~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

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Who is your favouriote character?

Lucky
7
50%
Cindy
0
No votes
Indy
1
7%
Mum/Dad
0
No votes
Rhythm/Micky
0
No votes
Cola/Heather
0
No votes
Jessica/Jo/Aaron
2
14%
Sara
1
7%
Cody
0
No votes
Foxie/book
3
21%
 
Total votes : 14

Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Sun May 06, 2012 9:25 pm

I want to write more, but I can't, since I need more dogs!!!
SO annoying!
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Sun May 06, 2012 9:41 pm

Will write a little more, anyway...

I'm HOME now. Thank god! I almost DIED at school.
Lucky, dinner's almost ready.
I don't CARE, Indy. Get out of my room!
It's not just your room. It's Cindy's too.
Fine, get out of OUR room.
But Cindy doesn't mind.
Ta agaçant!
I'm glad I took french, instead of German like the rest of my family. Now I can yell things at them, and they don't know what i'm on about.
Shut up.
Make me, fly!
Mu-my! Lucky's speaking French at me!
Lucky, be nice to your sister!
How'd you know I said something bad?
Don't give me that, Lucky! You're lucky we're at home and I can't give you a detention!
Stupid. Stupid, stupid, stupid.
Cindy walked into the room at that moment.
Hi, Lucky, indy. What's up?
Indy's ANNOYING me! I yelled
Indy, sweetie, leave Lucky alone. Why don't we go play princess, or do some colouring?
Ok! Are you coming?
I'll be there in a moment.
She shut the door, leaning against it.
Lucky, you shouldn't be so ungrateful. She's a great person.
Shut it. I don't care.
Well, you should, because-
I said, shut it! Just because you say you know me, doesn't say you know it all.
Don't acuse me of a crime I never did, don't say that you'll catch me if I fall.
No, not everyone is the same. No, not at all.
But in the end, I'll come out on top, because I know I can try.
And there's nothing that can stop me.
I will try, and I shall not stop untill I have got what I have looked for.
No need to insult me, I already know some is true, no need to push it, I've already had my fill.

She gave me one last, sad luck, walked out of our room, and shut the door gently behind her.
Lucky, the tea's ready!
Coming, Mum!
I stood at the door, looking around. Little did i know that woud be the last time I would see my room in a very long time.


Thanks to Safe Haven four Lucky's outburst! If you want a quote like this, go here: Click.
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Betta132 » Mon May 07, 2012 2:55 am

This is really good! Write more!
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Mon May 07, 2012 3:42 am

Thanks! Next part may come out tomorrow, Monday or later today. Depends when I get trade replies- which also means new characters.
I've also planned 2 big plot twists... I'm not telling...
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Mon May 07, 2012 4:43 am

More now!


We'd just sat down to eat dinner (it was around 7:30pm) when there was this loud knock on the door. We all froze.
Why would anyone come at this time of night?
I'll go answer it...
Dad went to the hallway. We all sat still, and listened. The door opened with a small creak- dad had only opened it a crack.
Who is i- AGGH!
We rushed into the hall. Dad lay on the floor, his head cut, leaning against the telephone table. His nose was bleeding- somebody had hit him. And NOBODY hits my family!!!
I told you I'd revenge.
Cody?! He was behind this?!
What do you want, Cody?
He stepped into the light. I want revenge, Lucky. These past two years you've made me look like a fool, classed me as I'm not. You don't know me! And now, I will exile you!
You don't have the right. Only the king can exile me.
How do you know I'm not?
What was this dog talking about?????
My father was Nicholas III. You know who he is. And this is my Uncle Micky. He's looking after everything while I'm still in education. I am King Cody II. And you just happened to kick my butt.
Oh.
OH!!!!!!! Oh. My. Waffles. With. A. Cherry. On. Top. :shock:
I had kicked the kings butt. I KICKED THE KINGS BUTT!
Guards, sieze them.
While I was taking everything in, about six dogs burst into our house, knocking the door down. I karate kicked one in the nose, and he fell over. He looked like this: Image
He looked a couple years older than me. Then another dog appeared... A dog very similar, but bigger. I knew who he was.. I'd seen him on TV a couple of times. It was Cody's Uncle Micky:
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Oh. My. Waffles. With. A. Cherry. On. Top.
I had kicked Cody's cousin Rhythm in the NOSE!
Oops.(<-- Understatement of the year.)
Anyway, Micky grabbed me by the wrists and pinned them behind my back. He dragged me and my family out into the cold night with nothing but what we had on our person- luckily, I had you, journal, and my lucky wristband. Well, it's actually from the time I went swimming and forgot to give it back... but still, that day I got 3 packets of marshmallows for £2! (Marshmallows are my favourite sweets!)
We were led over to this large truck... It was weird. The back was made of brown metal, with a sliding door in the side. In the darkness I could see shapes moving within... Other prisoners, I guess. Cody had obviously been at this all day. A sour scent drifted from inside. First Mum, than Dad, were hoisted up. Indy was practically CHUCKED in! For a moment I felt sorry for her- but only a moment! Don't go getting ideas!
Cindy jumped up herself- I don't know how she does it, it was so high.
Cody was beside me as they began to lift me up. Before they could, I turned to him, furious.
Get in! he yelled at me.
Just because you say you know me, doesn't say you know it all.
Don't acuse me of a crime I never did, don't say that you'll catch me if I fall.
No, not everyone is the same. No, not at all.
But in the end, I'll come out on top, because I know I can try.
And there's nothing that can stop me.
I will try, and I shall not stop untill I have got what I have looked for.
No need to insult me, I already know some is true, no need to push it, I've already had my fill.

He grinned. Lovely poem, Lucky. Now do as the king says!
I was lifted into the truck. I stared at him, and the door was slammed shut...
Would I ever see daylight again?


Plot twist no. 1 finished! You'll have to wait for the next one a while, though!
I got the idea from a book I've been reading, Between Shades Of Grey. You should read it, it's really good!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Betta132 » Mon May 07, 2012 7:40 am

Wow. That's a MAJORLY HUGE plot twist!
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon May 07, 2012 3:13 pm

:o :o :o OMW! That was epic!!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Mon May 07, 2012 6:22 pm

Thanks!
Yeah, but there are two more coming up! Not for a while, though.
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby Rebel Faery » Mon May 07, 2012 7:53 pm

This will be short, sorry...

Well, hi journal.
It must be around 2am now. We're still in the truck... And guess who's here! Book!
She lent me a torch (she has about five wrapped around her tail :what: ) so I can write.
Dad's just sat there, staring at the wall. Mum's just lying there, eyes closed. Cindy and Indy are sleeping.
Another weird thing about Cindy is that the pawprints on her side glow.
I'm supposed to be asleep, but I'm not. I'm sat here with Book, scribbling away. Wait, she's stopped reading... weird...
Lucky, we should sleep.
I can't. It's weird her, Book.
I know, Lu. But we need to stay strong- who knows what's going to happen to us.
She lay down and went to sleep on the cold floor. That's when I realised: she gave me a nickname. Lu.
Well, goodnight. Sweet dreams, journal.
I hope yours will be better that mine.
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: ~|Untilted ~ A Journal|~

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue May 08, 2012 5:05 am

Well, at least she got a nickname! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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