Under Grey Skies,All Will Fail. |SemiLit To Advanced| |Open|

[~Neko Ears~]

(thunder was the last horse in shadow's stables for now.)
shadow smirked, her blade at the faceless' throat.

OK,I have to tell you a few things. Not to be mean but requirements. First,you're character(Shadow). I have noticed that Shadow is near perfect. Like fighting,Shadow barely got touched. No one is perfect,that kinda bothers a few of us. Including me,that's God Modelling. Also,I expect you to try and type more,these short post I thought it was only a faze but it continued. Please do these,or I will have to boot you from the Role Play. I don't want to have to but please fix these issues.

[Kornelia]

(alright, i'm really sorry, i will try.)

[Kornelia]

shadow smirked, backing away abit. she panted abit, a gash going down her arm.
(is this ok?)

[Kornelia]

[is it ok?]

[~Neko Ears~]

shadow smirked, backing away abit. she panted abit, a gash going down her arm.
(is this ok?)

Sorta,but something like this. Shadow smirked wickedly though it quickly faded when she looked down at her arm and saw a bloody mess. The rush of the whole fight had got to her,she hadn't noticed the painful wound until now. She began to pant as the pain increased,wishing she had never found out she had it she gripped it hoping to stop the bleeding though was failing she began to grow visible weak from the blood lose. She dropped her blade as she glared up at the Faceless.

(Also. About the Horses. Lol if Shadow is a horse stable owner/worker. They can't not have horses ^__^")

[Rosalin_Thorn]

Dimitri pouted at Victor aw your so meeeeean he whined as Rosalin scooted farther back against her bed, she really didn't want to have anything to do with these Faceless. She then looked at both of the and muttered out R-Rosalin..m-my name's Rosalin... she looked down at her lap as Dimitri let out a soft chuckle. Awwww that's such a cute name don't cha think so Victor he teased noticing the Shyness behind the other faceless voice.

[Quit cs]

Victor glared at Dimitri. "Just leave her alone Dimitri." He turned to Rosalin. "Sorry about that..." he held out his hand so she could follow him. He knew she was scared of him, but who could blame her? "C'mon Rosalin..."

[~Neko Ears~]

Midnight got set and slipped his shoes on,attaching his mask to his neck He walked out his room to get some fresh air,he was growing old in here.
(Lol Rosa is chained,she isn't a trust worthy Slave yet so shes tied for now)

[Rosalin_Thorn]

Dimitri huffed at Victor i'm the one who helped bring her here so i ca- once again Dimitri was cut off by Rosalin kicking him again where the sun don't shine. a-ah.. Dimitri fell to floor once again in pain as Rosalin raised her leg once again ready to kick Victor. d-don't come near me... she said ready to kick using her deadly legs as Dimitri groaned trying to sit up not agaaaaaaaaaain he whined curling up a bit. Dimitri was loud enough for the whole camp to hear.

[Kornelia]

(can i use that example?)
Shadow smirked though it quickly faded when she looked down at her arm and saw a bloody mess. The rush of the whole fight had got to her,she hadn't noticed the painful wound until now. She began to pant as the pain increased,wishing she had never found out she had it she gripped it hoping to stop the bleeding though was failing she began to grow weak from the blood lose. She dropped her blade as she glared up at the Faceless.