Mistclan - a warriors fanfiction

[Kat.]

I LOVE IT! I just don't like reading about kits/queens dying ): anywho, it has great potential <3 (even though it doesn't need any, it is already amazing ;P)

Thank you!
I know, I don't either, but ..I don't know, it just flowed onto the page ..

yeah, I know what you mean.
once, I was writing this weird anthro story, and I was really sleepy and stuff, and in the middle of my non-reality stage I killed the main character ._. I think it had something to so with suicide over love... either way, it wasn't good and a bunch of people were p*ssed x3

[videlicet]

I am totally stalking this, Fanged.
'Tis awesome, thus far!!
*sets up stalker-tent* xDD

[littlemoosie]

great job so far, i love this!

i like how you ended the prologue so suddenly. it's leaving me wanting MOOORRREEE!

unlike many stories i read, i actually understood this very well. i knew what was happening and you explained just enough. you also used a lot of great details, which i liked.

overall, i really am liking this and will continue to stalk the thread. of course there were a few errors with grammar and spelling in there, but it's nothing to worry about. i love this! good job, once again. :]

[crescent + cheep]

I am totally stalking this, Fanged. :D
'Tis awesome, thus far!!
*sets up stalker-tent* xDD

Thank you Viz!
*hugs*

great job so far, i love this!

i like how you ended the prologue so suddenly. it's leaving me wanting MOOORRREEE!

unlike many stories i read, i actually understood this very well. i knew what was happening and you explained just enough. you also used a lot of great details, which i liked.

overall, i really am liking this and will continue to stalk the thread. of course there were a few errors with grammar and spelling in there, but it's nothing to worry about. i love this! good job, once again. :]

I'm glad you like it :)
I'm working on the next paragraph, only its written in first person, another POV, and I'm not sure if I want the story like that...
If anyone has any advice on that, please tell me - would you rather see this written with more POVs or like a normal story?

[light.]

Where is the like button? I can't find it! You are going to make me want to read the Warriors series c: This is so awesome

[crescent + cheep]

Where is the like button? I can't find it! You are going to make me want to read the Warriors series c: This is so awesome

Hey, thank you! :)
it means a lot. ^.^

[not zinnia]

I'll edit this with some actual constructive criticism when I get to a computer, so expect a pretty long review in the not-so-distant future, :3

[crescent + cheep]

I'll edit this with some actual constructive criticism when I get to a computer, so expect a pretty long review in the not-so-distant future, :3

I'll look forward to it :)

[satuurnity]

Awesome! NOW WRITE MORE! I mean, I only just started reading the warriors series about a month ago, and i'm alreay on the sixth book. So far it's freakin' awesome! And this has made me like it even more!!!

[crescent + cheep]

Awesome! NOW WRITE MORE! I mean, I only just started reading the warriors series about a month ago, and i'm alreay on the sixth book. So far it's freakin' awesome! And this has made me like it even more!!! :D

Thank you <3
I read them pretty quickly, too, I read the complete first and second series, but lost interest in that storyline...