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Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

Postby Simon-Says » Fri Nov 04, 2011 1:04 pm

The first part of Alanar’s Quest
Ever Burn

Prologue

The four kingdoms chose loyal knights and met in a small clearing in the middle of the woods. The king of one of these kingdoms, Tretara, had brought with him another knight, one that he trusted, one that the other kingdoms disliked for his courage and strange ways. This strange knight was called Alanar. At the present moment he was leaning against the rough bark of a fat tree.
Alanar had deep emerald green eyes and a slim, but muscular body. The knight was around the age of twenty. His deep brown hair was a bit too long and covered his ears completely. To those who knew him the expressionless line that served as his mouth was something you’d have grown used to. The knight wore a thin tunic that had a golden sword, with a jeweled hilt on it. It told all that he was from Tretara. He wore a thick line of chain mail over the tan tunic. Slung across his back was a quiver of arrows that were feathered with the fire like feathers of a phoenix. Around his waist was a leather belt where he had a sword and a throwing dagger. He was skilled with a blade, but even more so with a bow and arrow.
In addition to fighting as a knight the art of healing came natural to Alanar. He had long since stopped treating those that were sick in Tretara though, for he had failed to save the life of a girl, named Kara, with whom he was in love. Kara had been a beautiful young lady. She had had long slightly curly black hair that flowed, like a river, over her slim shoulders. Her eyes had been a haunting, but stunning, golden, and her voice like that of an angel.
He was just close enough so that he could here the discussed topic going about between the four kingdoms. His own kingdom, Tretara, the neighboring kingdom to the north, Mondeer, the kingdom the south, Drenarra, and the kingdom to the far west, Linwil, had gathered to discuss a fire that seemed to never burn low; the Ever-Burning Fire. It burned through the heaviest rain storms, through the most blinding of blizzards.
Alanar wasn’t pleased when the three kings and queen looked about their soldiers and shook their heads in disapproval. Those were the knights they trusted, why wouldn’t they want them to destroy the fire? Tretara’s king, Thrain, looked to Alanar and spoke softly so the knight could not hear. The other two kings and queen turned to look at him as well. Thrain motioned for Alanar to join them.
With dread seeming to swallow him up, Alanar walked down the hill to join the kings and the queen. He bowed his head to them and said, “My lords, my lady.” His voice was rough, yet not unfriendly. His green eyes looked up once more, upon the respectful gesture of the kings and queen.
King Thrain said, his voice thick with defiance, “Even though all these knights here are loyal, strong, brave, and more then willing to go on this quest, we,” he gestured to himself, the other kings and the queen, “have decided that you, Lord Alanar of Tretara will be the knight to travel to where the Ever-Burning Fire resides. You are the one chosen to destroy this great caller of evil.”
Thrain was a bold, yet a wise king. He wore the same tunic as Alanar, and, like the knight, wore a thick plate of chain mail over his tan tunic. He wore a large belt that was home to his two swords and dagger. He never went anywhere without them, just as Alanar never went anywhere with out his bow and quiver of arrows. His eyes were hazel and kind looking. Yet behind that kindness there was a firm look that would be used if necessary. Thrain’s hair was curled at the edges and was a soft brown, now graying with age.
Those words hit Alanar with such despair that he almost turned round and walked away, but he knew better. Instead he dipped his head and declined politely, “I am deeply sorry to put an end to such thought, my liege. But I must tell you that I am not ready to journey anywhere, for the account of my last unfortunate adventure still lingers in my mind.” He spoke of his love, Kara, who had perished when he himself failed to heal her fatal wounds.
Tretara’s king shook his head, “You haven’t a choice, my friend.” The king’s deep hazel eyes locked with Alanar’s emerald green eyes. “You must do this, not just for Tretara, but for all the kingdoms.”
Alanar almost scowled, but he knew it would be unwise to do such a disrespectful gesture to the three great kings and the beautiful queen, including his own. Not wanting to appear dishonorable he heaved a huge sigh and said warily, “If you insist, my lord, I will do what you ask of me.” He didn’t want to, but Alanar had little choice.
Drenarra’s king, Cedric, looked Alanar over and spoke to Thrain, “Are you sure this young man is the right one?” The king’s eyes met Alanar and they seemed to say, ‘you’re the reason someone from my own kingdom can’t take this challenge.’
Cedric had broad muscular shoulders that showed his strength. He was tall and muscular. His voice was deep, yet had a sort of gentleness to it. His hair reached his chin and was a sandy brown. His beard was short and unevenly cut, as was his mustache. His eyes were deep with wisdom and were silvery blue. The crest that he wore on his black tunic was one of a white horse head.
“Of course,” said Thrain without the hesitation that would have spread for a period of time, had it been Alanar who had to answer. Alanar glanced at him, but the king saw nothing of the knight’s glance, for his gaze was locked with Cedric’s.
It was the queen of Mondeer, Annabelle, who answered bitterly, “You place too much trust in one person, King Thrain.” Her long black hair, tied in a neat braid, was resting on her shoulder as she sheltered it from the gentle breeze now blowing through the clearing.
Annabelle’s black hair that reached down to about the mid area of her back was tied in a braid, like it always was. Her amber eyes were fierce, but not unfriendly. Unlike Thrain, Alanar, and Cedric, whose castle crests where printed on tunics, Annabelle’s was on her beautiful flowing indigo dress. In the middle of the dress there was a white dragon standing on its back legs, breathing out fire.
Horace, the king that resided in Linwil, agreed with a shake of his head and a deep scowl sent in Alanar’s direction. The knight from Tretara ignored all the disrespectful gestures, hoping that he wasn’t scowling back without knowing it.
King Horace had a mean look to him. His pale green eyes were often set in a deep scowl, as they were now. His tunic was red with the crest of a silvery flame. His eyes hardly ever showed any emotion. If they did they were grim and gruff. Linwil’s king hardly ever smiled. That’s what made him so unlikable.
Thrain said, “No. Alanar is brave and strong. And he won’t be going alone.” When Alanar looked confused the king grinned, “The young apprentice-knight, Ronith is in need of a mentor. He’ll learn much from you, Alanar.”
Alanar was quite disappointed, and hoped that it didn’t show on his face, when he found he’d be traveling with an apprentice-knight, a squire. He guessed the young boy was loud and annoying. But he nodded and thanked the king.
Annabelle glared at Alanar. She said grouchily, “You hold the fate of us all in your hands, Alanar of Tretara.” She tossed the braid off her shoulder and studied Alanar, her eyes fierce, “We won’t react too strongly if we die because of you.” Then she whipped round and mounted her horse. The knight from Mondeer also jumped upon his mighty black steed and, with a final glare toward Alanar, spurred his horse away after his queen.
Cedric looked at Alanar and sighed, “We should not judge you before you even start your quest, I am sorry that we seem to have no faith in you.” The king nodded his head to Alanar and gave the knight a small smile.
Tretara’s knight shook his head. “No, you are right to not trust me. You do not know me like you know your own knights. There is no need for you to apologize,” Alanar said.
Drenarra’s king smiled and slapped Thrain on the back, “You picked the right knight my old friend!” King Cedric winked at Alanar, “Don’t even think of changing your mind, Thrain!”
At those words Thrain beamed. “Do not worry, Cedric. I wouldn’t change my mind even if my life depended on it.”
Alanar sighed, as Cedric shot him a grin and mounted his horse. He gave Alanar a wink and a swift nod, which Alanar returned, and trotted off, toward his castle. His knight grinned at Alanar and followed.
Horace looked uneasily at Alanar then bowed his head to the three Tretarians and swung up into his saddle. His knight mounted as well. Then the two soldiers from Linwil rode off.
Sir Will, the other knight of Tretara clapped Alanar on the back saying, “Congratulations, Alanar.” Will grinned.
Alanar said warily, “What couldn’t you have stepped up? I would have willingly handed the quest over to you.” Alanar’s deep green eyes were narrowed slightly in question. His brow was furrowed with a frown.
Will laughed. “Why do you think Thrain brought you here!?” When Alanar shrugged truthfully the younger knight went on, “He brought me because the other kings, queen and their knights know me. He brought you because you are brave and strong and the rightfully man to complete this quest. He brought you because not many know your name and that you are a better knight then me and the king himself. He knows that, so do I.” The younger knight’s brown eyes glowed.
Alanar took a step back. He shook his head, his voice shaking a little, “I don’t want this. I don’t want to be better then everyone. I want to be normal.”
Will smiled. He said gently, “But you aren’t normal. You proved that with your knowledge of healing and strength in swordsmanship.” When Alanar stared at him, Will said, “Come now, Alanar! We all know that you aren’t normal, now you need to find it out for yourself!”
The knight sighed. “Look Will, I can’t do this, it’ll just bring memories of Kara back to me. I don’t want to be filled with sadness anymore, and going on this quest won’t help at all.”
“You’ve always told us to believe in ourselves and do what has to be done no matter what happens,” said Will firmly. “Are you going to go against your own words because of someone who you loved died?”
“She died because I failed to heal her!”
“It doesn’t matter, she knows you tried and that’s all that matters.”
Alanar glared at the young knight. He said not a word.
“Think of what Kara would say if she still lived. She would want you to do this. Think of her, my friend. If you backed down what would she have done?” Will pushed on.
And Alanar did think about what Kara would have done. She would have made him change his mind someway or another. She would say something to him that would make him think, make him change his mind. He sighed and said, “She wouldn’t have slept ‘till I changed my mind and went.”
Will opened his mouth to say something more but Thrain interrupted, “My apologizes William, but we must return to Tretara.” The younger knight nodded and mounted his horse.
Alanar sighed and walked over to his own horse. The steed was brown with black mane and tail. The horse had been named Levitas, by Kara. Alanar would never change the horse’s name. He mounted the brown steed and trotted to where Will and Thrain were atop their own horses.
Will rode on ahead while Alanar stayed back with Thrain. The king was explaining, “As you may already know, the Ever-Burning Fire, which we have done countless studies on, is a caller of evil. If it continues to burn it will call great hosts of evil to the kingdoms. We can not let that happen, Alanar. That is why you are being sent to destroy it once and for all. But you can not do this alone. There is an elf queen to the west in a castle know as the Western Isles. If she gives you the information you seek you may have a chance to destroy the fire. Be weary though, for Tretara and her kind are not in good terms at the present time.” The king met Alanar’s eyes and said, warily, “I am sorry my friend, but this may be your death. And Ronith’s too. But remember this; if you fail in time we will all die.”
Alanar was astounded at the pressure that was now weighing him down. There was too much to worry about. He took a breath and asked, “How do I get to the Western Isles?”
Thrain said, pulling a map from his belt, “I marked out the path on here.” He pointed to a cave entrance, “Be careful here. It’s the entrance to the Caves of Darr. Not only is it old and could very well collapse, it’s filled with Walers.”
Walers were large lizard like creature that stood on their back legs, like humans. They had snake like tongues and narrowed yellow eyes. They were commonly green and always carried a bow, a quiver of arrows, and a flask of poison, to use against their most dread enemies. This poison was from their jagged canine teeth, and could burn through even the thickest of armor. Even though the poison came from them, the Walers’ bite is more dangerous then getting hit with one of their poisoned arrows. If you’re bitten you have less then an hour to live before the poison sets in. There is no cure to this deadly venom, which makes it all the more dangerous.
Alanar was suddenly filled with sadness and anger. When King Thrain was an adviser to the old king of Tretara, Alanar’s father had been the leading knight. The king had sent Thrain and Alanar’s father to the Caves of Darr to deal with the Walers. Only Thrain returned. In the caves they had fought against the Walers and Alanar’s father had been shot with an arrow and Thrain had left him, to save his own life. Despite the protests of his mind Alanar growled at his king, “Do you still remember that day you left my father to save yourself?”
Thrain turned his head to Alanar, his eyes glaring. “I did not leave him, I tried to save Ivan. He told me to leave him and save myself.”
“Lies!” snarled Alanar. “It’s all lies!” He knew he shouldn’t have spoken that way to the king of Tretara, but his anger was swallowing him whole, controlling him like a sorcerer’s spell.
Thrain snapped, “Alanar! I should have you thrown in the dungeons for your ignorance.” The king’s eyes were narrowed with anger, “But since you’re going on the quest soon, I’ll just say, when you get back there’ll be a place in the dungeon waiting for you.” Then with a final glare at Alanar the king galloped ahead.
Alanar sighed and silently cursed himself for being so stupid. He followed the king and his fellow knight slowly. Soon he reached the castle drawbridge and he crossed over it, with a nod to the guards stationed there.
The Tretara castle had large battlements that were guarded by a guard each. The moat that circled the fortress was filled as much as it could be without it spilling over the drawbridge. After crossing the bridge you entered a large courtyard that contained the stables to the far right. The nobility chambers were straight ahead and the servant chambers to the left. The armory was next to the stables. Outside the king’s chambers there was a large balcony that over looked the courtyard.
Alanar was just dismounting his horse and was about to take him to the stables when a boy, about twelve ran up. The boy had light brown hair that came down to his chin and had thoughtful blue eyes. His tonic was supposed to be tan but looked dark brown because of the dirt, and his hair was thick with the same dirt. Alanar was going to ignore the boy, but then the boy said, “Do you want me to take your horse to the stables?”
Alanar looked at the boy. “I’d rather do it myself, he knows me.” He walked to the stables, leading Levitas. The boy followed. Alanar ignored the boy as he took off the saddle and reins. He hung the reins and saddle outside the stall door and was about to go and get a brush when the boy asked, “Do you want me to get a brush for you?”
The knight looked at him, and raised an eyebrow, “Please.” The boy ran off to the tack room. He came back moments later with a brush, a comb, and a hoof pick. Alanar thanked him then went to work brushes the brown horse. When he was done he handed the tool back to the boy and thanked him once more. The boy sped away. Alanar rolled his eyes as he gaze the steed new food, and water. He knew that the servants mucked out the stalls but, Alanar did anyway.
When he was done looking after his horse, Alanar turned to the boy and asked, “Who are you?” The knight leaned against Levitas’ stall door and gazed at the boy.
“Ronith Iryn, sir,” replied the boy.
Alanar was taken aback. This was Ronith? Well apparently it was. Alanar had been wrong, the boy wasn’t loud, nor was he annoying. But he was so young. It didn’t seem right that a boy of twelve would be traveling with a knight on a perilous quest. The knight would have brought it to Thrain’s notice if the king wasn’t already mad at him. Doing such a thing might enrage the king even more. Alanar replied, “Well it’s a pleasure to meet you, Ronith. My name is Alanar.” Not waiting for the boy to reply Alanar went on, “Now hurry along and pack, we leave at sun-high.”

Chapter One


At sun-high Alanar met Ronith at the drawbridge. The young knight-to-be was bursting with excitement, and Alanar was beginning to think that the boy was going to be loud and annoying. It was Will, and not Thrain who came to see Alanar off. The younger knight said, “Good luck, my friend, I hope I see you again, some day.”
Alanar dipped his head, hoping the same thing. Then he looked back at the large castle, took a deep breath, and spurred his horse forward. With a cloud of despair, thickening with ever step his horse took, Alanar was beginning to wish he was not riding away with Ronith at his side.
The boy seemed to sense Alanar’s despair because he said, “Lord Alanar, are you alright? You look a little down.” Ronith’s voice was sincere and Alanar had to smile. He looked to the boy, who was regarding him with questioning eyes, and said:
“I haven’t been past the boarders of Tretara since my,” he thought for a moment, “friend, Kara, died.”
Ronith’s eyebrows soared, “Was this girl more then a friend?” Alanar’s head whipped to face the boy, who was grinning broadly.
Alanar made a face and said, “Since you asked, yes. Yes she was.”
Ronith laughed. His laugh was bright and happy. His eyes were shining, when he looked back to the knight. Alanar just rolled his eyes, which made the boy laugh again.
Alanar let his companion laugh, not really caring what the boy did, as long as he didn’t get himself killed. The knight had to admit that he was beginning to like the boy. Yes, he was loud, and could be a little annoying, but he was just that sort of person you liked no matter how annoying he or she was.
They rode in silence for the rest of the day.

When night fell upon them, the knight and the boy were sitting in front of a crackling fire. Fireflies danced around in the trees surrounding them and the horses light hooves could be heard as the two steeds pranced about. A soft rasp filled the air as Alanar sharpened his sword blade, while Ronith lay on his back looking at the stars.
“How far away do you think they are?” wondered the boy, his eyes never leaving the sky above them.
Alanar stopped sharpening and looked at the boy, bewildered. “How far away to I think what are?” he asked, for he hadn’t noticed Ronith’s gaze on the sky.
Ronith lifted his head and looked at the knight. He said, “The stars, how far away do you think they are?” His eyes were full of question, and were intently on Alanar.
The knight of Tretara sighed and put the sword and sharpener done. “I don’t know, many, many miles away I’d suppose.” He wasn’t really sure, and just gave the boy the most reasonable answer he could think of.
Ronith sighed too. He was about to reply when a stick cracked somewhere in the woods close by. Alanar stood slowly, his sword held in a defensive stance in front of him. Ronith opened his mouth to speak, but Alanar put a finger to his lips, gesturing to Ronith to be quiet. The boy shut his mouth.
Then a shadowy shape came out of the shadows of the trees, its green eyes seeming to glow in the faint light. The creature stepped out into the firelight and the two Tretarians could see that it was a dusty beige colored wolf. Its paws were white, and so was its muzzle. But its eyes were what entranced both the boy and knight. The wolf’s unique eyes flickered from Ronith, then to Alanar.
“Who are you?” asked Alanar. Then a memory came to him he questioned, “Quiro?”
The wolf pricked its ears and said, “You know my brother?”
Ronith’s eyes grew wide; obviously he hadn’t seen a talking wolf before.
Alanar replied, “Uh, yes. But you aren’t him?”
“No,” replied the dusty wolf. “I am Frojer.”
Ronith walked forward and ran his hand through the wolf’s wiring fur, with a grin forming on his lips. The wolf leaned in and licked Ronith’s hand, the boy laughed. “Can he come with us?”
Alanar shrugged, “If he wishes.”
Frojer looked to Ronith, “Young boy, to where do you travel?”
Ronith said, “We are going to the Field of Fire, to destroy the Ever-Burning fire.”
The wolf looked taken aback, “But why? You are so young….Did you, strong knight, demand he come with you?”
Ronith answered for Alanar, “No, no, it was not Alanar who told me to go, it was King Thrain of Tretara.”
Frojer’s gaze left Ronith to go the knight, “Ah, the son of Ivan Tretara. You are a legend among my kind. Stories are told of your bravery and healing powers.”
Alanar’s blood ran cold. He’d never known his father’s other name, now the wolf had spoken it. He stuttered, “My father was related to Brain Tretara, the first king of the kingdom?”
Frojer didn’t even looked shocked, “Your father was Brain’s brother’s son’s son. You, my friend, are the rightful king of Tretara. Thrain left your father in the Caves so that he could become king and Tretara’s reign would end.”
Alanar looked at the wolf, “You were there? You were there when Thrain left my father?” His hopes soared; he was going to learn the true story of his father’s death.
Frojer nodded and began his story, “It was nearly nightfall when the two knights reached the Caves. I, having been the guardian of the Caves, watched them as they entered torches ablaze. It was Ivan who spoke first, ‘Thrain, don’t you think we should wait until morning?’ They were wise words, and anyone sane would have agreed, but Thrain only shook his head, his eyes looking mischievous in the dim light of his torch, saying, ‘No, not at all, my friend, the Walers are more active at night.’ And that was the exact reason they should have waited until morning. They entered the main chamber, oblivious to me following them. Again Ivan spoke, ‘Thrain we should really turn around and wait until sun-high.’ Just as the words were out of his mouth the arrows started to rain down on them. One was heading right toward Thrain, and I watched, helpless, as the knight grabbed your father’s shoulders and shoved him in front of himself. Your father was struck with the arrow, and Thrain ran. I ran after him, and managed to get a hold on his leg. But the knight wanted to get out and was prepared to kill me, which was when I let go, not wanting Thrain to find out who I was. When he had left I ran back to your father. When he saw me he thought I was my brother. But I told him who I was and he said, ‘Frojer, I want you to protect my son, his name is Alanar. I want you to tell him who I was and the true story of what happened down here, the story that Thrain is likely to twist around.’ I agreed to what he asked, I lay by him, protecting him from the Walers as he drew his last breaths.”
Alanar felt a lump rise in his throat as he thought of his father’s horrid death. How could Thrain do such a thing just for power? He swallowed the rising lump as he sank to the ground, his legs unable to hold him any longer. He looked up at the wolf, his eyes blazing with anger, “Thrain shall die for what he did to my father.”
Frojer said, “Calm yourself, brave knight. In time you will get the revenge you seek, but not now. Now you must rest, for tomorrow you ride toward the Caves of Darr.”
Alanar realized then, how exhausted he was. He said, “I need to keep watch though.”
The wolf shook his head, “I will watch the campsite do not worry.”
Ronith lay his head down on his saddle bag and pulled his cloak around him. Alanar did the same, instantly falling asleep.

In the morning of the fallowing day, after a eating a light breakfast of rabbit, Alanar and Ronith continued their journey to the Western Isles, Frojer striding along with them.
The two horses, Kalgara and Levitas, stood side by side as their riders gazed down at the caves below them. Frojer stretched and yawned, “Well we don’t have all day, what are you two waiting for?”
Alanar made a face at the wolf and yawned. “We’re still recovering from being woken up at the crack of dawn.” Before the wolf could reply Alanar gave Levitas a slight kick and the horse trotted down the hill, Ronith’s horse, Kalgara, following with Frojer.
The caves loomed in front of them, the darkness threatening to swallow them up. The caves were old, as Thrain had said. It seemed like anything could bring the caves crashing down. The thought was even more frightening when they heard a rock hit the stone ground.
“We’re going in there?” said Ronith in disbelief. He eyes were locked on the entrance to the Caves of Darr. They were wide with fear and horror. Then he looked toward Alanar.
Alanar only nodded, also dreading what they had to do. As much as he wanted to get this quest over with as soon as possible he would have liked to take the long way, around the perimeter of the caves, but that would take an extra day, and in this mission time was vital.
The wolf at Ronith’s side, Frojer, commented, “If that place collapses, well I don’t want to be inside.” He spoke the obvious.
Alanar walked his horse forward, having dismounted, and into the caves. Ronith dismounted and followed, the pack horse and Frojer following closely behind.
Darkness swallowed them up and they were in complete darkness for the moments before Alanar got the torch to light. He held it high over his head as he gazed around the eerie tunnels before them. His gaze lingered on the wolf, “Well, you were the guardian, get us out of here.”
“My pleasure,” said the wolf, trotting forward, his tail swishing. Without hesitation Frojer turned to the right and went on forward, Alanar and Ronith had no other choice then to follow.
Soon enough they got to the main chamber. Frojer picked up his pace, saying, “Walers are close I can feel them.” And sure enough, moments after those words left his mouth torches were ablaze around them and close to a hundred Walers lifted their bows, arrows already strung.
“Run!” barked Frojer, leaping forward.
Alanar threw his dimly lit torch to the ground and pulled out his own bow. He strung an arrow and shut at the Walers. He’d shot about ten when he felt searing pain in his right side. Alanar cried out in pain, without realizing it. His hands lost their grip on the bow and he felt instantly weak. His legs couldn’t hold him, so he fell to the ground. He heard Ronith’s voice, but it sounded far off. The world spun and his eyes came in and out of focus. Then suddenly darkness invaded his vision and Alanar was unconscious before his head hit the ground.
Ronith whipped around when he heard Alanar’s cry of pain. He yelled out, “Alanar!” his voice almost being lost in the angry screams of the Walers. He ran to his friend’s side as the knight hit the ground, unconscious. “Levitas!” called the young boy and the horse trotted to his side. With a lot of difficulty Ronith got Alanar onto Levitas and smack the horse’s butt.
The brown stallion reared and bolted off toward Darr’s exit, followed closely by the pack horse and Kalgara.
Ronith was about to follow when Frojer tripped. The boy was horrified when he saw the two arrows pointing out of the wolf’s side. “Frojer!” the apprentice-knight yelped.
“Go!” cried the wolf. “Get out of here, our paths will cross again.” When Ronith hesitated, Frojer said, “Trust me!”
Ronith sighed and reluctantly ran toward the exit, dodging arrows all the way.

Chapter Two


It was the sun that woke him, and the searing pain that was killing his side. The knight wasn’t really sure what had happened. All he knew was that he was laying on his back on the grass, with the sun beating down on him. He looked next to him, and saw the bow made of rowan bark, with arrows tipped with phoenix feathers. After a moment of staring at it, Alanar remembered everything. He looked down at his side, the wound was seeping blood, but was nicely dressed. Alanar was pleased and wondered who could have done such a good job.
He looked up and saw the young knight-to-be, Ronith sitting alone on a large boulder. The wolf, Frojer, was no where to been seen. The knight spoke, “Ronith, where is Frojer?”
Ronith looked back, his eyes red with tears. He jumped to his feet when he saw Alanar’s gaze on him. He ran over and threw his arms around the knight. Alanar was surprised, but ended up hugging the boy back. When Ronith broke away he looked at the ground, “Frojer’s dead.”
To Ronith’s rage and disappointment, Alanar laughed. Ronith retorted, “It is not funny!” His glare burned into Alanar, his anger rolling off him in great waves.
“Excuse me, but I had to. Ronith, Frojer is not dead, he’s an immortal wolf.”
“How can you tell?”
“His eyes, didn’t you see how strangely colored they were?”
Ronith nodded thoughtfully and said, “But he was shot and he was hurt by the arrows.”
“Immortals are not immune to pain, my friend, they still feel it but their wounds heal within a matter of moments,” replied the knight, quoting what Quiro had told him years ago.
Ronith walked a few paces and turned, so his back was to Alanar. “I’d like to go back in and find Frojer, but I can’t allow you to go back in the way you are.”
Alanar came to his feet, with a wince, and walked to his friend’s side. “Frojer will be fine, trust me.”
Ronith nodded, but Alanar got the sense that his companion didn’t really believe that. Alanar sighed and bent to pick up his bow and quiver. His face twisted in pain and he straightened quickly. The pain ebbed away and he leaned over and grabbed his weapons before the pain could strike him again. He straightened again, and with a little pain, walked over to Levitas. He swung his leg over and pulled himself onto the horse, his face showing the pain he felt.
Ronith swung onto Kalgara, the sword on his belt clanging against his leg as he did so. The boy asked, “So now how are we going to get to the Western Isles without Frojer?”
Alanar sighed, “We’ll just have to try to follow Train’s map.” As he said the king’s name Alanar was filled with hate and anger. One of these days he’d go to Tretara and tell the king what he knew, and then his father’s killer would pay.
Ronith looked at Alanar and said, “I sense anger in your voice, it is toward the king, is it not?” when Alanar didn’t protest, Ronith went on, “Your anger is toward one more powerful then you, but yet that seems to have no meaning to you. Is that all you care about, revenge? I know it is hard for you to take, but you must think before you ride out to battle. My father would always tell me, ‘live today, fight tomorrow.’”
Alanar’s voice was quiet, “Then your father is a wise man, and it would do you good to listen to his words.” He paused, “Those words are wise for one so young, and you speak well beyond your age, my fried.” The corner of his mouth turned up, and Alanar gave the boy a small smile.
Ronith returned the smile. Then the boy gave his horse a slight kick to get it to move forward. Soon his black horse was trotting steadily, with Alanar on his brown steed beside him. The two friends, Alanar Tretara and Ronith Night, trotted their horses toward the Western Isles.

After hours of riding the sun finally began to set and Alanar and Ronith stopped for the night. After taking care of the horses the two sat by the fire, letting the flames warm them. They sat in silence, Ronith leafing through an old book, and Alanar staring into the crackling flames.
Suddenly the flames erupted and Alanar’s vision was blocked by a series of images: Thrain grabbing Ivan’s shoulders and pulling him in front of himself, Frojer jumping at Thrain, Ivan’s death, Frojer laying next to Alanar’s father, and then Alanar himself with Kara fighting the Walers, Kara’s death, he, Ronith, and Frojer running from the Walers, himself being hit with the arrow, Frojer falling - then he was being shook by Ronith. Alanar was on his back, he had fallen off the log, and Ronith was kneeling beside him, a look of concern on his face.
“Alanar, are you alright?” The boy’s voice was as thick with concern as his eyes were. There was also fear in the twelve year-old boy’s eyes.
Alanar swallowed, “What happened?” He sat up; his head feeling like it’d been kicked by a horse about fifty times.
Ronith frowned, uneasily, “You were just sitting there and all of a sudden you fell off the log and were withering in pain, it seemed. I should be the one asking you what happened.”
“I don’t know what happened,” stated the knight. When he received a blank look from Ronith he tried to explain, “I saw Thrain kill my father, Frojer jump at him, my father’s death and Frojer lying beside him. I saw you and I running through the caves with Frojer, I saw myself injured. I saw Kara and me fighting the Walers, and her death.”
Ronith’s eyebrows were rising, and he was looking at Alanar like he was crazy.
“Don’t look at me like that!” Alanar said, “I’m just telling you what happened!” When Ronith’s expression didn’t change Alanar looked away with a heavy sigh.
“It’s not that I don’t believe you, it’s that I don’t really know if I believe or not. And that I don’t know how you can see all that from staring into a fire. It’s just….strange,” said Ronith in a soft voice.
Alanar recalled Will’s words, and was starting to think that the younger knight was right, We all know that you aren’t normal, now you need to find it out for yourself! The words echoed in his head and he looked at the ground, thinking of what could possibly be wrong with him. He just wanted to be normal. But now he knew that he was far from that.
Ronith sighed and looked away. He didn’t know the words to say, although he wanted to say something, anything. He thought of what would make Alanar feel better. He thought of Kara, and said, “Kara wouldn’t care about this you know, I don’t care either.”
Alanar looked at him and a soft smile came to the knight’s grim face. Although the smile was sincere in didn’t reach the knight’s emerald eyes, they were still grave, and staring away into the night. At that moment Alanar wasn’t really there, his mind was somewhere else.
Again the boy sighed. He knew that Alanar disliked being like this, but Ronith didn’t know what to say because he didn’t know how his friend felt.
He had always felt cut off from everyone else, but now Alanar felt so far away, so nonhuman that it was almost unbearable. He closed his eyes and wished with all his heart that this was just a dream. But inside he knew that this was real and it was just as Will said, Alanar wasn’t normal, and he had to realize it. He’d always none he was different from the others, his natural gift of healing, and his strength when sword fighting, but he was just figuring out how different he really was.
What he’d seen in the fire made little sense to him. He was living things he’d already lived. He was being reminded of the things that hurt him, either physically or emotionally. From the death of his father, to Kara’s death, then to his own injury and to Frojer’s, he relived moments in his live he’d rather forget about. But now there was something other then sadness making those memories cling to Alanar. Something that the knight guessed had to do with the Ever-Burning fire.
Alanar put his head in his hand and shook his head, trying to clear his thoughts. It was a jumbled mess inside his head. There was too much for him to take in. He sighed and laid back. He closed his eyes and tried to clear his head. He just then realized how heavy his eyes felt. He reopened them and looked at Ronith, who should have been sitting beside him. He craned his head to the left and saw Ronith standing a little ways from the fire. The knight asked, “What are you doing?”
The boy didn’t turn, “Taking my watch.”
“Ronith, go sleep, you need the rest,” protested Alanar.
“So do you,” countered Ronith. “Get some rest and I’ll wake you at moon rise.”
Gratefully Alanar thanked the boy and laid his head back down, closing his eyes. He welcomed sleep as it swept over him.

Ronith woke Alanar at moon high, which seemed to have come too quickly. He sat up as the boy curled up next to him. Alanar took off his cloak and put it over the boy’s shoulders, and then with a yawn he staggered over to where Ronith had been standing earlier. The knight’s gaze swept through the trees around their campsite. He heard a twig crack and pulled out his sword in case of danger. A moment later a fox scurried away from the direction where the crack had come. Alanar sheathed his sword, guessing it was just the fox.
He sat down by the dieing fire and gazed into it, half thinking that images would erupt in front of his eyes again. But nothing happened and Alanar breathed a slight sigh of relief. But then great pain pulsed through his side and he nearly cried out. If he’d been standing he would have fallen to the ground for sure. He gasped as the pain grew a bit. He looked down at his wound and what he saw horrified him. The wound that had once been neatly dressed was now seeping yellow liquid and crimson blood. He knew it was infected.
The knight looked over at the sleeping Ronith, and wondered if he should tell the boy, but then though against it. He didn’t want to concern the boy. So for a moment the knight just sat there gasping in pain. But the pain would not lessen. The knight knew it should have ebbed away some time ago, but the pain would not go away.
Alanar stood up and his legs buckled. He tried again and walked unsteadily back to his post, wanting to make sure that nothing was going to happen to Ronith. But again the knight’s legs buckled and this time he tumbled down the hill and hit the ground, his breath stolen away. He lay there, getting his breath back. He was going to get up and walk back up, but he felt too weak. So he just lay there, not knowing what else to do.
Over time though, Alanar grew restless, and thought of what could happen if he didn’t get back to his post soon. So, with pain gnawing at his side, he clambered up the hill, falling to the ground when he got to the top, feeling weaker then before. Is this what dieing from poison feels like? The knight wondered, shuddering.
It was a quiet night, and Alanar was very grateful for that.

When the morning came and Ronith awoke, Alanar was sitting by the dead fire. The boy sat down next to him and asked, “Anything happen during the night?”
Again Alanar considered telling Ronith about the infection, but again decided against it. “No, nothing, it was a quiet night.” It was half the truth at least. When Ronith yawned, Alanar asked, “Did you sleep okay?”
The apprentice-knight nodded, “Yes, it was okay. So do you think we’ll reach the Western Isles today?”
Alanar thought it over and pulled out the map. They were close by a river, the Serpent River, so it looked like they had about five more miles to go. He nodded, “We might. Who knows though?” He shrugged his slightly muscular shoulders as Ronith yawned again. “Are you sure you got enough sleep?” Alanar asked his voice bewildered.
Ronith shrugged, “I thought,” another yawn, “I got enough. Sure doesn’t feel like it though.” He yawned again, and said, sleepily, “I think I’ll sleep for another hour, if that’s okay with you.” Without waiting for the knight’s reply the boy sank to the ground where he’d slept and was instantly asleep.
“Ronith?” said Alanar going over and shaking the boy’s shoulder. Ronith made no attempt to even open an eye. Alanar shook him again, “Ronith! Come on, wake up we have to get moving.”
“I’m too tired to do anything, go away,” the boy’s voice moaned.
Alanar instantly realized something was not right. A stick cracked and three knights clad in dark black armor stepped out of the trees. Alanar yelled, “Ronith, get up and run!”
The boy suddenly jumped up and saw the knights, his eyes grew wide and he cried, “No, you won’t last a minute on your own!”
“Get out of here, Ronith!” Alanar commanded.
The knights were marching forward their eyes blank, as though under some sort of spell. Then their eyes turned to a crimson color and seemed to erupt like a crackling fire. Ronith screamed in fear as the knight suddenly began to change. There was a flash and there, where the knights had once stood, stood three horrible grey dragons clad in the same black armor.
“Run!” yelled Alanar leaping upon Levitas, ignoring the pain. Ronith leaped onto the back of his horse and then without further hesitation the two Tretarians fled the campsite, pushing their steeds as fast as they could go.
They burst out of the trees at top speed and raced down the hill, the horses’ hooves tearing at the grass, sending lumps into the air. The dragons’ roars filled the air as the two riders made their escape. They didn’t slow their horses until they were sure that the three dragons weren’t still near.
When Alanar finally allowed his horse to slow to a stop his side was hurting so much that it was hard for him to stand it without wincing, and Ronith looked like he was going to fall over, he was so tired.
“Are you okay?” the two asked each other in unison.
Ronith was looking expectantly at Alanar so the knight answered first, “I think that cursed arrow wound is infected.
Ronith looked at him, a little fearfully, “You’re not going to die are you?”
“No! Well at least I don’t think I will,” replied the knight.
Looking a little frightened still, Ronith said, “I’m still tired, that’s not normal is it?”
“No,” the knight shook his head, “I’m afraid not.”
Ronith’s shoulders sagged and he looked at his horse’s mane, his eyes starting to close. Alanar slapped his back, and the boy jumped slightly. “Don’t fall asleep, just try and keep your eyes open.”
Ronith looked at him, “Sorry, but it’s hard not to fall asleep.”
“Just try.”
“I can barely,” a yawn cut his words off, “keep them open.”
“If I can stay up half the night with an infected wound, then you can keep your eyes open until we get to the Western Isles.”

It was near sunset when the two riders from Tretara reached the Western Isle castle. The castle was almost as large as the one in Tretara. Only it had fewer battlements and no moat circled the fortress. Untamed ivy grew up the great stone walls. Two elf guards were stationed at the castle opening, spears in hand.
Alanar was about to ride down when suddenly the pain hit him and he felt incredibly weak. Before he knew it he was falling from his saddle. But he was unconscious before he even hit the ground.
Ronith yelled out, fully awake. He gave his horse a kick and Kalgara reared and raced down the hill. Just before he got to the drawbridge he hopped off the steed and ran to the guards, saying, “My friend is hurt! Please you must help him!”
The guard on the right’s eyes narrowed and he growled, “You are from Tretara, I’ll give you a chance to get out of her before I call enforcements.”
“No, please! My friend may be dying! He needs to be healed!” Ronith cried in agony.
“What is going on here?” came a female voice from behind the guard.
The guard turned and bowed, “My lady.” When she waved her head he straightened and said, “This boy, from Tretara, claims that his friend is dying and needs help.”
The queen’s hair was black and fell on her shoulders perfectly. Her eyes of blue glass stared at Ronith, with a firmness that only a queen could have. Around her neck was a beautiful turquoise diamond on a polished silver chain. Her dress was deep indigo blue, with lighter indigo edges. Around her waist was a chain that hung loosely, around the band was small circle turquoise diamonds, identical to the one that hung around her neck.
Her eyes burned into Ronith when she said, “Why should I care if this other Tretarian dies? That’s one less we’ll have to deal with later. Give me a good reason and I’ll think about letting you both live.”
Ronith struggled, but finally managed to blurt out, “Alanar is braver then any of the other knights! He would lay down his life for those he cares about. He wants the king of Tretara dead!”
The queen looked at Ronith her eyes narrowing, “Why would a loyal knight want his king dead? Knights should be loyal and ready to die for their king.”
Ronith said, “The king is the reason Alanar’s father, Ivan, is dead! Alanar just wants to avenge his father’s dead.”
The elf queen stared at Ronith then waved her hand, “Take him and his friend to the dungeons.” She turned and walked away.
“No!” cried Ronith as one of the guards grabbed his arms and put them behind his back. The other guard walked toward the hill where Alanar lay unconscious on the ground.

It was dark. The only light was the dim torch light seeping into the room from under the door. Ronith sat, his arms tied behind his back, staring at the door, half expecting Queen Lontra to come in and let him and Alanar go. But the door didn’t open.
When it did it was about an hour later, and Ronith, who’d been lying uncomfortably on his side struggled to sit up. His hopes of it being Lontra dashed when he saw it was one of the guards stationed at the door, carrying a food tray. He put it in front of Ronith and untied the boy’s hands. He stood and watched the boy.
“Please,” pleaded Ronith, “help Alanar. We are trying to destroy the Ever-Burning fire!”
The guard stared at him, collected the tray and left. Ronith was left to puzzle in the darkness.
Moments late though, Queen Lontra swept into the cell and said, “King Thrain Wyllyam sent out riders to destroy the Fire?”
Ronith nodded.
“Do you know how to get there?”
“No, Thrain said you’d be able to help Alanar and I get there.”
Her blue eyes stared into him then shifted to Alanar. She sighed and turned to the guard, “Take the wounded one up to the healing chambers.”
“But my lady…” the guard began to protest.
“Now, Teritus,” said the queen her eyes glaring at him.
“Yes my lady,” Teritus bowed and moved forward.

Once Alanar was safe in the healing chambers Ronith was given his own chambers to rest in. After sleeping for the rest of the day and most of the next, Ronith woke and was wide awake. After eating the food that the servants of the queen had delivered Ronith paced his room, wondering when he’d be able to see Alanar again. But all after sun-high Ronith received no news of his friend’s condition.
It was nearly night fall when Ronith got what he’d been waiting for.
When it happened Ronith was looking out the large window in his room, looking out at the village below. He was about to retire to his bed when his door opened with a slight creak. Ronith stiffened and cursed himself for leaving his sword by his bed. He was about to whip around and face the intruder when a familiar voice spoke:
“They told me I’d find you here.”
Ronith whipped around and met Alanar’s eyes. He gave a cry of joy and ran to the knight, hugging his friend tightly. Alanar hugged his friend back, and was just releasing the boy when Lontra entered the room.
The queen’s voice was soft when she said, “You’ve been through a lot, Sir Alanar you must rest before you continue on your journey to the Field of Fire.”
Alanar turned to her and bowed his head. “I thank you, my lady.”
Lontra looked at Ronith and said, “I know you miss the wolf, but you must trust that he will find you again, and not travel on a suicide mission the caves”
But that was exactly what Ronith wanted to do.

Alanar awoke in the middle of the night to see Ronith slip out the door. With a feeling of dread Alanar got to his feet, retrieved his sword, bow and quiver, and followed the boy out of the room.
Ronith’s footsteps were almost silent as he walked down the corridors, Alanar’s were silent. Ronith passed the guards, so did Alanar. The knight followed the boy to the stables. He saddled and bridled Kalgara, Alanar didn’t dare. Once Ronith was clear of the stables Alanar got Levitas out of his stall and put a bridle on him then followed Ronith, bare back.
It was only then, when they were out in the open when Alanar made himself known to the boy. He galloping up beside Ronith and said, making the boy jump, “Ronith, I know what you are trying to do, but I won’t let you do this alone and unprepared.”
Ronith brightened a little, “You mean you’ll help me find Frojer?”
“Yes,” Alanar said, “but you must come back with me and wait until morning.”
Ronith sighed, “Alright fine.”
The next morning after leaving a note for Lontra, Alanar and Ronith left the castle and headed for the caves. Surprisingly they reached the caves before night fall. Ronith ran right in. Alanar had no choice but to follow, even though his heart was telling him they should wait until morning.
Ronith’s torch lit up the tunnels, and before long they reached the main tunnel. Alanar whipped around at the sound of a rock dropping. A voice broke through the silence. “Did you not believe me when I said our paths would cross again?”
Frojer stepped forward so that the light from the torch could reach him. His green eyes burned into Ronith as he cocked his head. His pelt showed no signs that he was ever injured.
Ronith hung his head, a little ashamed. “Sorry, Frojer.”
The wolf shook his ruff, “Well you’re both here now and that is all that matters, and that we have to get out of here.”
“Not so fast,” a voice stopped them.
Alanar whipped around his eyes blazing. “You!” he snarled, his eyes burning as he glared at the king of Tretara.
“It’s time for you to meet the same end as your father, Alanar Tretara. You and your little friends,” said Thrain his voice evil.
Alanar drew his sword and stepped in front of Ronith and Frojer. His voice was dark with hate, “You’ll hurt them over my dead body.”
“So be it,” said Thrain, with an evil grin. As soon as those words were out of his mouth the Walers lit their torches and stepped out of the shadows. Instantly arrows started to rain down upon the three Tretarians and the immortal wolf.
One was speeding toward Thrain and he grabbed Alanar’s shoulders and pulled him in front of him. Alanar knew he only had seconds until the arrow killed him. So with a shot of adrenaline he thrust his elbow back into Thrain’s stomach. Thrain pitched forward and Alanar fell to the ground. Thrain straightened and the arrow hit him.
As the king fell to the ground Alanar straightened, breathing hard. A feeling of guilt came over the knight even though he had avenged his father’s death. His head hung slightly, and his shoulders slouched. His guilt was overpowering.
“If you’re done, I’d say it’s time to return,” Frojer barked running toward the exit. Ronith looked back at Alanar before running after the wolf. With guilt still clawing at him, Alanar followed.

When Alanar and Ronith returned to the castle Lontra met them there. Her eyes were glaring. “You’re both fools, you could have died, and you,” her gaze swung to Alanar, “you should still be resting!” Then the queen whipped around and walked away.
“You two always end up making royally mad, what is it with you two?” Frojer asked with a shake of his head.
Ronith said, with mock hurt, “Hey! That is not true!”
Frojer looked over his furry shoulder, “Sure it’s not.” Then the wolf grinned and walked away.
“Not to happy you brought him back now, are you?” teased Alanar.
Ronith looked at him, thinking he was serious. But then he saw the knight’s smile and slapped his friend’s arm, “Quite it!”
Alanar grinned and followed Frojer and the queen. When he reached the room he was staying in Lontra was there. Her glare silenced any questions that the knight had. She spoke, “Why did you let that boy talk you into going back to the caves. Alanar, your wound wasn’t healed. Ronith should have never allowed you to.”
Alanar ignored her question and said, “King Thrain was there and he tried to kill me, the same way he did my father.”
Lontra sighed, “He’s dead isn’t he?”
Alanar nodded.
“Now you can take your rightful place as Tretara’s king.”
“What!? No!” said Alanar taking a step back.
Lontra sighed and said, “You are Brain Tretara’s heir, you’re the rightful king. When this quest is over you must take your seat in the great hall.”
Alanar shook his head, “I will not be king for all I care Will or Ronith can take it.”
“Ronith is too young, and Will is a brilliant knight, but is a great choose for your advisor,” said the queen She stared at him for a moment then added, “Ronith, when he gets old enough, could be your best knight.”
Alanar looked away, “I don’t want to be a king I’m content just being a knight.”
Lontra’s eyes were angry and she was just opening her mouth to reply when Ronith came in and plopped onto his bed. “Sorry,” the boy apologized, “did I interrupt your conversation?”
Alanar shook his head, “No we’re done here. I was just making sure that the queen here knows that she’s going to have to lead us to the Field of Fire. We’re clear on this aren’t we, Queen Lontra?”
Lontra nodded curtly, “Of course, Sir Alanar.” Then she spun around and walked from the room.
Ronith watched her go, “What’s gotten into her?”
Alanar sighed, “I made her mad when I told her I was content being a knight, and that I didn’t want to be Tretara’s king.”
“Well, I won’t be saying anything like that to her,” said Ronith nodding thoughtfully.
Frojer grinned wolfishly as he entered the room. “Someone hit the queen’s temper, and it has to be one of you two, because no one’s in the dungeons. So, which one of you upset our hostess?” He sat down and cocked his head, with a wild grin.
Alanar gave the wolf a fake glare and said, “If you must know ‘tis I who upset the queen.”
Frojer chuckled, “And how, noble lord, did you do this?”
Ronith chimed in, “He told her that he is content being a knight and doesn’t want to be a king.”
Frojer threw back his head and howled with laughter. Ronith too was laughing and Alanar was glaring at the two of them. Frojer managed to say, in-between laughs, “Nice going, Alanar! Now she might rethink taking the three of us to the Field of Fire!”
“That is not funny!” said Alanar.
Frojer nodded, “Oh yes it is!”
Ronith snickered, looking away so Alanar wouldn’t see his smile.
Alanar sighed and glared at the two of them. Then he realized what Frojer had said, “You’re coming with us?”
The wolf stopped laughing and turned his green-eyed gaze to Alanar and said, “Of course.”
Ronith grinned joyfully.
The knight too was filled with joy for he quite enjoyed having the wolf around.
The queen of the Western Isles castle kept her word though, and about seven sun rises after the day the three companions arrived at the castle she led them away from her home and toward the Field of Fire beyond the Dragonfire Mountain.




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Re: Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

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Re: Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

Postby Starthorn » Wed Feb 29, 2012 7:14 am

Very well done c:
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Re: Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

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Re: Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

Postby Simon-Says » Mon Apr 30, 2012 6:35 am

Thanks guys! You don't know how much that means to me!

Chapter Three


Ronith fell off his horse with a slight yelp. Alanar knew that the boy’s whole body ached from riding for so long, and the knight did not blame him. For, like Alanar, he hadn’t been raised as a knight. Ronith leaped to his feet, only to fall back down. Obviously his legs were too sore to hold him. He lay there for a long while, and for a moment Alanar thought that the boy was going to stay like that, but then he jumped back up and leaned against his horse. He called over when he saw Alanar watching him, “I’m okay!”
“Sure you are,” Alanar called back and received a glare. He chuckled and went back to trying to light the fire. Frojer sat by his side watching. When Alanar finally got a spark the lit up the tinder, Frojer let out a huge sigh that killed the small flame. Alanar glared at the wolf and said, “Why don’t you do something useful and go hunt for our dinner instead of destroying the fire that will keep us warm?”
Frojer yawned, “I don’t need to warm by the fire my fur is thick enough to keep out the cold breeze. And as of your dinner, you’re the one that has the bow and arrows.”
Alanar glared at the wolf and went back to making the fire. After a while of striking the two rocks he finally got a flame and this time Frojer did not kill it. Alanar fed the fire wood until it was roaring and crackling. The knight sat back and admired his work for a moment before he stood, retrieved his bow and quiver, walked toward the woods and called Frojer, “Come on Frojer, we’re going hunting.”

The two hunters walked through the woods, their footsteps silent. The wolf was in his hunting crouch and Alanar was stalking through the underbrush his bow loaded and ready. The hunters stopped as a deer shot from the underbrush. Frojer gave chase, his golden form streaking through the forest. Alanar ran after him, jumping over logs and ducking under branches. When he came to Frojer’s side the wolf and the deer on the ground, but true to his word he hadn’t bit it. Alanar pointed the bow at the deer and shot. He didn’t miss. The deer died instantly.
“Well,” said Frojer getting off the deer, “that was an entertaining hunt. Sometimes I have to chase them for miles, this one was boring compared to some Quiro and I have been on.”
“Just be lucky you have food for the night,” Alanar told him picking up the deer.
“Oh no,” said the wolf, “don’t think that I’m not grateful, because I am, it’s just that this was a boring hunt.”
“Whatever you say, Frojer, whatever you say,” the knight answered, with a roll of his eyes.
The wolf was still grinning when they returned to the camp. When they arrived Ronith, who’d been lying on his bed roll, looked up. “Did you two fight over it?”
Alanar glared, “We’re not children, Ronith.”
“You act like it sometimes,” said Lontra looking up from the fire.
Alanar turned his glare to her. “Still mad at me?” he observed.
She smirked, “Of course, now why don’t you take care of that deer before Ronith dies of hunger, he’s been complaining since you left.”
Alanar nodded, then went into the woods and took care of the deer, then he brought it back and sat in front of the fire to cook it. After a while he took it out and placed it on the ground so it could cool down a bit.
After it had cooled the four travelers had a nice small feast of the deer. Frojer was done in minutes, and looking ravenously at the rest of the deer. When the humans and the elf queen finished and wanted nothing more Alanar gave the rest to the wolf.
Long after Lontra had retired to her bed roll Alanar and Ronith were still up, sitting in front of the fire. Ronith opened his mouth to say something when Lontra stirred and dug through her bag. She pulled out a rolled up piece of parchment paper. She walked over, gave it to Alanar and said curtly, “Forgot I had this.” Then she went back and laid down on her bedroll.
Alanar, startled, unrolled the parchment. It was written in a hand he didn’t know. He read it to himself in a whisper. It said:

Alanar,

I know by the time you read this I will be dead. You will have never met me, and I regret going into Darr that day with Thrain. I knew that I shouldn’t have gone in, but I did. I should have waited. If he followed out with his word, Frojer Draganon would have told you the true story of how I died. I’d like you to know that even though I will never meet you that I will always love you and that no matter if you hate be or not, I will always be your father. No matter how much you disappoint others and yourself I will always be proud of you. Please give Frojer and your other friends my regards and that I know you will somehow destroy the Ever-Burning Fire. Just believe in yourself and do what you think is right. And it is not a crime if you do not want to be king. I’d understand.

Ivan Tretara

There were tears in Alanar’s eyes when he finished reading it and when Ronith asked to read it, the knight just passed it to him, not wanting to read it again. Frojer put his head on Alanar’s lap and whined. Alanar looked down at him and smiled through his tears.
Ronith handed it back and opened his mouth to say something, but Alanar shook his head, and the apprentice-knight closed his mouth.
“He was a brave man, Alanar,” said Frojer. “I wouldn’t say it if it wasn’t true. And if it makes you feel any better, you’re the spinning image of him. Only your hair color is different, that’s your mother’s. Ivan’s was sandy brown, but he had the same eyes, strange emerald green.”
Alanar nodded slightly, although he hardly listened to the wolf’s words for he was lost in his own thoughts. After a moment of silence Alanar asked, “Frojer, why me?”
Frojer cocked his head, “Huh?”
“Why did Thrain send me?”
The dusty wolf looked away, shielding his eyes from Alanar’s intent gaze. The wolf’s voice was soft when he said, “Alanar I hate to tell you this but I believe Thrain set this all up.”
Alanar’s head tilted slightly to the right, his gaze was questioning when he asked, “In what way?”
Frojer went on, “I believe the king somehow knew when you and Ronith would be going back to the Caves of Darr to find me. But how I haven’t a clue, as I believe no one can read the future.”
Alanar nodded thoughtfully, then Ronith chimed in, “But what if there was a way?” When he received an odd glance from Alanar and Frojer he continued, “What if there was a way to read the future? If there was some way to form an alliance with those who want to keep the Fire burning?”
Frojer looked thoughtful. He said, “That’s an interesting thought, Ronith. But that could be a possibility.”
Then Alanar asked a question that had been troubling him for some time, “Do those supporting the Ever-Burning Fire want Tretara’s reign to end?” The knight was dreading the immortal wolf’s reply, and braced himself for the answer.
“Alanar,” said Frojer his voice quiet, “I hate to say it, but yes. And I believe Thrain was one of those supporting the Fire.”
“Then why did he send Alanar and me to destroy it?” Ronith thought aloud.
“Because this is a suicide mission, he was guessing, and probably hoping that both of you would perish. He very well could have given this journey to Will or one of the other knights, but he chose you because of who your father was.”
Ronith took a deep breath, “When Alanar returns to Tretara, will those who supported Thrain want him dead too?”
“I doubt that. All the Tretarians are grateful for his knowledge in healing and won’t dare kick him out because he was the reason the false king died,” said a new, but familiar voice.
Alanar and his friends turned to look over their shoulders as Lontra walked out of the trees with Will at her side. Alanar, with a grin, got to his feet and walked over to his fellow knight, smacking him on the back.
Will grinned back and said, “I’m sorry about your father.”
Alanar sighed and looked away; “I can’t believe that the man I trusted, not only as a king, but as a mentor-”he cut off, because he’d told those around him that Thrain had once been his mentor.
“That evil man was your mentor?” Ronith asked, his voice strangled with disbelieve.
Alanar avoided the boy’s gaze, but nodded. He muttered, just loud enough for them to hear, “Unfortunately.”
Will stared at him, and even Frojer looked surprised. Lontra hung back, her glaring gaze burning into Alanar’s back. “How dare you ask for our help, how dare you say that your beloved mentor is dead. I don’t believe that story anymore, Sir Alanar Tretara.” Her voice was mocking and Alanar whipped around, anger exploding.
“How dare I?” raged Alanar, closing the distance between the two with three long strides, he glared at her. “You have no right to call me a liar, do you think I would want the man that murdered my father alive!? If you want proof then ask Frojer, ask Ronith! Ask Will, he must have gone through the Caves to get here. I don’t care that you hold a grudge against him, but to put it on me well you have no right to do so!”
Lontra stared back coldly, she stormed, “You have no right to talk to me, the Queen of the Western Isles as such!” She took a step back and slugged the Tretarian knight in the face. And with that, eyes narrowed in anger, an aura of rage rolling off her, and a glare that penetrated the knight, the elf queen whipped around and disappeared into the woods.
Alanar stared after her, his body almost shaking with the anger that consumed him. His cheek burned where the queen had hit him, but he paid it no mind, as he watched her stalk away into the dark. After a moment he whipped around and walked into the woods on the other side of the clearing.
“Alanar, wait!” he heard Ronith yell out to him, but the knight did not stop. He didn’t stop until he made it to a large tree. After a moment of surveying it he grabbed the lowest branch and swung onto it. Without a moment’s hesitation he scrambled up until he reached one of the top most branches. He laid his back against the rough bark and closed his eyes, arching his knees up in front of him, with his hands lying atop them.
The knight listened to the sounds around him, the soft rustle of the leaves, the slight whisper of the wind, the echo of memories inside his head, memories that seemed to beckon to him. With a soft sigh Alanar gave into the pull of his memories and let time take him back to the day in a small sunlit clearing with Kara.
The beautiful girl had gone to the rive r to fill their canteens, and Alanar was stuck trying to light a fire. He sat on a log and leaned over the fire pit, rubbing the sticks over a pile of tinder. When triumph came over him, and he had a small flickering flame was when Kara came back. He heard and was about to glance up and tell her that they’d be warm that night when, whoosh. The water in his own canteen rained down upon him. Alanar jumped to his feet, the water killing the small flame. Behind him, Kara snickered. The knight grabbed her water canteen from her hands and ran after her when she fled with a shriek of made up fear. With a grin Alanar chased after her and soon caught up, dumping the water over her. She gasped as the cold fingers ran over her, but then burst out laughing as she and Alanar trudged back to the campsite, both soaking wet.
Alanar’s thoughts were interrupted when Will came to stand beneath the tree. The younger knight said, “Alanar all of Linwil is dead.”
The Tretarian king was out of the tree in a moment. “What?” he asked his voice thick with disbelief.
Frojer, who stood beside Will, said, “The Fire is getting stronger.”
Alanar nodded his head, his eyes grave. “We don’t have much time.”
Frojer growled softly, “The queen better get out of her little anger mode, or we’ll all be dead before she can apologize.” He stalked away, probably irritated at both Alanar and Lontra.
Alanar sighed and stared, sadly, after the golden wolf. He let himself sink to the ground. He sat there, staring at the bushes where the wolf had disappeared into. Ronith sat beside him and the knight asked, “Ronith, who am I?”
Ronith said, defiantly, “You are Alanar Tretara, rightful king of Castle Tretara, and hero to us all.” The boy’s eyes were locked on Alanar and his voice was strong, bold sounding.
Alanar avoided the boy’s gaze, “How can I be a hero when I’ve already failed to save Linwil?”
“You can not always beat evil, but in the end light will outnumber the dark.”
“You speak like a true king, Ronith.”
“Me?” Ronith shook his head, “Those were the words my father said to me the day King Ivan’s death was announced, the day the Walers took over the Caves of Darr. I say them to you now to give you enough strength to go on, because I trust you, because I know you can do this. You aren’t alone, never forget that, Alanar. We’re all here for you – Me, Frojer, Will, Lontra – we won’t leave your side, not until the deed is done.”
Alanar raised his emerald green eyes to meet Ronith’s. “You would do that, for me?”
“Of course,” Ronith said without hesitation, “that’s what friends are for.”
“Ronith’s right, Alanar, that is what friends are for - to strengthen you when you’ve lost hope,” Will said, his voice gentle.
Alanar stood up and gave his friends a grim smile. “You’re both right, we have to stay strong if we’re to finish this.”
Ronith’s eyes gleamed, “Then what are we waiting for?”
Alanar looked at Ronith and replied, “We’ll leave at sun high, and ride toward the Field of Fire.”
With renewed strength the three friends walked back to camp.

When the sun was just peering over the horizon, Alanar and his friends were mounting their steeds. Lontra had been quiet all morning, and sent a few scowls in Alanar’s direction – he ignored them all.
Frojer was as happy as ever and he was trotting along beside Ronith’s brown steed, Kalgara. The wolf’s bright green eyes were filled with joy and he seemed happy to be moving again.
Ronith was chatting openly with Will, about what was not a concern to Alanar. He was silently hoping the younger knight was giving Ronith some sword fighting tips, the boy needed them. He guessed that wasn’t the subject though, because of the way Ronith laughed aloud at whatever Will had said. With a roll of his eyes, Alanar walked Levitas forward.
After about three hours of riding, Alanar trotted his horse down the slight hill and stared, in horror at what lay before them. The desert stretching before him seemed to disappear into the horizon. He knew it was at least a week’s ride, likely more, and what was worse; they were running low on water.
Ronith stopped beside him and gaped at the desert. “Don’t tell me that is what we have to cross.” The boy looked at Alanar, his eyes wide with horror.
Alanar said, his eyes glued to the desert, “I could tell you that,” Ronith brightened, “but then I’d be lying.” Ronith’s shoulders sagged and the bright light that had briefly entered his gaze dropped like a rock.
Lontra explained, “It is the Burning Desert.”
“And why,” asked Ronith, afraid to hear the answer, “is it called that?”
“Umm….” Lontra paused, a look over worry crossing over her glass blue eyes. “Geysers of burning hot steam shoot up in holes of the ground.”
“Oh, pleasant,” muttered Ronith.
Alanar urged Levitas on and soon the four travelers reached the starting of the Burning Desert. A huge decision lay before Alanar, weather or not to leave the horses behind. He couldn’t bare it if Levitas died because of the heat, but then again his friends would be weighed down with the equipment the horses carried. He sighed deeply and patted Levitas’s neck. “Will you be alright, boy?”
As if understanding the horse nickered a reply, and with another deep sigh Alanar urged the brown steed forward, hoping he wasn’t riding the poor beast to its death.
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Re: Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

Postby Betta132 » Mon May 21, 2012 3:55 am

YAAAAAAAAY YOU WROTE MORE AWESOME YAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

Postby Simon-Says » Mon May 21, 2012 3:58 am

:D Yuppers!
Some questions:
1) Who is your favorite character?
2) What is your favorite part so far?
3) What is your favorite line?
4) Who has the name that you like most?
5) Anything you want to say about the story?
Chapter Four

With the night came not only the cover of darkness, but cooler temperatures, that the travelers and their horses relished in. All of them would sit in the dark and just welcome the cold as it filled their tired aching bodies. When morning came again, they would all groan and by sun high they’d be sweating all over again, and would just dream of the night so many hours away.
“What are we going to do!?” Ronith cried in agony, from where he rode behind Alanar, as the last drops of water fell from his canteen to his parched mouth.
Alanar looked back, whipping the sweat from his brow, “We’ll find some source of water soon.” It was a promise, but both Alanar and the boy knew that that promise wasn’t likely to be kept.
Ronith opened his mouth to reply when there was a bang louder then anything the travelers had ever heard. His horse reared and Ronith, being an inexperienced rider, tumbled from Kalgara with a shriek.
Levitas screamed and reared, Alanar, being raised as a knight, handled his horse with a slight yank of his horse. He dismounted just as the steaming geyser shot up from the ground. Kalgara ran, terror in his eyes. Alanar ran to Ronith’s side and pulled him away from the burning steam.
Alanar called out to Levitas, who had fled with Kalgara, but the horse didn’t come to him like he would normally. Alanar sighed and looked at Ronith, who was staring, wide eyed in horror, at the spot where the geyser had once been. Frojer ran up beside them and asked:
“Are you both alright?”
Shaken, Alanar only managed to nod. Ronith was too horrified to even manage that. Alanar stood and helped Ronith to his feet. The knight looked back at Will and Lontra, who were calming their horses with soothing words. Alanar whistled and Levitas, uneasily, but obediently, trotted to his side. Alanar stroked Levitas’s sweat soaked neck and whispered soft words to his horse. He got a blanket from his pack and wiped the horse off; not caring that he’d used the last one he’d brought with him. He’d rather have his horse well and healthy then himself.
Ronith walked a ways and then gave a high pitched shriek.
Alanar looked up and ran to his friend’s side. In front of Ronith was a snake with legs, its tongue flicking out between its long fangs. Alanar pushed Ronith back and unsheathed his sword, pointing it at the creature.
The Margel lashed its rattle snake tail making the sound of a rattle. It stood up on its hind feet and lashed out at Alanar, who jumped back pushing Ronith with him. “Stay back!” the knight ordered.
The creature spoke its voice strangely human, “King Alanar Tretara, you’ve come to the Burning Dessssert, why?”
Alanar pointed the sword point at it and answer with a scowl, “How do you know my name? What do you want?”
The Margel laughed its laugh sly and wicked. “The Warler’ssssssss tell of you. They ssssssspeak of you, telling their cousssssinsssss that you are to be feared.” The snake like creature lunged forward, Alanar made a swipe with his sword and the snake’s head fell to the ground. The dirt began to move and thousands of snakes forced their way to the surface. “Run!” Alanar yelled.
The travelers wasted no time in mounting their horses. They galloped the horses through the army of snakes, knowing that, unlike Walers, Margel poison isn’t enough to kill you, only knock you out for a number of hours.
They slowed down only when they were sure the snakes were far behind them. Alanar dismounted and looked at his comrades. “Were any of you hurt?” he asked, concerned.
Will nodded toward Ronith, who was looking, at a burn on his arm. With horror Alanar remembered the geyser and how close Ronith had been to it. He quickly walked over and asked, turning his emerald gaze to Lontra, “Will he be okay?”
The elf queen looked up from where she was brushing her horse’s back, “It’s just a burn he’ll be fine, just put a wrap around it.” She tossed him the cloth.
Alanar caught it and ripped off some, wrapping it around Ronith’s arm. He tied it firmly and then threw the rest onto his pack. “We’ll stop for today, we all need to rest.” Without waiting for any of the others to protest he took off Levitas’s saddle and threw it to the ground. He took the blanket he’d used earlier and rubbed Levitas down, wishing he had water to cool the horse’s body down. The best he could do was pour some of the water from his canteen into his palm and put it out in front of the horse, which eagerly drank it.
The knight sighed and tossed the canteen to the ground, it was nearly empty and he wasn’t going to waste any on himself, no matter how dehydrated he was. After doing what he could for Levitas Alanar sank to the ground, lying on his back with his knees up, and his eyes closing. Although he knew he needed rest, he wouldn’t let sleep come, incase those Margels came back. He had to be ready to defend his friends.
Will and Lontra were soon sitting down as well; Ronith had sat down way before everyone else and was now staring at the ground, still in a state of shock. Will stood up and walked over to where Ronith was seated and sunk to the ground beside him. “You okay?” the younger knight asked, concerned.
Ronith lifted his head, his eyes gazing to some far away place. “Yeah,” his voice proved that he was elsewhere, “I’m fine.”
Will sighed. “Are you sure, that geyser seemed to have given you quite a scare?” The knight knew that Ronith wasn’t telling him the truth, anyone could have told. All the signs were there. His eyes were gazing past Will as though the knight wasn’t there and his voice sound audible and almost forced.
The boy seemed to snap out of it then. He looked around a little lost at first then it seemed to all come back to him and he repeated, his grin stopping the worry that was coursing through Will, “Yeah, I’m fine.”
Will smiled too, “Good, now get some rest, we have a big ride ahead of us.”
Ronith nodded and laid down, laying his cloak next to him. In moments the boy was asleep. Soon after, Will, too, retired to the ground to get some sleep. All the travelers got the rest they needed, even, as much as he tried to deny his exhaustion, Alanar.

The next morning, the whole group seemed revived. Lontra even apologized to Alanar for her rude behavior, and Alanar accepted it. Ronith and Will were joking around again, and one of those jokes included throwing a sand rock at Alanar’s shoulder. Ronith fell into fits of hysterical laughter, and Will just grinned. Alanar on the other hand, picked up another rock and threw it at Ronith, with a grin. Frojer had watched all that, with a grin.
Their high spirits crashed when the geysers started erupting again. Ronith could barely keep himself calm when the ear splitting boom split the still silence. Even Alanar, being an experienced rider, had a hard time calming Levitas, the same misfortunate situation was also settling on Will and Lontra’s shoulders. It took Ronith and Alanar to keep the young boy’s horse under control.
“It can’t go on like this,” said Lontra as another geyser boomed a few paces off and Alanar practically dove for Kalgara’s reins.
“What else can we do?” Alanar inquired from where he stood beside Kalgara, stroking the horse’s neck, his grip tightening on the reins as another thunderous boom shattered the peacefulness.
Lontra struggled for the control of Faroh. Only when she had slipped gracefully off the saddle and was standing beside her white stallion stroking its sweat stained neck did she reply with, “Travel only during the night.”
Will, who’d been rubbing his black steed, Reminin’s, body down with a cloth, took his gaze away from his horse and raised it to Alanar and Lontra. He spoke thoughtfully, “That does make some sense. The temperature won’t be as scorching. The only problem is that more sister creatures wait for the cover of night.”
Frojer looked up, his tongue lolling from his mouth, “Some of those creatures you never want to meet.”
Ronith glanced about worriedly, “I’ll never sleep again.”
Alanar rolled his eyes and sent a glare toward Frojer that, without a doubt, meant, ‘thanks a lot.’ Then the knight brought his gaze to Lontra and said, “There’s not much else we can do.”
The group traveled another mile before they found a space where the geysers weren’t active. After unsaddling their horses and setting out their bedrolls, the friends settled down and slept until the sun went down.

The sound woke them.
It was not the ear splitting sound of a geyser, but the bone chilling sound of a howl. A howl that did not come from Frojer, who awoke, fur bristling.
Will stood and looked uneasily at his friends, “Like I said, more sister creatures lurk in the dead of night.”
“Oh great,” moaned Ronith, his eyes shifting worriedly around. He got to his feet and hurriedly saddled Kalgara. In moments the boy was sitting atop his horse and gazing at his friends in away that all of them new meant, ‘Hurry up’.
Alanar rolled his eyes at the boy and saddled Levitas. The others also saddled their horses and Frojer prowled about, his head always snapping to attention when the howl came again.
Alanar trotted his horse forward, feeling the slight breeze sweep through them. They all relished in the coolness of the night. In the distance a geyser boomed, and Ronith tensed, the horses pranced nervously.
Lontra trotted up beside Alanar and asked, “What do you think is making that howling?”
It was Frojer who answered, “I believe is a Rel-Wolf.”
Ronith inquired, “A what!?”
“Rel-Wolves are born of darkness. They feed on its very existence, just as the Margels feed on the geyser’s warmth. They howl when someone or something is in their territory. They are very viscous. Fortunately, unlike Walers, they are not poisonous, but they don’t give up without a fight. That’s a bad thing. If you’re in their territory, you’d better hope you get out alive. Once they find your scent they won’t stop hunting you, not even once you leave their territory. They’ll follow you until you get to the base of the Dragon-Fire Mountains.”
Ronith gulped, “Great.”
Alanar looked back at Frojer, dread engulfing him. “You mean to say we’re in the middle of a Rel-Wolf’s territory?”
“Yes,” the wolf said, the words chilling the blood coursing through Alanar’s veins.
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Re: Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

Postby Betta132 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 5:20 pm

1) Ummmm......Ronith, right now.
2) I don't really have a favorite, it's all great!
3) One of my favorites is
Someone hit the queen’s temper, and it has to be one of you two, because no one’s in the dungeons.

4) I know it's a species, not an actual name, but I like Margel.
5) This is really good, and I think it should be published.
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Re: Ever Burn - Story (WIP)

Postby Simon-Says » Sat Jun 09, 2012 2:21 am

haha! I like that line too! xD And thanks!

Chapter Five

The Rel-Wolf howled again, long, blood-chilling, and mournful; its call dampening the spirits of the travelers; its very existence threatening their lives; its voice filling the air with dread, terror, and silence. The answering howl sending jolts of horror through their bodies, and making the wolf’s fur stand on end.
No one moved they hardly dared to breathe.
Ronith’s voice sounded loud in the still air, “What does that other call mean?” There was silence, Frojer offered no answer. “Frojer?”
The wolf hesitated then answered, “It means that this Rel-Wolf is not a single one, it means it’s one of the few that live in packs.”
Alanar turned to stare at the golden wolf, whose bright green eyes seemed bright in the darkness. The knight was filled with terror for his friends. He knew that Ronith wouldn’t be able to defend himself; he was horrible with a sword. Will and Lontra and Frojer would have more of a chance. The horses would flee, but he didn’t think the Rel-Wolves would chase them; it’d be much easier just to attack the travelers. “Frojer, do the Rel-Wolves like to attack something that’s running?”
The wolf looked up, “No. They aren’t very fast runners.”
“Then we’ll have a chance,” Alanar breathed a sigh of relief. He explained when he was greeted by blank stares, “If the Rel-Wolves aren’t fast then if we push our horses as fast they can go then we might be able to out run them and get out of their territory before they catch us. The hard part is going to be avoiding the geysers though, as we don’t know where they are, that is until it’s too late.”
That was that. The friends galloped across the desert, worry thick in their minds. Geyser’s thundered off in the distance, they’d been lucky, but that luck was soon to run out.
As they galloped across the barren landscape a geyser blew and this one was right in front of Will and Reminin. The black steed reared, his piercing whinny sent the others to a skidding halt. Will fell off and Reminin galloped into the night, his black form vanishing into the darkness.
Stunned silence settled upon them and it was broke by Will’s groan. Alanar leaped from Levitas’s saddle and ran to his friend’s side. The other knight’s face was twisted in pain and when Alanar offered to help him to his feet he shook his head with a grimace. Alanar, baffled, asked, “Why? What happened?”
Will replied, unable to keep the pain from entering his voice, “I do believe that I’ve broken my leg.”
Frojer barked, his voice worried, “This is a bad time to have a broken leg, my friend.”
Alanar glanced up and was unable to push his horror down when he saw the wolves, red-eyed and stalking toward them.
The Rel-Wolves had big clawed paws, which were covered with charcoal gray fur. Their eyes, red, burned into the travelers, their hate clear. They were slightly hunched and seemed to stand on their toes, causing their talons to scrap the ground. Their white tipped ears were flatten against their heads, and their tails lashed from side to side. Yellowed fangs were too long to fit into their mouth and hung out like saber-toothed tigers. Their teeth were bared and the hair on their ruff was raised in anger.
Will pushed Alanar away, saying, “Go, save yourselves!”
“No, not without you I won’t,” Alanar said firmly. “Ronith, get over here!” The boy hopped from his horse and nervously bounced over. “Get his other side,” Alanar ordered as he leaned in the loop his arm around Will’s right shoulder, Ronith did the same to his other side. Together the two Tretarians helped Will to his feet, hobble over to Levitas and get him on.
Keeping a close eye on the stalking wolves, slowly getting closer, Ronith swung onto Kalgara and Alanar got on behind Will. “Run!” Alanar yelled and Levitas sprang forward, Kalgara, and Faroh, with Lontra, followed. Frojer’s paws didn’t fail him as he ran beside Levitas, keeping the same pace as the horse.
Behind them, the Rel-Wolves, despite Frojer’s words, gave chase.
“Frojer!” shrieked Lontra, speaking the word Alanar had been about to.
The wolf’s pace never faltered. “I’m sorry to say that I haven’t a clue why they’re chasing us.” He calmly looked over his shoulder, and said simply, “Oh, look, it seems they’re gaining.” The wolf laughed at Ronith’s look of horror.
Alanar stole a glance over his shoulder and was startled when he found Frojer’s statement to be true. “Frojer? What do we do?” His voice sounded much calmer then he felt.
The wolf just grinned wickedly and whipped around a growl escaping from his bared teeth. He lunged, his mouth open. His sharp teeth closed around the Rel-Wolf’s leg, and he pulled. The Rel-wolf yelped and twisted around, Frojer was faster. His iron grip fastened around the wolf’s neck. In moments it was laying dead at his paws. The other wolf turned tail and fled. “Let’s go before it decides to come back,” said Frojer trotting up beside Alanar.
Alanar nodded and gave Levitas a slight kick. The steed trotted forward, his steps uncertain. Alanar reassured the horse with a gentle pat on the neck. Will groaned and Alanar looked back at Lontra, “We need to get help for him.”
Lontra nodded. She spoke the problem that they all faced, “How though? There are no villages around.”
Frojer spoke up, “What about my brother, Quiro? He travels with a dragon, Villincast.”
Alanar’s hopes soared, “How can we contact Quiro and Villincast?”
Frojer grinned wickedly and let out a loud howl, his voice carrying across the desert; it even seemed to silence the geysers in the distance. There was an answering reply, even louder then Frojer’s howl. Moments passed and nothing happened, but then, suddenly, a shadow fell upon the group. Alanar’s gaze traveled to the lighter red stomach of Villincast the dragon.
A surge of relief went through Alanar. He and Ronith helped Will off the horse and supported him while Frojer walked over to his brother’s side and grinned slyly, “You’re late.” Then the golden wolf tackled Quiro.
Quiro was a darker shade of Frojer’s golden color, a little dirtier color. His eyes were neon purple that had captivated Alanar when the two had first met. The other wolf, when Frojer had his brother trapped under his paws, said, “I didn’t know that there was a certain time of my arrival.”
Meanwhile, Lontra was in deep conversation with Villincast, who was watching her with a thoughtful gaze.
Villincast was a deep shade of maroon red. His scale, dulling with age, had long since stopped catching the sun’s glare. His eyes were blue, and the spine on his black was light red, just like his underbelly and neck. The spike on his tail was an orange red color, while his large deadly talons were grey.
In the end the dragon agreed to carry Will to a cave where a Healer called Malcolm lived. Quiro, being the navigator, had to accompany the dragon and the knight. After Frojer and Quiro had said a quick goodbye the dragon lifted into the air, his powerful wings stirring the dust, making the king and his fellow travelers cough. When the dragon was just a speck in the sky, Alanar and his friends set off toward the Dragonfire Mountains once more.
Alanar and his friends continued on until night fall. They looked for a place to stop for the night, but here the desert was a prime area for geysers, and they were exploding everywhere. In the end Alanar reined his horse to a stop and sighed. He turned in the saddle, wincing as his aching muscles cramped. “We may have to keep going all night, I’m afraid.”
Lontra sighed and road up beside him. Her hair was plastered to her back, grimy with sweat and sand. She looked back at Ronith, who looked about ready to fall off his horse. “We have to stop, Ronith needs to rest, and so do the horses.” Even as she said it, she knew that stopping here could endanger all their lives.
Frojer gazed at Ronith; he called up to Alanar and Lontra, “I do believe I remember Quiro telling me that there is an underground tunnel somewhere around here. I could try to find it, and then we could travel underground instead of up here. We’d have to leave the horses though.” When the last word left his mouth a hawk like cry split the air.
Alanar drew his sword and looked up at the dimly lit sky. He saw the bird and was amazed at the beautiful colors it’s feathers where. Unlike most hawks, which were plainly brown, this bird’s feathers were red, orange and yellow. It was the prettiest bird the king had ever seen.
The bird landed on Alanar’s shoulder and Lontra said, “It’s a phoenix. They’re very rare. When the fire that seems ever-burning was kindled the maker brought a hawk to the fire and watched as it gazed into the fire. He decided the see what would happen if he put the bird in the fire. The bird reacted strangely to the fire. Instead of struggling to get loose from the flames it sat still and let the fire make its way up its feathery body. Fascinated by the bird’s reaction he named them ‘phoenixes’, birds of the flames.
“He used these birds to protect the fire. However, the birds grew tired of his constant orders and they flew from the fire leaving it unguarded. He made the birds immortal from then on so they would burst into flames at the age of one thousand and then be born again in the ashes.
“This bird that we have before us was the first bird he ever used. She is far more special then any of the others. If you treat her well a bond will form between you and her. If you choose to name her, make it a special one. I can tell she is the first because of her coloring. Most phoenixes have black bodies with the red, orange yellow feather tints; she is albino, as you can see.”
Alanar, entranced racked his brain for a special name. After a moments thought, he came up with Firdrenn. The bird stretched its wings out and gave a soft chirp, gazing into Alanar’s eyes.
Ronith came up beside them, his eyes far away. “Can we go find that secret underground tunnel Frojer was talking about? So we can rest for the night!”
Lontra smiled at Ronith and looked to Alanar, the king nodded and they set off, carefully watching the ground for a door leading into a secret underground tunnel.

It was near day break when they finally found what they were looking for, all thanks to Ronith. The boy had gotten off his horse moments after they started looking for the tunnel opening. He tripped over something, which Alanar walked over to investigate. He had pulled open the heavy metal door with Lontra and Ronith’s help. A stone fell when they opened and for a moment nothing happened. Then they heard the distance sound of the stone hitting the bottom. Alanar looked at Frojer with raised eye brows.
“I didn’t know it was that far down!” protested Frojer, his bushy tail sweeping across the sandy ground, looking quite wounded.
Ronith looked terribly frightened as he peered into the darkness of the opening, “I am not going down there!” His voice quivered a little, and his unhappy eyes darted form Alanar to Frojer, then to Lontra. Then back to Alanar.
Alanar sighed, “There’s a cold breeze coming from down there, don’t you all feel it. The cold would do us good, don’t you think?” The knight wiped the sweat off his forehead with the back of his right hand and swallowed the pain that had never quite stopped burning in his side; the side where he’d been struck with the arrow.
Ronith sighed and mumbled, “I guess.”
Alanar said, “Then let’s go.” He stepped down onto the first ledge and then descended down. When he was lost from sight, he called up, “Coming?”
Frojer watched wordlessly as Lontra went down, followed by Ronith. His golden pelt was glowing slightly as the sun hit against it. It warmed the wolf’s body, but not his heart. His mind was filled with the same sorrow Alanar had. Frojer had a secret; a secret that could get him captured by his kind. Frojer would give anything, anything at all, to be a mortal wolf. It would be going against everything his kind believed in, but that was what the golden wolf wanted above all else. He hated being immortal, no he loathed it.
There was still one question that had been bugging Frojer ever since he found out the way to become mortal. To do so, a life had to be given; the gift of immortality wasn’t a high enough payment. Would Frojer be willing to sacrifice one of his friends for a mortal life? The answer: yes.

Unaware of the thoughts in Frojer’s head, Alanar descended down into the tunnel, the cool air washing over him. The king welcomed the cool hands like an old friend as they wrapped themselves around him and his friends. The heat of the desert was behind them, the cold of the tunnels was welcoming them with open arms, into which all three of them stepped willing into.
Ronith called down for the hundredth time, “How much farther?” Before Alanar opened his mouth Ronith dislocated a small rock, which plummeted down, hitting Alanar on the head.
Alanar looked up, his eyes narrowed. “What was that for? Just because I didn’t answer your question soon enough you start dropping rocks on me?” His voice had a playful tone to it, letting Ronith know that he was not angry.
Ronith said, defending himself, “I didn’t do it on purpose!” His eyes narrowed in a glare and the corners of his mouth rose in a slight smile at Alanar’s added words.
What seemed like hours alter the friends reached the bottom of the ladder. Alanar turned to Ronith as the boy lit two torches, he kept one, ten handed the other one to Alanar. “Which way do we go, Alanar?”
Alanar looked at Ronith and said, speaking to Firdrenn, the bird on his shoulder, “Which way, Firdrenn?” The bird stretched her beautiful golden, red, and orange wings and her fiery form, illuminated by the torch light, swooped the right and the group padded after her.

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~Two Weeks Earlier~

His gaze swept around the Field of Darr, his eyes peeled for any sign of movement. The wooden long bow tensed in his hand as he saw a man exit the Caves of Darr, bedraggled and obviously beaten by the looks of him. He was itching to the arrow spring from the weapon he held, but something stopped him; something that told him to go down and talk to that man, but his feet was rooted to the stop. His deep blue eyes were locked on the figure of the man, and his hand fell from the arrow and to the pouch at his belt.
The man unslung the arrow and slipped it back into the quiver at his back and slung the bow around his shoulder. It gently tapped against his back as he jogged down the hill toward the man, whose side was pierced by an arrow.
His name was Kalarran. His hair was a soft dusty blonde color and came down to about his neck and covered his ears. He always said he was going to cut it, but never really got around to it. He wore nothing but a grey tunic and a silvery cloak, speckled with dirt and mud. There were two daggers, siding adjacent to each other in the leather belt he wore around his waist. On his back there was a knapsack that had everything he needed inside it, food, canteen of water, a sharpener for the daggers, and the note he’d found in his mother’s home. It read:
Ivan, please don’t go to the Caves with Thrain. I don’t trust him, you know I don’t. If you must go take Richard with you, please I am begging you! Please don’t leave me before your sons are born!
Thrain had been the king of Tretara, the kingdom Kalarran had been born in. Kalarran was the son of Ivan and Trenlin Tretara, and he was on his way trying to find his brother, whoever he may be. Trenlin had been the healer of a village called Tera when she became mute. Kalarran knew very little of his parents, only that they were both dead. Ivan had died saving Thrain from an arrow, as everyone said, but then a truth had been uncovered by a strange man called Alanar, that Thrain had pulled Ivan in front of him when an arrow had been coming for Thrain. Kalarran didn’t know whether to believe those rumors about this Alanar, he seemed a little too I’m-your-hero-in-these-dark-times kind of guy and nothing irritated Kalarran more than those kind of people who thought they were better than everyone else.
Kalarran jogged up to the man and froze, he wore the crest of Tretara, and his hair was dark brown and had emerald green eyes. He looked up at Kalarran and the twenty year-old traveler whispered, struck with confusion and amazement, “Father?”
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Postby Simon-Says » Sun Jun 10, 2012 5:11 am

Personally I think my favorite character of this story is Kalarran. Yeah he's kind of arrogant and is a little full of himself but he's....oh how do i put this, he's got that kind of sense that he could be so much greater then he seems. He may put on a facade of coldness and all that, but deep inside he's got a kind heart even if in the beginning he hates his brother as he thinks he's the "I'm-your-hero-in-these-dark-times" kind of guy. But Kalar I think all he needs for him to open up is a girl! lol -hint hint-
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