~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

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Who is your favouriote character?

Lucky
7
50%
Cindy
0
No votes
Indy
1
7%
Mum/Dad
0
No votes
Rhythm/Micky
0
No votes
Cola/Heather
0
No votes
Jessica/Jo/Aaron
2
14%
Sara
1
7%
Cody
0
No votes
Foxie/book
3
21%
 
Total votes : 14

Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Fri May 11, 2012 3:54 am

Hi. J.
I am so tiered, but I wont sleep. If I do I might not wake up.
Everybody is starving. All remembrance of food is gone. I can barely remember what we were eating the night I was taken. I think it was turkey... I can remember thinking What is this, Christmas? before we ate.
Aaron has been counting the days. Apparently it's 13th December. Wow, already? We were taken THREE WEEKS AGO?!
Hurry up, Heather. Please.
Camels can go without food or water for a long time. I wish I was a camel.
You ok, Lucks?
Just hungry. And tired. And thirsty.
Oddly, she seemed none of these things. There was a strange expression in her eyes... What? Pain? Joy? Evil? Jealousy? It seemed like all of these. These past few weeks, Cindy's changed. Before, I admired her; she had no idea where she came from, but she still knew who she was, still hoped for a great future. Now she's lost that. It's as if she knows what will happen. Where she came from.
And if she does... this past year will have all been a lie.
No, I'm being ridiculous. We're all going a little mad. With me it's the voices in my head... with Jess, it's hallucinations.
Indy and Jo are sick. I doubt they'll make it to Christmas, if I must say. Mum's up all day and night trying to care for them.. but it's pointless, really. Even if they do survive, their lives will be hard, where we're going.
Cindy caught me looking at my little sister.
She's a great person, you know. I satred up at her with big, sad, eyes. My voice was a dry whisper.
I know. We were interrupted by a wail.
Water, Josie croaked. I'm so thirsty.
Cindy begged for it. There was a small hatch to the front of the truck where the guards were. I could here their mocking words.
Aww, is somebody thirsty? Is little Cinderella thirsty?
No. Little dogs are dying. Please, we need water.
Rhythm?
Here's some water, you selfish dogs! Rhythm yelled, sloshing water in a bucket. Mum cupped it in her tail and fed it to Josie. She looked a little better- but who I am I kidding? We're all gonna die.
Great, now I sound like Aaron.
We all crowded around. It was different from last time we drank, though- even though we were so thirsty, we couldn't drink it. My legs collapsed beneath me as I drank. I gave a groan.
Mu-my? Indy whispered. We turned to her. I don't feel well.
Hush, now little Indigo. Just sleep.
Indy closed her eyes. Mum fed her a sip of water. Her breathing was so slow. I was worried it would stop altogether. Josie's ragged breathing alarmed me even more. I crawled over to the dark wall, and lent my head against it, resting.
During the night something alarmed me. I raised my head and peered through the dark. My ears tensed for a tiny sound.
That's when I realised.
I walked over to the hospital corner. Jess and Aaron were resting there, propped up on a pile of sacks we found in here. Mum lay beside Indy. I ignored them and rested my nose on Josie's chest. It was just as I suspected.
She was dead.


DUN DUN DUN!!!!
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri May 11, 2012 8:44 am

NOOOOOOOO! More (when you have time, of course). THIS IS MORE EPIC THEN MINE!!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Fri May 11, 2012 6:10 pm

No, yours is WAY more epic!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Sat May 12, 2012 3:39 am

I'm stuck for ideas. PM me if you have any.
Also, look at this limerick I wrote:

I once knew a girl with a face like a cookie,
She proved to be very unlucky,
She ate two biscuits and a cake,
And then fell in a lake,
And so she was eaten by a ducky
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat May 12, 2012 8:04 am

Rebel Faery wrote:I'm stuck for ideas. PM me if you have any.
Also, look at this limerick I wrote:

I once knew a girl with a face like a cookie,
She proved to be very unlucky,
She ate two biscuits and a cake,
And then fell in a lake,
And so she was eaten by a ducky

lol XD Here's one I wrote:

There was a young girl named Jessy,
And she was really quite messy,
She threw clothes on her floor
And fed peas to her boar
And always had junk on her door.


There once was a girl named Ilene
She always had everything clean
She always did care
She always was fair
And never ever was she mean.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Rebel Faery » Sun May 13, 2012 4:59 am

:lol:
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue May 15, 2012 6:36 pm

Ahhhhhhhh! Writers block!!!!!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue May 22, 2012 4:43 am

New characters means... new entry!

The funeral was short. We whispered words to Josie's dead body, and several cried. I know I did. But Cindy... Can you believe that Cindy was SMILING?! Oh well. She's always been strange.
We were passing through a forest, the last golden leaves falling around us. The truck stopped and we were let out to bury Josie. We dug a hole at the foot of an oak- Cindy, Aaron, Jess, Mum and me. Once it was deep enough, Dad nudged Jo into the hole, and she lay there, her half-open eyes staring back at us eerily. We scattered wildflowers and coins around her, like a queen. Then we covered the hole back up, and carved into the tree:
Buried at the foot of this tree lies Josie Kai Merryweather,
5th July 1996 - 14th December 2012.
May she rest in peace, and let her be forever remembered,
Even when Even though the world will never know.
We'll miss you, Jo.

Aaron also carved it into a large slab of stone,which he lay over the grave. We sat there a while, a bunch of flowers lain on the mound, the leaves falling about us, caught on the breeze.
Right, times up! Back into the truck. And here's a little snack.
The voice belonged to one of the guards. She looked like this:Image. Her eyes were kind, and she passed us a packet of bread rolls. Don't tell she whispered, passing them to me. My name's Sara.
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Postby star star. » Tue May 22, 2012 5:11 am

Oh great StarClan, this is AMAZING!





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Postby Rebel Faery » Tue May 22, 2012 5:59 pm

Thanks!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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