Artist Army {old thread}

[~K-9]

OK, so, besides the sloppiness, what do you guys think?

[Calix]

Guys, I don't mean to minimod, but remember to give feedback on others when you post your art ^^; As nex said before, everything being 'covered' already or not being good at the subject that the other person drew isn't really an excuse. Again, apologies for sounding like a minimod.

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Harpalyce- The shading on that is really nice ^^ His lips seem a bit too 'puckered' though, and it almost seems like his forehead isn't broad enough? I might be wrong though.

PuddingWaffles- Her upper arm seems a bit long imo? And her head may be a bit small, but I'm not certain. It's coming along nicely though, I love how you've done her hair <3

Cannec- The legs are still too long, and the left paw is in a bit of an awkward position. The head and mouth and nose all look really good to me though, I also love the colors :3 Nice job ^^

~K-9- The eyes are much too big, and the shading should match the shape of his face, not just cut off sharply. His hands are too small and pointed and I'm not sure what's going on with his mouth?

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Maybe I could get some feedback on this? I'm nearly to the point of scrapping it and starting over but I figured I'd ask for any redlines/critiques here first. The tail is meant to be long, by the way.

[Harpalyce]

K-9, I can give you a redline in a moment if you would like.

Thanks for the critique, August! I freely admit it's FAR from my best work. If I chucked another hour or two into it, it'll probably look better, but I think the purple is too overpowering so I may try the technique again with another subject and color set. Practice makes perfect, etc.

I'll come back and do a sweep of proper critique soon, my brain is rather scrambled. But my door is always open if you would like me to redline humans/humanoids. Just give a yell.

I could use some thoughts on this (very, very, very) WIP.


http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m4nmv ... 1_1280.jpg for larger (though it's been chewed on by jpg compression quite a bit).

Mainly I'm wanting to know how much stronger the shading should be. I chronically under-shade things and would like to avoid that this time.

[Mr.Milo]

@Neelix: cute llama, but the muzzle should be a bit more even for bothe sides and the back not so much of a bump. the beack legs should be kinda like this....
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... rs.svg.png

@Maromoset: Wow what a cool species!

@Lock: awww such a cute tiger i love the scarf!

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Finally finished or somewhat done with my charcter..this is a sun cheetah, i posted it unshaded awhile ago but heres the shaded version....id still like some help on the wings though please!
-Thanks Mr.Milo

http://i972.photobucket.com/albums/ae20 ... ooma-2.png

@Cennec: looks adorable but the neck looks a bit too think.


I'm just reposting this because i never got any feedback!

[~K-9]

I feel so rude >.< I have to turn down the redline though. I have always taught myself, and I find that the easiest way for me. Don't take it personally, I don't mean to be rude DX


Now, on your drawing. I think its actually really good! I actually can't think of anything you should fix XD Its Katara and Zuko, right? (Lol I'm going to look like an idiot if I'm wrong XD)

[Jubee]

i know how off it is anatomy-wise, but would anyone mind red-lining this so i could have an idea of what i should do next time?
http://irockyursox.deviantart.com/#/d4yugqd
http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/ ... 4yugqd.png

agh, the boobs are huge.

[Harpalyce]

Ok, as you wish. I redline things mostly to show people how to improve. It's a lot easier with these things to show instead of to say, you know? But whatever you like is fine.

And yes, it's Katara and Zuko ^0^

[tamed.]

i.

wanted to be cool too, ok?
Q3 Q

http://i1251.photobucket.com/albums/hh5 ... wpaint.png

too bad i'm not cool. omg.
//crys in the corner.

@Harpalyce Your artwork is so pretty. <3 I especially love how you shade them, I just don't even. Aungsdfa.
So beautiful. ;A ;

[dizzy hurricane.]

argghh I feel so lame.
I don't have any cool artworks to show you guys.
D:
But I do have feedback, does that count? ;D

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Cannec - It looks so adorable! c: I think the legs might be a bit too long, but other than that, it looks great~

~K-9 - The eyes look much too big, and unless he's supposed to be under a canopy or something, the shading looks a bit sharp. c:

Harpalyce - Oh. My. Pudding. I love you so much. ;A; It looks really good! Only one small critique; I think the shading looks a little too ... sharp? I guess that's the word, on Katara. Maybe blend it in a little bit more? c;

Mr. Milo - //speechless. That. Is. So. Awesome. <3

Jubee - It looks really good! c:

watercolour - Wow, that looks great! c: And whatever, you're probably very cool. ^^

[Cannec]

@ Harpalyce: I can't say much about shading because I'm not very good at it. Something I noticed about the anatomy though, Zuko's right arm doesn't seem to connect quite right, especially the forearm. I don't really know much about anatomy but it jet looked off.

I finished my piece, it had gotten too far along to really fix much by the time I read your crits but thank you.
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