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What do you think of Suzi's backstory on page 15? NOTE: READ ENTRY ON PAGE 15 BEFORE ANSWERING!

Poor Suzi, she's had a hard life.
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4%
I don't even know how Suzi went through all of that. It must have been so difficult for her.
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12%
I think I feel slightly sorry for Suzi.... BUT ONLY SLIGHTLY!
1
4%
I feel so sorry for Suzi.
1
4%
I think I sorta like Suzi now....
4
16%
Still hate her the same.
1
4%
She is still E.V.I.L.!
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No votes
So Suzi has scars.... so what?!
4
16%
She still needs anger management.
4
16%
SHE IS WACKO! How was Amy supposed to save her?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?!
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Total votes : 25

Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue May 08, 2012 8:01 am

Rebel Faery wrote:I command you to write more! If you don't...  <-- I WILL whack you with that purse!

XD
xxazul63xx wrote:Moreth moreth moreth I giveth youeth a museth cupcaketh so youeth caneth thinketh of moreth ideaseth
(Trasnlation: more more more, i give you a muse cupcake so you can think of more ideas)

XD I think it worked. XD GOT IDEAS!

Okay, since you guys are waiting, here's a new entry.... from a different viewpoint:
















Ya, I went back in time. What's that? Oh. Right. I was formerly known as "Jenette". I guess I'll keep that name, since it sounds sorta cool. Moving on, I missed Amy way too much. And she wouldn't believe me when I told her why I had left. I couldn't have told her. It would have ruined her mission. She wouldn't have been able to concentrate, and she would have rebelled. You still probably have no idea what I'm talking about. Well, firstly, you are probably wondering HOW I'm writing in Amy's journal. Well, the thing is, I went back in time to look at Amy once more, and saw her journal beside her. And so I was like, hey, why not write an entry for Amy?. But the thing is, this entry will not appear in Amy's journal (which I see she had named Bob... very original, Amy [/endsarcasticness]) until I decide she can look at it. Which will practically be never. So I could write down all my life's secrets. Or I could write down one of them. I'm sure you are all anxious to see why I left (and if you aren't, you're gonna be sorry). Well, the truth is..... why can't I say it? I'M WRITING IN A JOURNAL AND I CAN'T GET THE TRUTH OUT! Man, I've stooped so low! Alright, let me try it again..... the truth is.... is.... you see, at the end of time when Amy is saving the world, I will return. Ya, I know I told her we would never meet again, but that was necessary. If I had told her we would meet again, she wouldn't be able to concentrate on her training. Anyway, on with why I left. I will return when Amy is saving the world. But you see, in order for Amy to save the world, I have to give up my powers as the Keeper Of History. Which means that all the years that I have been alive shall be taken from me, and I shall be ash. But you don't understand. It is hard going through the years and seeing people die. I had to live through my parents dying, my people dying. I have lived through that too long. I am ready. And also, when I give up my powers, Amy will get them (luckily I won't be here to see it all go downhill), making her able to save the world. "Why can't you just save the world?" you might ask. Good question. IT'S NOT MY FATE! Amy has always been the prophecied one. I have not been. I am supposed to HELP Amy save the world, not save the world myself. I have been to the future. I have seen what would happen if I were to save the world. It is dark. Everything is destroyed. I can't tell you why, since that kind of information is exclusive. And then I saw what it would be like if Amy were to save the world. Everything would be at peace. Now, Amy is awakening, and I must put her journal back and go back in time. But now you know why I left. And what I must do. And no one can stop me.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Tue May 08, 2012 8:58 am

JEANETTE IS GONNA DIE! (well turn into ash BUT ITS THE SAME THING) why!
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue May 08, 2012 2:19 pm

xxazul63xx wrote:JEANETTE IS GONNA DIE! (well turn into ash BUT ITS THE SAME THING) why!

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:*Ahem* If I may..... ALL WILL MAKE SENSE AT THE END!!!

*Smiles* Tu-dah!! XDXD

Anyways, dunno why..... BUT I AM NOW WRITING 2 ENTRIES IN ONE DAY! Here is next entry:
















Alright, fine. As soon as I had finished fighting Gish, I fell fast asleep. So what? Not like anything important happened while I was asleep. Although it looked like Bob was in the wrong place... hmm.... OMW! GISH LOOKED AT MY JOURNAL! Uno secondo. I shall go and whack her with Bob.
....
FWACK!!!!!!!!
OUCH!
Oops. Gish had been sleeping. But she still deserved it!
WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!
Man, she is NOT a morning person.... I mean goat... I mean rabbit.... I mean Raboa!
You looked at Bob!
What?!
My journal! You looked in him.
..... so now journals have a gender? Who made that decision?
Yup. Deffinately not a morning Raboa.
Uh.... umm..... guess I did?
Raboa snarled. And not just a snarl, I mean it was a throaty growl-ish snarl. It sounded almost.... evil. I was getting nervous about Gish. And when I get nervous.... it's not good.
I REEEEEEALLY LIKE PIE!
Ya. I blurt things out. I sorta sound like Flower.
I LIKE CHEESE AND HAM AND BACON! I ONCE HAD A STUFFED BACON NAMED BACON EXCEPT I ATE HIM ONE DAY! STUFFED BACON DOESN'T TASTE GOOD, NO IT DOESN'T. IT'S ACTUALLY SORT OF RUBBERY AND-
What are you TALKING about?!
I-I-I-I-I-I-I-
Ya know what, let's just train before you blurt out things again.
Man, Gish was mean.












Hey guys, if you're looking for a really cool artist/band/thingy, try Youtubeing "ThePianoGuys". Listening to their Pirates Of The Caribbean thing and Star Wars thingy.

Here is the stuffed bacon Amy was talking about: http://www.amazon.com/Bacon-My-First/dp ... 580&sr=8-2

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue May 08, 2012 6:04 pm

Yay, more!!!

And WRITE more!!!

Poor Jenette. Too awesome to die...
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TheOneDirectioner » Wed May 09, 2012 11:52 am

i've never heard anyone say youtubeing...I guess they arent awesome enough!
I used to be TheHungerGamer, then I changed it...k bai

The Truth wrote:
I guess Gale's cool, but Peeta's THE BOY WIT THE BREAD


Yea, you can't say The Truth is wrong.

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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Wed May 09, 2012 12:11 pm

Bunny goat gish dude is creepy, and he looks tasty >:D Imma gonna eat him!
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed May 09, 2012 1:33 pm

Rebel Faery wrote:Yay, more!!!

And WRITE more!!!

Poor Jenette. Too awesome to die...

Shall write more later.
TheHungerGamer wrote:i've never heard anyone say youtubeing...I guess they arent awesome enough!

Yush, I is only one who has said it. FEAR ME!! XD
xxazul63xx wrote:Bunny goat gish dude is creepy, and he looks tasty >:D Imma gonna eat him!

That "he" is a she... XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Thu May 10, 2012 4:14 am

Ok, I'll wait. The purse is still here, JF...
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri May 11, 2012 9:10 am

Rebel Faery wrote:Ok, I'll wait. The purse is still here, JF...

Uh-oh.... YOU DARE THREATEN ME WITH A PURSE?! ..... scary BUT I SHALL WRITE MORE!
























As it turns out, Raboa's have great strength. BUT THEY ARE NOT AS AWESOME AS I! HAHAHAHAHA!! ..... I'm not good at the evil laugh BUT ANYWAY! Moving on. So... um.... let's put it this way: I will no longer be fighting Gish.
I KICKED YOUR BUTT!
no need to rub it in.
Too late. Gish was already dancing around the cave and singing.
Oh ya, I kicked your butt. Oh ya, I kicked your butt. You're supposed to save the world, but oh I kicked your butt! Oh ya!
I narrowed my eyes.
OH! I SO kicked your BUTT! OHOHOOOOOH!
Anger boiled inside of me.
Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh uh-huh!
I lunged at Gish (for some weird reason). I knocked her to the ground and she immediately went into attack mode and lunged at me right back. We rolled on the ground and fought. But there was some sort of new power in me. I felt stronger, better. I kicked her off me and she fell to the ground, wheezing. I had knocked the wind out of her. I stood above her in conquer. She slowly stood up and looked at me.
You are stronger.
I was, wasn't I? It seemed like I was getting stronger and stronger every day! I don't know how, though.
I guess I-
Suddenly, there was a loud poof, making me jump.
AGH!
Hello, Amy. How are you?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri May 11, 2012 9:20 am

OH NO! PURPLE FONT! you know what that means......................... THE MARTIANS ARE COMING!!!!!!!!!
My fursona Renna: No silly, it means that Suzy is here....
Oh..................... SUZI IS HERE!
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