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by rheia » Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:24 am
:: Summer :: wrote:♋ Ƨɛвαƨтιαи Ƨмʏтнɛ ♋ wrote:
It looks pretty good~ ouo You have great potential!
The first thing I noticed was that the face looked a little crooked. The nose and mouth are a little too far toward the left side. To fix this, you could either move them, or readjust the hair so that it appears a little more centered. c:
Her head is at an angle. c: I used a personal photograph as the reference, and I always tend to have my head angled to the side.
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by brian emo » Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:39 am
♋ Ƨɛвαƨтιαи Ƨмʏтнɛ ♋ wrote::: Summer :: wrote:♋ Ƨɛвαƨтιαи Ƨмʏтнɛ ♋ wrote:
It looks pretty good~ ouo You have great potential!
The first thing I noticed was that the face looked a little crooked. The nose and mouth are a little too far toward the left side. To fix this, you could either move them, or readjust the hair so that it appears a little more centered. c:
Her head is at an angle. c: I used a personal photograph as the reference, and I always tend to have my head angled to the side.
Her body and hair seem to be facing us, though^^
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by rheia » Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:41 am
Medusa's Cascade wrote:Her body and hair seem to be facing us, though^^
That's how the body is in the reference ^^; If I could post the ref, I would to show you guys, but it would be ill advised to post a photograph of myself. I do see what you mean with the hair, though. :3
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by Destrie » Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:45 am
Thank you everyone for all the advice, especially Spotty for the red/blue line.
I'll post the finished piece if i can <3
As for critiquing others, i don't really see anything i could help out with, or i would
Milo, your piece is adorable; Alice, that's soooo CUTE <3 & Solembum, i wish i had your skills. *grabbyhands*
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by dizzy hurricane. » Fri Jun 01, 2012 11:50 am
horselover0726 wrote:Thank you everyone for all the advice, especially Spotty for the red/blue line.
I'll post the finished piece if i can <3
As for critiquing others, i don't really see anything i could help out with, or i would
Please comment on other people's drawings.
This is one of the rules.
Nex wrote:* Saying "I can't help with anyone's art" is not a valid excuse. Not everything has to be critique. A nice compliment is always welcome.
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by jules_ » Fri Jun 01, 2012 12:41 pm
@Alice in Chains ~ The eyes are stunning, I love them! It's a very nice picture, and the bubbles are quite pretty. I also love the slight reflection on the lion's face and the different colors in it's mane.
I need some help with photoshop. I downloaded some brushes and brush packs, but I don't see how I can open them onto the program to use. Can anyone give me some instructions on what to do?
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by schizoid. » Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:56 pm
Medusa's Cascade wrote:Don't see anything new to critique...
Does anyone know a good online animator I could use? :b
A lot of people I see animating seem to use flash.
I use GIMP though.
I recently made a new avatar.
It has a slight blue to green animation on the words, so i am sorry if it hurts your eyes XD

This is a dead account c:
Whoever does the deactivating can do it now.
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by brian emo » Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:57 pm
schizoid. wrote:Medusa's Cascade wrote:Don't see anything new to critique...
Does anyone know a good online animator I could use? :b
A lot of people I see animating seem to use flash.
I use GIMP though.
I recently made a new avatar.
It has a slight blue to green animation on the words, so i am sorry if it hurts your eyes XD

I don't know anything about gimp or how to animate with it. |D
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