showing me the ropes and stuff.

Please check out this links!

I'm trying to collect every butterfly wolf ever. Please help!
viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1417830&p=42440210#p42440210

My story. Needs feedback
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1163632


The girl you just called fat is overdosing on diet pills The girl you just called ugly spends hours putting makeup on hoping people will like her The boy you just tripped he is abused enough at home See that man with the ugly scars,he fought for his country That guy you just made fun of for crying his mother is dying Put this as your status if your against bullying I bet 95% of you wont re-post this but I'm sure the people with a heart and backbone will
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Re: The Element: Book 1- Return (two chapters! NEEDED feedba

Postby Saphira54325 » Sat Oct 20, 2012 10:10 am

bump
Feel free to trade with me, or just contact me. I'm a fun person and always try to be fair. I'm somewhat new but I have friends who are veterans at CS. They are showing me the ropes and stuff.

Please check out this links!

I'm trying to collect every butterfly wolf ever. Please help!
viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1417830&p=42440210#p42440210

My story. Needs feedback
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1163632


The girl you just called fat is overdosing on diet pills The girl you just called ugly spends hours putting makeup on hoping people will like her The boy you just tripped he is abused enough at home See that man with the ugly scars,he fought for his country That guy you just made fun of for crying his mother is dying Put this as your status if your against bullying I bet 95% of you wont re-post this but I'm sure the people with a heart and backbone will
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