Ǥαℓɛ+Ƙαтиιƨƨ Ғσяɛʌɛя wrote:Carterxxx
{The Girl xxx The Boy}
{Gorgeous Unpopular Girl xxx Popular Jerk}
{Carter xxx Beck}
A smile flickers across my face as I sit at lunch alone, again. No, I'm not smiling at the fact that I'm alone, I'm smiling because he is sitting one table over. I quickly wipe my stupid grin off my face when his black hair whips around as one of his block-headed buddies pointed me out. I look down and start picking at my food, secretly glancing up at his face. His perfect black hair laid over his swirling gold eyes, that were perfectly complemented by his caramel skin. Our eyes meet for a moment, and I smile sheepishly as he rolls his eyes and gives me a dirty look before turning back to his food. Soon he is standing, and I wait for the rest of his friends stand too, but they never do. They all seem to be sniggering as he turns around. I notice the one detail that not many others would, a quick flicker of annoyance crosses his face before he replaces it with one of his angelic smiles. My heart starts beating more quickly as I realize it was at me, he had smiled at me. While my brain tries to process this, he strides over and sits right across from me. I grin stupidly as I try to take in his features, Excuse me miss, but my friends and I couldn't help but notice you looking at me earlier, so I'll just come out and say this, do you like me? I looked at him and nodded slowly. He smiled again, Well then, what is your name, pretty miss? I blush and mutter, "Carter." He smiles at me again, What a beautiful name, he says before holding out his hand. I realize I am supposed to take it and clasp it tightly. He helps me up and picks up my bag for me, slinging it over his shoulder with ease. He smiles down at me an together we walk out of the cafeteria. This moment would be perfect if I could just get rid of the feeling that was telling me, no yelling at me, saying that this wasn't going to end well.~~~
Okay so I may continue this, but how does it sound so far, I am trying to improve my writing, so please be honest.
Continued
Carter
I couldn't have been happier my arm linked in his, as we sat under the big oak tree in the middle of school. By then my instinct had started to fade, or I had gotten used to it, either way, I was here, with Beck, and I was loving it. I sat curled up next to him, and he said, You are a gorgeous creature Carter, but I feel like I don't know you... Tell me everything. So I do, "I have liked you forever, well really since first grade when we were in the same class. Everyone worshipped you, it was like you were king or something, I smile remembering that year. I continue, "Anyways, I love the color maroon, I don't really have any friends, my older brother is really my only friend, your friends scare me, and I have been wishing you'd notice me for a while now," I finish with a tiny hint of red burning on my cheeks. I look at him, and then nervously around to see if any of the popular girls are near by. I slowly start to relax more, and he begins to stroke my hair, when a question pops into my mind, before I can stop myself it rolls off my tongue, "Don't you have a girlfriend?" I watch him closely and for a second his eyes get a distant look in them and he says, No, we just broke up. "Sorry," I mutter and continue watching some point in the distance. He turns me around, and before I can say anything, he leans in and kisses me. I kiss him back hungrily, as his warm lips press against mine, as my eyes flutter closed I catch a glimpse of the Queen of the populars, Kylie, Beck's old girlfriend, as her head disappears around the corner of a building, a smug grin all over her face. Suddenly, like a punch in the gut, that terrible feeling returns.
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Sorry, all I can write for now, will try again tomorrow...