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Re: Artist Army

Postby kivr & fireflii » Sat May 26, 2012 1:48 pm

oops.
didn't know lock had already redlined it for you, but I guess you'll just get another xD;;

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seems like she pointed out your mistakes, the legs were too long and few things here and there.
also like her, I really liked the expression! <3

designing characters are so. much. fun.

some recent designs ( excuse the anatomy issues rofl orz. last two was draw 2 in the morning in my bed ; v ;)
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Re: Artist Army

Postby plum » Sat May 26, 2012 1:53 pm

Toki&Bel wrote:
designing characters are so. much. fun.

some recent designs ( excuse the anatomy issues rofl orz. last two was draw 2 in the morning in my bed ; v ;)


pfffft not for me.
I prefer making creatures rather than giving them designs.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Lock » Sat May 26, 2012 2:22 pm

Toki&Bel wrote:
designing characters are so. much. fun.

some recent designs ( excuse the anatomy issues rofl orz. last two was draw 2 in the morning in my bed ; v ;)

ikr :DD

The colors in the first are lovely, and the second and third are so interesting and uniqueee<3
Also can i just say that I adore how you draw faces? Those expressions. <3 x3

I just finished this one. ^^
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adgh I hate how the eyes look. And some of the anatomy doesn't make any sense. :|
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Re: Artist Army

Postby kivr & fireflii » Sat May 26, 2012 2:29 pm

designers unite *fist bumps*


I seriously need to ask you Lock that someday we need to collab on making some designs >A> <3

I absolutely adore your's ;v;

for the face anatomy(if you want any that is), the eyes should be a bit lower down and the maw slightly bigger to make it more tiger like :D
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Re: Artist Army

Postby wibeke » Sat May 26, 2012 2:32 pm

Toki&Bel wrote:
some recent designs ( excuse the anatomy issues rofl orz. last two was draw 2 in the morning in my bed ; v ;)

Dude, I love your designs. <3
Not really sure if you want critiques or what, but I really like them. Just a note on the last one, though- you should probably white out the top left corner. Looks like something else you wrote got included, you probably don't want to be swearing on a kids' site. xD
Besides that, though, I think the last is my favorite. She seems like a pretty interesting little creature, I'd love to see her all cleaned up and colored in.


Lock wrote:I just finished this one. ^^
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adgh I hate how the eyes look. And some of the anatomy doesn't make any sense. :|

That's awesome. I love those colors and how you did the stripes. They actually look like stripes that would belong on a tiger, which is pretty hard to do. People usually either don't do enough or go completely over board, but you did well. ^^
Are you looking for redlines/critique? I'm not too great with tiger anatomy, but I could try and help out.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby kivr & fireflii » Sat May 26, 2012 2:37 pm

oh. oops. ROFL

I tend to talk to myself when drawing orz
and I was starting to get frustrated. ;n; // hits herself.

But thank you Wib!
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Muggafinn » Sat May 26, 2012 2:40 pm

@Lock: My father, who is an artist and is constantly picking over what I do, seems to have rubbed off on me a bit. This isn't related to anatomy, but you have a tangent between the crease in the scarf before the tassels start and the line formed by the left back leg. Composition wise, it threw me off. And maybe the eyes would look a bit better if you made the cheek fluff larger? It could have to do with the face around them, as opposed the eyes themselves. I don't really know, though.
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Re: Artist Army

Postby Lock » Sat May 26, 2012 2:53 pm

Thanks for the critique! <3

Muggafinn - Ahh yeah, I just noticed that line. adfghj I always do things like that. quq

Wibeke - I'd love some critique, thank you! <3

Bel. - Yesss. This collab needs to happen! I adore all of your designs. qwq <33
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Re: Artist Army

Postby plum » Sat May 26, 2012 3:33 pm

Lock, I love the tiger, 'specially the bicolored eyes.

First drawing with my tablet back, not looking for crits, I know the legs and shading are bonkers.

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Re: Artist Army

Postby Cannec » Sat May 26, 2012 4:47 pm

Thank you all! I'll shorten up his legs and ears and such when I get the chance.

Bel- Those designs are epic, they do seem a bit busy but I've always been a fan of simpler designs so its not really a problem.

Lock- The only thing I notice is that the neck seems too long, otherwise I love it.
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