*Naruto V.2* A World Fallen To Ashes (Not accepting)

[Death-the-lover]

The afternoon light fell upon my skin glazing it with its beautiful shine. My long brown hair slid down my shoulders and swayed gently with the warm breeze that carried by soft hums. It was peaceful now. The swing I was sitting upon creaked as a swung back and forth. I tiredly closed my eyes and attempted to doze off when I heard a boy’s voice. “Mother! Mother, look what I found,” the boy called running to me with his hands crossed, cradling something small, and white. “Koda, what have you got there” I asked in a sweet motherly tone. Koda gave me a big childish grin, showing of his toothy smile, and then revealed a small white flower “It’s a Camellia flower,” he chanted. “I found it floating down the river,” he told me, and by the looks of it, it must have taken a lot to get to it. Koda was covered with dirt and his cloths were drenched in water. “Koda , don’t tell me you jumped into the river to retrieve that” I asked in a worriedly manner. “I-I did, is that bad” he whimpered. I got up from my swing and began cleaning the mud off of his dirtied face. “You have to be more careful, I don’t know what I’d do if I lost you” I kept my hands placed on his cheeks and gave him a kiss on his forehead. “Nothing would have happened mom… like you said, White camellias are good luck” he explained happily “In fact, I got it for you Mommy… I want you to feel better… I don’t want you to be sick anymore,” he began to cry. I was so touched, but there was nothing he could to stop my condition. I wrapped my arms around him, giving him a comforting hug “You’re so sweet" I whispered.

“NO! I won’t allow you to use Koda and Musami in your experiments,” I growled stomping my foot on the ground of the Steam Hokage’s office. “It’s for their own good and the village’s good,” he snapped, suddenly standing up. “Both Koda and Musami have great skills and are perfectly suited for my plan,” he croaked. I could feel my blood start to boil with anger “And what is this plan? What kind of plan could it possibly be that you would consider using your own son and daughter as your lab rats,” I argued. I was completely furious. “Settle down sister” a silver haired man interrupted, entering the office threw the door. I turned to the familiar voice “Hikotsu,” I said surprised. “Sister, I think you should just let him do what he wants…” Hikotsu insisted walking up beside me. He wasn’t alone. A small boy with dark brown hair fallowed behind him. “What are you doing here? I thought you said you were heading to the village hidden in the rock” I hissed questionably. “I wanted to stay a little longer,” he explained raising his sleeve to his mouth, “also, Kimimaru was looking a little sick, so I don’t want to leave just yet,” he added. I narrowed my eyes to the boy then my gaze fell upon the Hokage “I don’t care what you both say, they’re my children and I won’t allow it,” I objected. Suddenly another creak of the door signaled another person’s arrival to the room. “Mother?” Koda whimpered peeking around the door. I grew stiff and held my breath for a moment. “Koda,” the Hokage said walking out from behind his desk and approaching the small silver haired boy, “would you like to help your father with something,” he asked. Koda stared at his father “S-sure,” he agreed. “NO KODA,” I yelped and ran for him, but I was stopped by my brother. Tears began to escape my eyes and I tried to pull away, but Hikotsu’s grip of too strong. The kage picked up Koda and started out the door. Koda watched me with his eyes wide open as his father carried him away. When they were gone I felt my heart sink in my chest, but then my sickness began to act up. My vision blurred and I started choking up blood, everything was black after that.

Soon after, I awoke to the sounds of screams and the poisonous scent of fire and ashes. Where was I? I glanced around the room, then recognized my surroundings. I was in the hospital. “You don’t have much time left…” Hikotsu’s voice said. I turned my head and met his gaze “Why? Why did you stop me brother,” I asked, confused. “It’s simple, your son will be a perfect pawn for my future kingdom,” he said in a snake like voice. My eyes widened and I felt by jaw drop “W-what are you talking about” I questioned him. “You have no idea what Lord Karuto’s experiment was, do you,” he chuckled. “His plan was to create his own breed of demons to use for his own purposes. He calls them Konketsu demons and your son and daughter were chosen to be his test subjects.” I felt like throwing up and I clenched my chest hard “K-koda…. Musami….” I sobbed. “He’s a sick man,” I screamed, and I felt tears flowing down my face. “I think it’s quite amusing” Hikotsu stated with a devilish grin. “Right now, your son has lost control and is attacking the village.” I immediately gasped and my eyes grew wide “N-no, he couldn’t,” I cried, not believing what my brother had just said. I jumped up from the hospital bed and looked out the window of the burning village. I couldn’t feel myself breathing anymore. My legs began to shake and I thought I would die then, and there. Hikotsu opened the door and motioned for me to leave “If you don’t want him to die, I suggest you save him yourself…. I mean, you don’t have anything else to lose,” he explained. Within a blink of an eye I disappeared out the door. I began wipping the tears from my cheeks, and I took a deep breath. “I will stop him with the last amount of life I have in me,” I told myself. That’s where my story stops… Who am I? I’m Koda and Musami’s mother, Wife to the third Steam hokage, and sister of Hikotsu Kenzokuken. My son killed me that night but I’m still watching over everyone. I watched as everyone went threw many troubles, and I watched as my brother toyed with the shinobi world...





Story
It has been four years scents the war between the Leaf and steam village. After those four long years a dangerous group called the Espada appeared. Formally known as ‘Akatsuki’ the Espada caused many troubles in the ninja world. The members were Mitako (The leader), Musami, Clover, Sasori, Madara, Jay, Raven, Ruki, and Hiktosu. They all set the villages into a panic, and one of them tried to possess the powers of the nine tails. That member was Hikotsu. Hikotsu terrorized many people and toyed with many of the other members in Espada. After he tried to steal the nine tails, he faked his death for a plan he had been planning for a very long time. It was no surprise to him that his plan would turn out perfectly. He dreamed of creating his own kingdom, and controls the ninja world. He had everyone in the right spots. By destroying the Steam village and stealing everyone’s chakra, he raised his kingdom from the ground and turned half of the land of fire into a deathly, toxic, waist land. Will anyone be able to stop him?


Kingdom

This is Hikotsu's Fortress in the middle of the waist land. It was formaly where the Steam village was and its hard to get around on the inside. It's also troublesum to get to the Fortress becuase of the Toxic waist land surrounding it.


This is the waist land and the towers. The air around the towers is really hard to breath in and they make the land seem like a giant maiz. There are also verious fungi and poisons that cover the towers.

Hiden Steam Village
(Picture coming soon) The Village hiden in the steam is a small village that is surrounded by dangerous gorges and high mountains. The village is known for their beautiful hotsprings, and crystal caves. The village could be found in the Countrey of earth in the land of needles.


Steam Village Shinobi
The Vilage's secret: After learning about the Jinchuuriki and the tailed beast, the leader of Steam village became intrigued in the idea of shinobi, beast hybrids. His Obsession led him to creating just that. He created Hybrids by Completely sealing an everyday animal into a childs body using the power of chakra crystals the village had created. Only the most Gifted steam shinobi were chosen. The leader had named his creations Konketsu Demons.


Members
1. Death-the-lover
2. Wolfrunner
3. Antly659
4. Fallen Demon Angel
5. ðëåmøñ spåwñ




Relationships
1. Ruki <3 Koda
2. Naruto <3 Clover
3. Haku <3 Rein


Forms!

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Forms:
Name:
Age:
Rank:
Gender:
Tools:
Abilities:
Looks:
Bf/Gf:
Other:

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Steam Shinobi form:
Name:
Age:
Konketsu Demon or not?:
Animal Mixed with(If is):
Rank:
Gender:
Tools:
Abilities:
Looks:
Demon Form Picture?:
Bf/Gf:
Other:

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Espada Form:
Name:
Age:
Village from:
Gender:
Tools:
Abilites:
Looks:
Partner Request:
Bf/Gf:
History:
Other:

New form!
These are Gallian, other wise known as Konketsu demons... but they arent normal Konketsu demons. They are Hikotsu's perfect Konetsus. They are humans not only merged with a demon, but are half demon. They usualy have the identity of the animal somehwere on their bodies (Like cat ears, wolf tail, horns, what ever... xD). Also! Other then the steam Hokages demons, these can be more powerful. Gallians see Hikotsu as their leader!

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Name:
Age:
Gender:
Tools:
Animal mixed with:
Looks:
Abilities: (Optional)
Personality:
Crush:
History:


Ranks


Genin:
Tenza
Zak
Ion


Chuunin:

Jonnin:
Kimimaru
Kakashi
Rein
Kayoto

Hokage:
Naruto

Rouge:
Sapphire- Rouge Gallian
Haku

Espada:
Ruki
Hikotsu
Jay
Clover
Raven
Sasori

Steam Village shinobi:
Koda
Soren
Roseria
Riley


Gallian:
Ritsu
Kataro
Colette
Kiro

Other:

RULES
1. Tess rules apply
2. Miner cursing ;D
3. Dont make me mad... please!
4. DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA.... but not so much that it gets me mad.
5. Fallow my rules of coarse!
6. Use my forms!
7. No power playing, God modding!
8. Invite only please!
9. Tell me when you wont be on!
10. Please try to be on!
11. Have fun!

[Death-the-lover]

Name: Naruto Uzamaki
Age: O.O
Rank: Hokage of coarse!
Gender: Male
Tools: As seen in show
Abilities: As seen in show also!
Looks:

Bf/Gf: Well, he loves Clover <3
Other:

Steam Shinobi form:
Name: Koda
Age: 20 somthin xD
Konketsu Demon or not?: Yesh!
Animal Mixed with(If is): Demon Wolf
Rank: Chuunin
Gender: Male
Tools: Normal ninja tools
Abilities: Will be rped
Looks:


Demon Form Picture?:

Bf/Gf: Love Ruki with all his heart <3
Other:


Name: Sorren
Age: 18
Konketsu Demon or not?: Yes!
Animal Mixed with(If is): Chimera
Rank: Jonin
Gender: Male
Tools: His Kekkei genkai
Abilities: will be rped
Looks:

Demon Form Picture?:

Bf/Gf: nope but open for it
Other:


Name: Hikotsu
Age: Not telling heheheh
Rank: Leader of the Gallians and... the bad Guy!
Gender: Male
Tools: Ninja tools... Kekkei Genkai ..... Umbrella
Abilities: You know alot of them :3
Looks:

Bf/Gf: NO!
Other:



Name: Tenza
Age: young....
Rank: Genin...
Gender: Male
Tools: Sword... Kekkei Genkai
Abilities: Kekkei Genkai
Looks:

Bf/Gf: No!
Other:


Name: Kimimaru
Age: around 20
Rank: Jonnin... but medic ninja
Gender: Male
Tools: Kekkei Genkai, but he doesnt like to fight.
Abilities: Healing, reviveing other stufff.....
Looks:

Bf/Gf: Likes someone....
Other:

Name: Ritsu
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Tools: Whip
Animal mixed with: Cobra
Looks:

Abilities: ill be rped
Personality: She doesnt talk much but when she gets talking... shes annoying.
Crush: "I wouldnt say its a crush... more like a killing instict."
History: Will be rped!

Name: Kataro
Age: NOT TELLING! DDD
Gender: MALE
Tools: His hands, and sort of a razor glove thingy...
Animal mixed with: Fire Dragon
Looks:

Abilities: You'll see!
Personality: Hes over confadent..... hes just a big A$$ jerk xD
Crush: NO! but he is a perv
History: Will be rped

Name: Colette
Age: 5
Gender: Female
Tools: What ever weapon she wants :3
Animal mixed with: Kitty cat
Looks:

Abilities: YO MAMA! jk will be rped :3
Personality: Shes very, very, quiet and doesnt speak much AT ALL!
Crush: dUN know
History: YO OTHER MAMA! jk jk will be rpppeed!

[LEAVING]

Usual Aura I guess XD

[Quitting~]

(can we just continue where we left off here?)

[Death-the-lover]

(9Yes, but i would like if you guys could make a new form... (idk im weird like that) ))

[wolfrunner]

Espada Form:
Demon Appearance -
Human Appearance -

Name: 
Ruki Netomi

Age: 
20

Village from:
 Village Hidden in the Steam 

Gender: 
female

Tools: 
kunei, shurikan, Ruki's Chakra-Surpression Seals, and her shadow creatures.

Abilites:
*Shadow Style
*Water Style
*Lightning Style

Partner Request: 
formerly she was partners with Hikotsu

Bf/Gf: 
in love with Koda. But since Koda was changed into a Gallian by Hikotsu and his memory whiped, Ruki is having a tough time. She doesn't believe Koda is himself anymore since Hikotsu changed him, and let him go. She still loves him though. <3

History: 
Ruki doesn't like to give much away about her past, except that her paretns died ten years ago and she has no siblings that she knows of. She defected from the Steam Village when she was 16 to join the Leaf Village. Then she defected from there to join Espada. Now, four years later at age 20, Ruki has come back to the Steam Village. Origionally she had come to hide and wait out what seemed like the end of Espada, when Mikato and Hikotsu died, and Clover was captured by the Leaf Vilalge. Ruki had been acting as a spy for the organization in the Steam, without knowing she was playing into her former partner's hands. She fled to the Leaf Village (along with Koda, Naruto, Jay and Clover) during the destruction of the Steam Village. She has joined the Leaf Village where she has given up being a shinobi and settled for living in the village with Sayuri working as a medic planning to raise her children when they arrive.

Other: 
Ruki is the expectant mother of Koda's two twins: a boy to be named Kaname and a girl to be named Tsubaki.

Personality: 
Ruki is a very calm and laied back shinobi. She has gotten over not using her demon granted juts us, since Hikotsu's real plans were revealed.  She is fun-loving, protective, rebellious,cunning. 

However......she is also dangerous. Ruki's temperment, though typically calm and relaxed, is flighty as best on a normal day. If pushed to her limits, Ruki will not hesitate to destroy everything and everyone in her path. 

Recent encounters with Hikotsu and the Gallians have caused Ruki's temper to mellow a bit. She's not so quick to snap anymore, and when she does she is quick to apologize. The kunochi is more willing to fallow Naruto's orders and isn't quite as stubborn as before. She's entierly focused on raising and protecting her children when they arrive

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Steam Shinobi form:
Name:
 Tsubaki Netomi

Age: 
she appears to be 5 years old

Konketsu Demon or not?: 
not

Animal Mixed with(If is):
 XXXXXXXXXXX

Rank: 

Gender: 
female

Tools: 
sealing scrolls, senbon laced with poison and kunei

Abilities:
*Shadow Style
*Healing Jutsu
*Sealing Jutsu

Bf/Gf:
 too young

Other:
her name means 'Camellia' in Japanese, unknown to her she was named by her mother for her father's favorite flower

Personality:

History:
read Kaname's History

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Kaname is the little boy crying and Koda would be the guy smiling and that looks older. AWWWWW!!

Steam Shinobi form:
Name: 
Kaname Netomi 

Age: 
he appears to be 8 years old

Konketsu Demon or not?: 
not

Animal Mixed with(If is) :
XXXXXX

Rank:


Gender: 
male

Tools:
 kunei and shurikan

Abilities:
*Vapor Style
*Crystal Style

Bf/Gf: 
too young

Other:
 Kaname has the same medical condition as his father and grandmother, but nowhere near their stages...he is still young so it's only the very beginning of the illness so it hasn't even been identified yet. 

Personality:

History:
Kaname was born the first of two twins to Ruki Netomi and Koda Sabathe in the Village Hidden in the Leafs several months after the destruction of the Village Hidden in the Steam. Both he and his sister Tsubaki grew much quicker then the average person possibly due to their parents being demons. Like his sister, Kaname has no idea about his paternal half of the family or what's really going on with the Gallian and Hikotsu's Kingdome as they have been told that Koda died some time before their birth though no specifics were given.

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Gallian Form:
Name: Kiro Rayger
Age: 26
Gender: male
Tools: kunei, shurikan, two twin kantanas.
Animal mixed with: bear
Looks:
Abilities: 
 *Earth Jutsu
*Incredable brute strength
*talented with Taijutsu
Personality: Kiro is a little hot headed and aggresive in battle. But he does have a sweet side, though he only shows it to a few. (As in Colette, who he adores and who can manipulate him without much effort. And Rissa, who can also manipulate him fairly easily into him giving her her way.) 
Crush: yeah...about that....not gonna happen.
History:

[Death-the-lover]

Accepted of coarse, im just workin on my forms :3

[Death-the-lover]

Ok im done, and i have new Peeps check um ooouuuttt ;3))

[antly659]

Name:clover
Age:22
Rank:joini
Gender:female
Tools:ninja tools and a sword
Abilities:renigan along with alot of chakra she can muster more then alot of the tailed beasts and tons of copyed jutsu and she knows alot of sealing jutsu as well from secret and forbidden scrollsand her beast jutsu form looks like this
Looks:
Bf/Gf:well she loves naruto
Other:her blood carrys both the uchiha clan and the lost Uzumaki clan though she dose not know who her mother or father are as she was just droped off at the leaf village when she was about 10 years old she has no memorys of her past before the age of 10


Name:jay
Age:21
Rank:joini
Gender:male
Tools:ninja tools
Abilities:his chakra is fire and lighting and wind(is a uchiha) along with his Eternal" Mangekyō Sharingan and all the powers that comes with it
Looks:
Bf/Gf:musami
Other:has two kids shinra and zak, and he has his fathers eyes so he has the "Eternal" Mangekyo Sharingan thanks to his father itachi uchiha

Forms:
Name:kakashi
Age:40
Rank:joini-anbu
Gender:male
Tools:ninja tools and other things
Abilities:sharingan
Looks:
Bf/Gf:nope
Other:he has a kid named rein


Forms:
Name:rein
Age:20
Rank:joini-anbu
Gender:female
Tools:ninja tools
Abilities:to be rped
Looks:
Bf/Gf:haku <3
Other:


Name:zak uchiha
Age:5
Konketsu Demon or not?:yes
Animal Mixed with(If is):tiger
Rank:genen
Gender:male
Tools:ninja tools
Abilities:sharingan and chirdo
Looks:
Demon Form Picture?:
Bf/Gf:none yet
Other:

Espada Form:
Name:raven
Age:24
Village from:iron vilage
Gender:female
Tools:ninja tools
Abilites:reingan
Looks:
Partner Request:not really needed seeing as i am one of only a few left
Bf/Gf:ha no
History:keep prisoner in the iron village untell one day the espada attacked it she got out and learned who her father was pein and that naruto had killed him now she was out for reveang
Other:
???


Name:sapphire
Age:18
Konketsu Demon or not?:yes
Animal Mixed with(If is):phoenix
Rank:join
Gender:female
Tools:ninja tools
Abilities:can controll fire and heal
Looks:
Demon Form Picture?:
Bf/Gf:none
Other:escpaed from hisotsu she had been expeamented on and turned into the demon she is now she is a loner heading tords the leaf village

(still editing)

[Death-the-lover]

okayz :3