βɛαʋтιғʋℓ{{1D Fan Fic}}-{{Chapter 4 Done}}

[Kinchovi]

Ɯɛℓcσмɛ to my story..
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It all started with a smile. Yes, a simple smile. A smile that would change
the way that they thought, the way that they chose their actions. Most importantly,
it would change the course of their life.

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~ This is a 1D fan-fic. If you don't like 1D, get out.
~ This is also a Briall romance. Briall is a nickname for a romance that me and Save
You Tonight RP. My character Brook, and Save You Tonight RPs Niall.
~ I will add to this story when I'm not able to RP.
~ Please no negative comments!
~ Do not steal my characters D: You can use the images, they are from google (;
~ Story begins in the next post

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Brook
Aged 19
Shy. Brook tends to be shy when
you first meet her. She doesn't really speak much,
well maybe 'hello', to people she doesn't know.
She relies on the more confident girls to greet her to
strangers. This has, however, affected her socially
in the last year or two, so she is trying to become
more confident. She can also be a great laugh, once
you get to know her, Brook is very 'blonde'. She'll say
whatever is on her mind. This almost always is something
completely off topic, but it brings in a bit of laughter.
Hovering on the fact that Brook is a 'blonde', yes, she
does have those clueless moments. Just don't critize
this, she takes it very seriously.
Brook is calm in tough situations, she always has a
resolution which keeps everyone happy.
If Brook was put in a group, and told to do some sort
of project (as an example), she generally takes a back
seat and doesn't ever lead really. She does try her
hardest at everything, and I mean everything. Brook has a
crush on Niall.
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Fey
Aged 17
Fey is a lot more confident than her sister.
She is willing to make friends a lot more easily, and will talk to anybody.
She is very carefree aswell. She is very smart, smarter than her sister
even though she is younger. She doesn't like to show off about this though.
She doesn't make jokes like her sister, but laughs along. She is seen as a
great person to be around, as long as you don't mind the constant laughter
and happiness.
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Maddy
Aged 18
"I don't generally
tell strangers about me, but I
can see that your almost begging
so here goes. Firstly, I don't care
what you or anybody else thinks
about me. I'll be who I am so either
like it, or well. Just don't go there.
I'm an independent woman, I make
my own choices. You could try and
make me less of who I am, but
seriously, I do hurt. I'm not afraid
to stand out in a crowd. Nothing
is going to break me down. Just to
leave you with this. I am beautiful
and I don't care what you say so
just don't say it."

Cassie
W . I . P
~21
~The more mature one.
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Zoe
W . I . P
~The crazy one!
~Always pulling pranks
~Talks utter nonsense
~Younger sister is Jessy
~Aged 18
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Jessy
W . I . P
~A lot like her sister
~Youngest in the group
~Immature
~Crazy
~Crush on Niall
~Aged 16- too young if you ask me!
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[Kinchovi]

It all started with a smile. Yes, a simple smile. A smile that would change
the way that they thought. A smile that would change the way that they
chose their actions. A smile, that most importantly, would change the
course of their life. The smile that would make them, them. Your probably
wondering how a smile could change the way that somebody felt & thought.
Or, your just thinking 'my lord she has lost it!' Either way, let me explain
this certain smile. It all began on Tuesday February 17th at school.

"Aah!" cried Fey as she ran into school on Tuesday morning.
Brook was following closely behind her, a little calmer but still grinning with
excitement. In one hand she clutched her and Fey's school bags. In the other,
she held a little blue envelope. It had already been opened, pressumably by
Fey, Brook and their family.
"oomph!" Fey muttered as she bumped into Mr. Redhead (who, quite frankly,
doesn't have red hair) and landed on the floor in front of him.

"Fey Evalyn!" Mr. Redhead boomed, slightly shocked that it was
Fey that had ran into him.
"Yes! Sorry!" whispered Fey, she was hardly ever told of and was uncertain on how
to handle it.
"You know I hardly ever tell you off!" continued Mr. Redhead. It was true.Fey was a
star student. Mr. Redhead was the girls science teacher. Fey was top of class, most
classes in fact! Brook and Cassie were also good, but Fey was the best.
"I don't expect this kind of behaviour, young lady! You just broke three rules
at once!"
"Sorry!" Fey muttered.
"First of all you were running down the corridor. Strictly forbidden. Second, you
were screaming like a loon. You know that that is not allowed. Finally, you just
ran into me which is very impolite and out of character for you Fey Evalyn! What
have you got to say for yourself?" Mr. Redhead asked,completely ignoring Fey's
earlier apology.
"I know! I'm terrible sorry!" explained Fey, slightly ashamed by her behaviour,
"I'm just so excited!" she said a little happier.
"I don't honestly care that you are 'excited'" yawned Mr. Redhead, brushing Fey
away from him.
"See you in second period!" yelled Fey as Mr. Redhead disappeared around the
corner, in his penguin like walk. He completely ignored her.
"You're the rude one!" giggled Fey, hoping the older science teacher hadn't heard
her witty remark.

She turned back to Brook who had now caught up with the
exciteable younger sister.
"What was that about?" Brook asked Fey, "It's not like you to get told off, Fey."
Brook narrowed her eyes, "Your Mr. Redhead's star student."
"I know! I wonder if something's wrong..." Fey exclaimed, she was still blushing
over the whole epidemic. Brook shrugged her shoulders,
"let's wait till second period. He'll be teaching us then."
"But right now let's get to class!" Fey yelled as the registration bell rang,
"I don't want to hurt my perfect attendance record."
Brook rolled her eyes as Fey grabbed her and yanked her off down the corridoor.

"Brook and Fey Evalyn!" sighed Mrs. Beatie,"You're late."
Brook and Fey both dipped their heads, "sorry miss!" said Fey.
"And why are you late?" questioned Mrs. Beatie.
"Mr. redhead stopped us in the corridoor" explained Fey, carefully avoiding the fact
that she had been in trouble.
Mrs. Beatie sighed, "I'll let you two off. Sit down and pull out a reading book"
Fey and Brook nodded. They both looked around, finding their seats. Brook
took hers next to Cassie and Fey, next to Jessy.
"Fey got in trouble!" whispered Brook.
"WHAT?" choked Cassie, a little too loud
"shhh" yelled Mrs. Beatie.
Brook and Cassie both went a little red and continued with their books.

One Hour Later

"Finally! Break! A chance to catch up!" exclaimed Jessy as the six best friends
(Jessy, Cassie, Zoe, Maddy, Brook and Fey) headed over to their usual hide-out behind
the tree at the back of the school field. Zoe took a seat on the tree stump, closely followed
by Jessy who sat on top of her. Zoe giggled and pushed Jessy off. Maddy came next, she
rolled her eyes at the two wrestling girls and slouched against a tree with her arms crossed.
Then came Fey who was now holding the blue envelope. She waited for Cassie and Brook
who were discussing something privately before announcing..
"I have tickets!"
Brook coughed.
"We have tickets!"
Maddy, Cassie, Jessy and Zoe stared at Fey blankly. Brook was obviously brimming over
with excitement.
"Tickets?" Maddy asked, "What for?"
"6 Tickets to see one direction!"
Jessy and Zoe squeeled with happiness. Cassie headed over to Brook,
"When, where, how?" she asked.
Brook replied, "From the radio contest, two weeks time and we are sat front row!"
Cassie's mouth opened wide, "C-c-coo-l." she stuttered.
Maddy just rolled her eyes, "count me out"
Fey raised an eyebrow and Jessy slapped a hand over her mouth.
"Oh, Maddy, you are coming!" Cassie told the fiesty red-haired girl.
"We're all going to see one direction."

[Kinchovi]

"1 week to go!" beamed Zoe as the 6 girls walked along the corridor.
They were carrying quite a lot of stuff, a lab-coat for physics, physics folder, P.E kit and gawd
knows what else. The count down to one direction was the least important thing on any of
their minds. Especially Maddy, who snorted at Zoe's statement.
"Come on Maddy, you'll enjoy it when you are there." cooed Cassie.
"I will NOT!" Argued Maddy.
Cassie just rolled her eyes, saying nothing more about it. They had reached the physics classroom
now and were taking their seats.
"Did you find out what was wrong with Mr. Redhead last week?" asked Brook as she took her seat
next to Fey.
"Yeah. His wife is pregnant" replied Fey, casually.
"Oh. " Brook replied, she hadn't really been expecting that but nevermind.
"Today we will be studying..." began Mr. Redhead.
Brook completely zoned out and began doodling in her folder, she drew her and Fey. Then she
drew a penguin and called it Mr. Redhead. Jessy just happened to lean over and ask for a pen,
she snorted with laughter at Brook's drawing.
"What is so funny Jessica?" Mr. Redhead questioned.
"Nothing, I was just picturing.." she paused, "I was picturing you dressed like a potato sir."
Mr. Redhead stopped. He stared. He couldn't think of anything to say.
The whole class burst into laughter, along with Mr. Redhead.

After physics..

"Where did the potato thing come from?" asked Cassie as the girls strode
out of the physics room and toward the French classrooms.
Jessy shrugged her shoulders, "Niall is Irish and I just thought of the way they say potatoes.."
The girls giggled. Well, except for Maddy, who was glaring at Jessy like she belonged in a
mental asylum.
Zoe raised an eyebrow at her crazy sister, "What was the real reason you were laughing?"
she asked. Zoe could easily tell her sister was making up an excuse.
Brook giggled and pulled out her picture with the Mr. redhead penguin on.
All the girls laughed. Surpisingly, even Maddy. Cassie was turning red slightly.
The girls stopped laughing as they entered the seemingly deadly silent french room.
Mrs. Bird was taking the register, "sit down girls" she said.
Brook and Fey took their seats next to eachother. After Fey came Jessy and then Zoe and
Maddy. Cassie sat the other side of Brook.
"Now girls, today we will be looking at the 'perfect tense' does anybody know what that is?"
Brook listened, she liked French. It was one of her best subjects.
The lesson dragged on, but the day dragged on even longer and the countdown to 1D continued.

3 Days To Go..

"3 days left!" Zoe beamed as the 6 girls walked into school. It was Tuesday and
they were going to see 1D on Friday.
"Nobdody cares.." muttered Maddy.
"WE DO!" Yelled the other 5 girls. Maddy rolled her eyes and continued walking.
"Aah, girls!" Mr. Redhead smiled as he came out of the staff room, practically bumping into the
6 teenagers.
"What?" Maddy replied, slightly rudely.
"Do you need help dressing up like a potato?" ased Jessy, giggling at the mention of the other
day.
Cassie laughed a little, so did Brook.
"No. And Madeline, don't be so rude" Mr. Redhead replied.
"Oh." Sighed Maddy & Jessy at the same time.
"What can we help you with sir?" asked Fey, very politely.
"Thank you Fey. Uhm, well I need some help sorting through some old school books in my office.
You six were the first ones I ran into." He paused, "You'll miss first and second period. If you want
to help, that is."
"We'd love to, wouldn't we?" asked Fey.
Some of the girls nodded, others stood quietly. Maddy groaned and rolled her eyes, at least they
would miss the two worst lessons; german and electronics.
"Good, follow me then." Mr. redhead said, before waddling off.
The girls followed him to the science department (where his office was) and stopped outside the door.
"I'll be teaching, so you'll be left alone for a little while. Basically, just sort all the books into classes
and then put them in the right tray." He explained.
The girls nodded and let themselves into his messy office.

Maddy sighed and picked up some old book, she read the title.
"Josh Hutcherson" Maddy smirked, that was one of the guys in top year. She put his book in a pile and
picked up a new one.
"Deliah Song" Maddy gasped, that was the nerdiest girl in the school. She opened the book and turned
to the back. Deliah had been doodling in the back of the book. Maddy smiled, that would make a nice
rumour. She looked at the doodles.
"Look! Delly drew her and 1D!" Maddy chuckled.
The others crowded around Maddy to see.
"Maddy! You should be sorting the books not reading them!" Sighed Cassie, taking the book and putting
it in the correct pile.

2 Hours Later.

"And done!" Smiled fey as she put the last book in the correct place, Mr. redhead's office was
a lot tidier now.
"Look at this!" Zoe murmered, looking through some of the photos on Mr. redhead's desk.
"That's private!" Moaned Cassie, though she was intrigued to find out what Zoe had been looking at.
She approached the desk quietly and slowly, unsure whether to look or not. Cassie had always been
a good girl, doing what she was told and when she was told. Unable to resist, she picked up the photo
and studied it.
"Woah!" she breathed, before passing the photo to Brook. Brook stood there in stunned silence, unable
to remove her eyes. She passed it to Fey, who would like this photo much more than any of the others.
"Oh my lord!" Fey cried.
The photo was a picture of Mr. redhead with one direction. How and when he got that, god knows. But,
wow. Mr. redhead must be a directioner too!
Suddenly, the door clicked open. It was the teacher. The directioner teacher. If that makes sense.. Fey
flung the photo at Jessy, who would be the least likely to mind getting in trouble.
"You're done?" Mr. redhead asked. He looked at the girls, noticing Jessy was holding something.
"what's that?" he asked. Jessy held up the photo.
"You're a directioner?" She asked back.
Mr. redhead went well red. His head was actually red now, Maddy chuckled at the sight.
"Well- yes. I have tickets to see them this Friday."
"So do we!" gasped Fey.
All 6 of the girls took a moment to breathe in the fact that their physics teacher was a directioner, although
there was a slightly bigger chance that the boys would date the 6 girls over the older physics teacher.
"What next? Mrs. Bird is a belieber?" Maddy muttered into Jessy's ear.
Jessy snorted with laughter. Mr. redhead raised an eyebrow at her but said nothing.
"You're dismissed girls." said Mr. redhead.
The 6 girls hurried out of his office and toward their next class.

1 Day To Go!

"Omg omg omg!" squeeled Zoe as the 6 girls walked into school Thursday morning. Apart from
the earlier findings about the Mr. redhead a directioner, it had been a pretty average week. That
would all change tommorow!
"Omg!!" Maddy sighed sarcastically.
Cassie nudged her, "You can at least try to enjoy it."
Maddy shrugged, "You know I'll hate it."
"You know you won't!"
Cassie though for a moment, why was Maddy not even willing to try one direction. It was like she
absolutly could not stand them. That was possible, the amount Zoe, Jessy and Fey rambled on
about them was a little over the top. Cassie really hoped that Maddy wouldn't ruin the night
for them all.
"Morning Cassie" yawned Brook as her and Fey walked up to the lockers.
"You got Thursday Fever?" Asked Cassie.
Brook nodded.
Thursday fever was something that all the girls shared, they could not stand Thursdays. Firstly
because of the cr*p lessons they had, also the day went slowly because it being Friday tommorow.
Cassie could only imagine how slow this day would be going, with one direction tommorow.
"Slow slow slow" murmered Cassie.
"hmm?" Brook asked.
"Imagining how slow the days going to go."
"Right, and you're perfectly normal"
Cassie playfully shoved Brook.
Jessy raised an eyebrow at the two girls. Since they met last year they had become well,
they barely ever weren't together. Jessy was in awe of their remarkable friendship. Brook
also shared a sweet friendship with Maddy, Jessy could not get her head round that. Brook
seemed to be the only one who could tease and mess with Maddy without being snapped at.
"come on! Can't be laaattteee!" Sang Fey as the girls got out their books.
"Be there in a minute" sighed Maddy, "keep your wig on woman!"

After school;; Thursday.

"See you guys tommorow. Friday! Friday Friday here we come!" chirped Cassie as
the girls took their usual route home. This involved dropping Cassie off and then buying
sweets before going to Maddy's house, then Jessy and Zoe's house before finally Brook
and Fey arrived home. It usually took about 2 hours but today the girls were missing out
the sweets and were jogging. They obviously couldn't wait for tommorow.
"aaah the sweet store.. do you think they sell brocolli?" asked Zoe as the girls trotted
into the local corner sweet shop. It was ran by an elderly man who had a nice little
friendship with Fey. This meant they got special offers and gawd knows what else.
Maddy raised an eyebrow, "and I'm the wierdest one in the group?"
Since finding out that Louis (from one direction) liked carrots, Zoe had become obsessed
with brocolli claiming that she was giving the unloved some love.
Zoe chuckled at Maddy. Maddy did not look impressed, she gave Zoe a look reading
Don't laugh at me or I'll slap. Zoe shook her head and picked a bag of sweets for
her and Jessy to eat. Brook bought a little bag of gummy worms to share with Fey.
Maddy didn't buy anything.
"Grump." muttered Fey as they trotted toward Maddy's house.
Maddy happened to hear her and raised an eyebrow.
"I said love. Like I love you Maddy."
Zoe giggled at Fey's lame excuse. Maddy seemed to think that love was no better than
hate. She stormed up her front path and slammed the door in the girls faces.
"She'll be ok again tommorow." sighed Fey, this happened often.

"See you tomorow!" Smiled Fey as Jessy and zoe trotted up to their little house.
Fey and Brook only lived round the corner, Fey could not wait to get to bed tonight,
she could not believe that this week actually went pretty fast.
"Friday! Friday! Friday!" sang Jessy, who was actually a pretty good singer.
Brook smiled, "See ya!" she mouthed to the two girls who belonged in a mental asylum.
Fey and Brook soon returned home.
"Can't wait till tommorow."
"Me neither"
"The count down is finally over!"

[Kinchovi]

Friday Afternoon; Two hours until one direction

"Cannot wait!" exclaimed Jessy as the girls walked into Cassie's house.
They would be having their hair and make-up done by Cassie & her older sister
who had returned from college for a few weeks. The girls had all chosen some
pretty dresses and couldn't wait to compare them.
"I can!" sighed Maddy as she took of her shoes and put them on the shoe rack.
"Maddy!" Cassie grunted, getting slightly annoyed at the fiesty red-head,"You'd
better not ruin this or we'll ruin you."
Maddy rolled her eyes, "I'd like to see you try!"
Cassie ignored her and glanced around at the other girls who were squidged
up in the narrow hallway.
"Lets get started!" she suggested.

One hour to go!

"Wow!" breathed Cassie as the 5 'models' stepped out the bedroom.
"How do we look?" asked Fey.
"Beautiful." replied Cassie, "Now let me get dressed!"
Cassie closed the door behind her and picked up her little red dress.
The others had all chosen a dress out of her wadrobe and they all looked stunning.
Maddy had chosen a pale green dress
that complimented her eyes. She looked amazing, more amazing than usual that was.
Brook had chosen a beautiful, blue and well.. amazing dress it really complimented her.
She looked stunning.
Then next to her stood Fey, who looked brilliant in a sparkly
and gold dress.
Cassie had expected the gold to wash her out but instead, she looked like an angel who had
just fallen from heaven.
Then Zoe, who had remarkably found a dress that suited her pink hair, was wearing a
beautiful black dress. it really went well with the pink.
Finally stood Jessy, the youngest of them all. She had chosen a purple dress that matched
her highlights.
They all looked superb, wonderful, amazing, ready to kiss.

Cassie quickly slipped into her dress, it was red to match her black hair.
When she was done, she waltzed downstairs and joined the others in the kitchen.
"30 minutes to go!" exclaimed Zoe as Cassie walked in.
"You look amazing!" Fey told her, recieving a snort from 'Moody' Maddy.
"Thanks, so do you!" beamed Cassie.
"Let's get going! Cassie you're the only one with a drivers liscence!" Zoe almost screamed.
"Guess I'm driving then!" replied Cassie.
The 6, beautiful, girls lurched into Cassie's truck like car and Cassie started the engine.
"It will take us about 15 minutes to drive" said Cassie as she pulled off the driveway
and started to head towards 'one direction'.

Arriving;; 15 minutes later!

"OMG WE'RE HERE!" squeeled Zoe as the girls arrived.
"Yeah, I'm sooooooooo excited" remarked Maddy with a roll of her eyes.
Cassie nudged her, "Remember, you'll enjoy this"
Maddy crossed her arms like a toddler having a tantrum.
The girls began to make their way towards their front row seats, squeezing
past the tons of screaming fan-girls.
Maddy rolled their eyes, "SHUT UP!" she yelled.
The whole place fell silent.
Fey opened her mouth at Moody maddy.

During 'What Makes You Beautiful'

Brook clapped along laughing and singing.
Maddy sat with her arms crossed, rolling her eyes at the masses of screaming
fans. Fey chuckled and sang loudly along. Zoe giggled and made rude comments
but in a nice way. Cassie kept her eyes on Maddy, she didn't want her to ruin
the moment.

Brook kept her eyes focused on Niall. She loved his blonde hair, his
cute laugh and his Irish accent. She sighed but kept watching. During the
chorus something spectacular happened. The boys were singing
'You don't know your beautiful, oh oh oh, that's what makes you beautiful'
when Niall looked in Brook's direction and shot her a smile. A smile.
A smile. Brook covered her mouth and looked at the floor blushing.
She then looked back up and saw that Niall was still grinning at her. The
other 5 girls looked at her in awe.
"Luccckkkyyy!" giggled Fey.
"Whatever.." moaned Maddy.
Surpisingly Jessy joined in with a grunt. Was she jealous? Brook
shook her head and continued to watch the performance. People
around her kept staring at her and murmering to their friends. Brook
chuckled and got a few more smiles before the performance was over.

[Kinchovi]

A music lesson, a few days after the concert

"Today girls.." Began the Music teacher. He
shook his head and tried again, "Today you will need
to be in groups of 6. You have 5 seconds so just pick
anybody!"
Zoe grabbed Maddy and Brook and pulled them together.
Cassie looked for them before walking over, pulling Jessy
and Fey with her.
"We have a six right here" said Zoe, rather proudly.
Maddy rolled her eyes.

"In your sixes, you will be performing a song. Any
song so you can chose." a couple of cheers aroused from
the class "But it has to be on this list.." he continued.
A couple people sighed, others still looked quite happy
about the whole idea.
"You will need somebody on drums, somebody on piano,
somebody playing guitar, somebody playing guitar
and sing, a lead singer and a backing singer. "
Fey glanced around before dashing over and chosing
a song before anybody else could tell her otherwise.

"Guess what song we're doing!" exclaimed Fey, obviously
excited by their new music project.
"One direction?" asked Maddy with a snort.
"OMG how did you knoooow?" Fey said sarcastically.
Jessy snorted with laughter at the two bickering girls, she
found Maddy's personality rather amusing.
"So what song?" asked Zoe, who was grinning with enthusiasm.
"What Makes You Beautiful!" Fey smiled.
Cassie cheered a little, raising her arms and humming the tune.
"I got the music and stuff, though I'm guessing we know all the
lyrics already.."
The girls nodded.
"So who's playing who?" asked Cassie, with a raise of her eyebrows.
"Zoe.. you play piano, right?"
Zoe nodded.
"Jessy, you could do drums.. it isn't that hard."
Jessy nodded, slightly less enthusiastic.
"Me and Brook both play guitar. Brook your amazing at singing."
Brook smiled and nodded.
"So you can do guitar and sing?"
Brook nodded happily.
"Cassie, you and Maddy also sing right?"
Both girls nodded.
"Sorted." They all said together.

"JESSY!!" Maddy complained, "You're doing it wrong!"
"No, Maddy, you just can't sing." retorted Zoe.
Maddy snorted, "Oh yeah thanks. Your cr*p at piano too."
The 3 girls stormed of in different directions.
Fey, who had been helping Cassie and Brook with notes
and singing whilst the other 3 had been practising, turned
to find the door slamming shut and a loud thud down the
corridoor.
"Great." she breathed before running off after them
to soothe things off.

Brook and Cassie were left in the room by
themselves.
"Trust Maddy to start a fight." Cassie sighed.
"I know.." Brook muttered whilst trying to find
a pencil to make some adjusments to the lyrics that were wrong.
"Eh, they'll sort it out.." Cassie shrugged.
"Found it!" exclaimed Brook.
"Found what?"
"A pencil."
Cassie chuckled and patted Brook on the back.
"So what lyrics were wrong?" asked Brook, leaning over Cassie
to see the words.
"Oh. Uhm. Here." she said pointing at a line near the start of
the song.
Brook frowned and changed them to what they should be.
"And here...."

Fey tumbled down the stairs, making a right noise as
she went.
"FEY EVALYN." Boomed the music teacher.
Fey stopped and turned around.
"Where do you think you're going?"
"I-I was just going to find... Maddy and Jessy and Zoe."
"Where are they?"
"They fell out and stormed out of the room."
"Be quick."
Fey nodded and began to run down the corridors trying
to find any sign of them.
It was most likely that they wouldn't be together.
Fey smiled, if that was the case, Zoe or Jessy would be
out by their favourite tree.
Fey picked up speed and sprinted accross the field,
the sun high in the sky and noise of cars drifiting accross
from the main road. As she approached the old tree,
two figures sat underneath it.
"Jessy? Fey?" the two girls turned around.
Fey sighed with relief, it was them.
"Where's Maddy?" Fey asked.
"Why would we care?" they retorted.
"Okay. Uhm... would you go back to the music room
I promise Maddy isn't there. And we need you guys!"
she smiled at them and pretended to beg for them.
Jessy looked at Zoe. Zoe looked at Jessy.
"Fine." they said together.
Fey grinned, "Thank you!"
Now. Where is Maddy?

Cassie and Brook turned round as the door
opened and Fey, Jessy and Zoe returned. Cassie
smiled, "Don't worry about Maddy, she is Moody
Maddy."
Jessy chuckled and took a seat back at the drums.
Zoe smiled and wandered over to the two girls
who had been correcting the lyrics, she looked
to make sure they hadn't missed anything, before
taking her place at the keyboard. She glanced at
Fey who nodded and picked up a guitar.
Cassie grinned at Brook, Brook beamed back.
Cassie strolled over to the microphone. Brook
picked up her guitar and began to strum it.

"Your insecure, don't know what for,
you're turning heads when you walk through the door-or-or
Don't need make up, to cover up
Being the way that you are is enou-ou-ough."
Cassie started with her solo, or Liam's if you'd like. She
glanced at Brook, reminding her to go next.
"Everyone else in the room can see it,
Everyone else but you-oo!" Brook finnished the bit
of the song that she had claimed hers.
"Baby you light up my world like nobody else,
the way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed,
and when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell,
you don't know-oh-oh, you don't know your beautiful!
If only you saw what I can see,
You'll understand why I want you so desperately,
Right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe,
You don't know, Oh oh,
You don't know you're beautiful,oh oh,
That's what makes you beautiful"
Cassie and Brook sang the chorus.
Then they stopped, Maddy was supposed to sing next.
Fey sighed, "I'll go find her.." she trotted out of the room
for the second time to find 'moody maddy'.
The other girls high-fived and hugged, it sounded great

A few minutes later

Maddy returned, looking a lot better with Fey
by her side.
Cassie spoke, "We have one more practise, then we have
to perform. We need you to do your solo, Maddy"
Maddy nodded and made her way to the microphone, whilst
Fey picked up her guitar.

The final assesment.

"You're insecure,
Don't know what for,
You're turning heads when you walk through the door,
Don't need make-up,
To cover up,
Being the way that you are is enough," Cassie sang.
"Everyone else in the room can see it,
Everyone else but you," Brook continued.
"Baby you light up my world like nobody else,
The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed,
But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell,
You don't know, Oh oh,
You don't know you're beautiful,
If only you saw what I can see,
You'll understand why I want you so desperately,
Right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe,
You don't know,
Oh oh, You don't know you're beautiful,
Oh oh, That's what makes you beautiful" Brook and Cassie
sang this time with Maddy too.
"So c-come on,
You got it wrong,
To prove I'm right,
I put it in a song,
I don't know why,
You're being shy,
And turn away when I look into your eye eye eyes," Maddy's solo
went well.
Brook smiled, and then began to sing again.
"Everyone else in the room can see it,
Everyone else but you,"
"Baby you light up my world like nobody else,
The way that you flip your hair gets me overwhelmed,
But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell,
You don't know, Oh oh,
You don't know you're beautiful,
If only you saw what I can see,
You'll understand why I want you so desperately,
Right now I'm looking at you and I can't believe,
You don't know, Oh oh,
You don't know you're beautiful, Oh oh,
That's what makes you beautiful"
Soon the song came to an end, they had to shorten
it a bit becuase the assesment only lasted 2 minutes.
The music teacher clapped his hands, "When you're
famous you will remember me?" he laughed.
Zoe looked at the others and raised an eyebrow.
"Famous? Guys... we should make a band!"

[broodingtulip]

OoH can't wait for more!

[Kinchovi]

"OMIGOSH ZOE THAT IS A GREAT IDEA!" exclaimed Jessy, who was
obviously excited by the idea of being in a band.
Fey, Brook and Cassie nodded.
"I like that idea too" noted Cassie, who wasn't going to get 'over-excited' like Jessy
was.
Maddy snorted, "Fine. Whatever!" she muttered, although she did secretly quite
like the idea.
The music teacher grinned, "Girls! That's great! You can practise here whenever!"
Zoe smiled happily, "Thanks and Thank you!"

A few hours later, After school

The girls had began to practise another song. It was one that Fey
had written with Brook's help.
Brook was the one with most solos, becuase she was the one who had designed
the song and Fey wasn't singing.
After a few practises, Brook's voice began to get croaky and all the girls
were tired.
"Let's have a break?" suggested Cassie.
Brook nodded, so did Maddy.
Cassie waltzed into the kitchen and brought back 6 drinks.
"You know, we need a name if we're going to be a band!" she smiled.
"OMIGOSH HOW COULD WE FORGET A NAME?" exclaimed Jessy.
Maddy rolled her eyes, "How about 'Maddy and the scenery?"
Cassie chuckled, "No"
"The brocolli queens?" suggested Jessy.
"No."
Brook strolled over to the sofa, where the others had taken a seat
and were discussing names.
"How about 'Shooting stars?" she offered.
Cassie smiled, "That's great!"
"Or falling stars?" Fey chipped in.
"Or Fallen angels?" Zoe asked.
Cassie noted them down on a piece of paper.
"Shooting stars.. Falling stars.. Fallen Angels" She thought, "They're
all good names.." Cassie murmered.
"Which one are we going to use?" asked Maddy.
"Let's ask other people!" suggested Jessy.
Cassie nodded.

"So what did they say?" asked Jessy, jumping over the sofa
to join her friends. Cassie, Fey and Brook went around town asking
their friends which name was best whilst jessy, zoe and Maddy stayed
at Cassie's house.
"Looks like the band's name is Fallen Angels!" Cassie grinned.
"YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYY!" cried Zoe, who had originally thought up that
name.

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This is great!

[Kinchovi]

{{Haha, Thank you (:}}

[Kinchovi]

{{Got the third chapter done.
It hasn't reached a dead end yet, don't worry haha! x}}