Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

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Is my poetry good ?

Very much so, I love it!
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Its ok
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It so so, I neither like nor dislike it
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No... just no
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HORRID ERASE THIS EVIL!!!
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Re: Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby Mavric » Tue May 01, 2012 4:18 pm

Very, very nice, I really like it. No, I love it!
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Postby pisgah » Tue May 01, 2012 4:20 pm

Thanks! That means a lot, coming from a fellow poet. ^w^
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Re: Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby Mavric » Tue May 01, 2012 4:26 pm

Your stuff is beautiful, while mine is chaotically thrown togeather at wim... yours is so melodic I love it♥
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Re: Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby pisgah » Tue May 01, 2012 4:33 pm

Oh come on, don't diss your own poetry, you and I both know it's beautiful. Chaotic, maybe, but artfully so. And as for mine, of, thank you thank you, you flatter me. XDXD I'm just glad to have an audience for it. I'm so used to just writing it down and hiding it, I decided to be bold and get some feedback.
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Re: Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby Mavric » Tue May 01, 2012 4:41 pm

Lol you deserves it, and you know it its amazing
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Re: Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby Mavric » Wed May 02, 2012 12:12 pm

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Re: Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby pisgah » Wed May 02, 2012 1:16 pm

Hey, can I ask you a favor? If you really like my poems, could you post on my thread? IDK why but I hate to bump my own threads. XD it makes me feel lonely XDXD.

Lol but really, I want people to read it. I need some opinions!
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Postby Mavric » Wed May 02, 2012 2:28 pm

Lol sure ^^
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Re: Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby pisgah » Thu May 03, 2012 9:11 am

Hey thanks! ^w^
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Re: Darkside of the Moon POETRY(comments welcomed)

Postby Mavric » Fri Jan 25, 2013 8:51 pm

Lol see someone agreed with me, yours is great!
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