Did I say that I was perfect?

[Jaysquirrel]

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This is not about me but my friend a story off her but not her real name. PLease enjoy.


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Let me introduce my self. I am Thunder, Thunder watersky but people call me boom and I don't even know why. I am in 8th grade and I feel like my life is a hot mess. Just moved school but still in the same town and my life is going downhill. Not in grades or growing but friends and just plain old life. Want me to tell you why?

Sorry so short I always have short prolongs

Chapter 1
Now lets start form the beginning. In my old school everyone loved me I was the though good at sports tomboy and all my Best Friends were the most popular guys. No one dared to mess with me and if it dose happen BOW done and gone. I kept all the meanness in order and help everyone. My Best friend ever, the shaggy blond hair with deep blue eyes muscular football player that in every love story they fall in love with. Named Oliver, He told me everything, I told him everything, when he flirted with someone I would punch him and when I flirted with someone he would drag me away. We would stick up for etcher and never fight (Only over who gets to get the last piece of pie). I loved him; he loved me we never told etcher kind of knew. He was like a brother but in a loving way, but that all changed when I left. The last day came before I moved schools, he took my hands and put them on his sides (For I am taller then him by a few inches) he put his hands on my hips and moved forward and kissed him lightly. Then I went on for longer and longer kissing and kissing. The picked me up till we got outside and then I waved good by with tears down my eyes and ran home. Half of joy and the other half sadness. Now you think my life is great having a boyfriend and all well think again. I moved schools.

Chapter 2
The summer was great fun and all and then I moved to my new school but still in my old town. I walked in and girls were talking in all a pink uniform (Collard shirt and skirts or kakis). I walk away for none of them are tom-boys and I keep moving on finally I see a few boys that look nice and I say hi and one of then say hi back the other one says “Nice hair my milady." When I here that I know we would be friend but build up to it. Then walking on to meet more kids crowed around a red head boy. I stare and listen and I said "Hey I am new here." The boy walked down with red hair and says, "Who do you think you are punk hey." Me looking like a boy "I say umm well none of you bees wax." He shows me into the wall and walks away. I know that my face turned red with anger because one boy says who I have not meet yet "What the matter?" Then I say "Him." The kid shuts and says, "By the way I am Sam." He was shorter then me and then me hair shaggy but not like Oliver. I walk off into class knowing that this was going to be the worst time of my life. I knew if form the beginning, you see now you think it can't get any worse just watch.

Chapter 2
Now most of you think this can't get worse well look at this. Then I saw the red head again and asked, "What is you name?" and he said "Kiss my A**." (Or other word butt) I stared down at him and held him against the wall and said "DON'T MESS WITH ME." When I bring him down. He ran for a teacher and said "THAT GIRL OVER THERE JUST BULLIED ME." Then the teacher car marching over and said " YOUNG WHATEVER YOU ARE DETENTION FOR LUCH AND AFTER SCHOOL." Right then my heart stop with anger and shock. The teacher really believes that. Then I ran off outside were Sam saw me and said "You ok?" putting his hand on my shoulder. I was so mad that I ripped it away and ran into the near by field that they use for running and no one was there right then and there. But Sam fallowed me and sat next to me and held my hand and said, "You ok? I know it's hard everyone here is so (HUGE PART IN STORY). Judge mental " I nodded then Sam leaned in and KISSED ME. He kissed me on the cheek. He was smaller then me but not as strong and looked at me. I pushed him away and ran back into the school. He already had a girlfriend and I had a boyfriend (Done being big). Let me tell you right then and there I felt empty being the first week and all. Now my life got more messed up. I didn't know what to say or do, are you getting it now?

Chapter 3
After the day were Sam kissed me I went back home and guess who came to see me... Oliver. When I saw him I ran and jumped almost into his arms but I was taller then him so that would have been weird. Glad I was home alone because he took me and kissed me lightly on the lips hugging me and said, “How was you day?" I bet you can guess my answer "BEST DAY EVER." I tried to make me look happy to fool him. But he sat me down and said “Boom tell me the truth." Then I let out a huge sighed and explained everything. Then when I got to when Sam kissed me he said, “So you’re cheating on me?" He voice going down and he looked at his toes and turned around. I waited for a little bit to think of my answer and he started crying a little. I felt sad to, so I turned him around with my hand on his waist and sat down on the couch and said, "No I love you, he just wanted to convert me." He laid his head on my lap and whimpered out "It's not that, I know you would never cheat on me, just that I am sad that I was not there for you." He laid his head down on me and I stroked his head. He knew that I loved him then looked up at me with big blue eyes and I kissed him on the lips lightly, that made a smiled go on his face. Then a car pulled up Oliver friend mom. We hugged then I let him go waving. Then sat back down to finish homework but you know at that point you can't. I closed my book and lied down and just stared at my celling for a while till. My mom came in and yelled at me. I hated my mom and still do. She yells at me for everything. Then finishing I took a shower ate all that stuff, and then when I went to bed I could not sleep every time I closed my eyes. Oliver came but then same I could not take it so I texted Alex everything and he told me that he will see me tomorrow. Then I smiled and feel asleep. My life is still a mess with offs and on’s. One question is you now starting to get a picture if you didn't before.

Chapter 4

It was the next day and I went to school bad as usually and pushed a girly OD lover (Ohhh I hate them still) the teacher sent me to counseling because it was another teachers pet. Lucky me, now my life feel worse getting more homework every night and more drama. Then I saw Alex, a short redhead who is super sweet. He gave me a huge hug and let me in with his parents their put we were going to his lake for a swim. We both jumped in and he then asked to tell me everything. I stop for a moment to think about everything and then spit it all out. Then put my head on his shoulder and he scratched my head lightly and said, "Maybe tell Sam that you have a boyfriend." Being my self I shook my head and said, "I did and I just want to ditch school and start over." Alex smiled and said "Maybe you can saw that you are sick for a few days and we can go hang out to try to get it out of my head." I shook my head furiously. Alex sighed then we just swam for an hour then lay down on the ground for another hour. After all of that I left and went home, finished my homework. Then Alex texted me and said "Guess what?" I answered back "What?" Then he said back in a five-second time. "Luke is going to be a father." I was shocked because he was m boyfriend when I was like 5. Then I asked back "Who the mother?" Then Alex texted back, I already kind of knew who just wanted to make sure I was right. "Laura." I ginned knowing she was getting a little bit fat. She was a popular annoying girl. Now she is at my new school and now she is going to be even worse. I am glad that I knew I never wanted or will have kids. So that night I answered "God have mercy on me." Then read a book and feel asleep.
Sorry this part is short, had to help the story to get better

Chapter 5

I woke up the morning after I herd about Laura. Everyone in my house was gone counting that I only have a Mother and Father who are always working. A nock comes from my front door and I run down stairs in long shorts and t-shirt with my hair down. I opened the door and yawned Oliver in the door and asked, "Can I have a water?" I smile running into the kitchen and tossing a water bottle then asking my words stabling out of my mouth. "Why are you here?" He smiles and answers hugging me "Because I was sad the other day that I was not here for you when you were sad." I smile then ask letting it linger out "Anddddddddd." The answers the real truth raptly and fast "You know about Laura, well I don't want that to happen, so can we never do that?" I roll my eyes and say sarcastically "NOOOOOOOOOO, I want to have a kid." Oliver smiled and kisses me on the check and he leaves. I go back up stairs and see I can get 3 more hours of sleep. I jump back and bed and pass out. Then I woke up at 8 and got ready and hoped on the bus just in time. Then in the middle of the day in Math I herd a scream and I got up and saw a bird in the other classroom. Laura's friends were crowding around her and yelling "PROTECT THE BABY." Then the next store teacher came in and screams "WERE IS THUNDER." I jumped back and fallowed her. Then she pointed to a little bird on the ground. I picked it up and then saw a little mouse. The teacher screamed and screamed "GET THOSE THING OUT RIGHT NOW." Laura was holding her belly and saw "It's ok baby, it's ok." The teacher calmed down Laura because Laura was still the class pet and everyone loved her. Then I said to my Math teacher "I am going to get rid of theses." I walked though the hall and the redhead came and laughed "Look like Thunder has take care of the animals and not be in class. They think she is not smart." Then his friends laughed with him. I then kicked the redhead in the side and he ran off to a teacher and I just ran away into the field and saw that the little bird had a broken wing. I kept the bird and let the mouse go. Then guess who came, yes Sam. I ran to the near by forest and he fallowed me. I ran faster and he tried to hug me, then I turned around and screamed at his face "YOU KNOW I HAVE BOYFIREND SO GET OUT OF MY LIFE." Now do you see what will happen?


Chapter 6

Sam looked down crying then sputtered out "But you’re so pretty and smart." I pinned him down and screamed "EVERYONE CALLS ME THAT JUST GET OUT OF MY LIFE." The rocks under Sam pinching his back and he yelped making me stand up facing face to face with him. I look at him and say "Can't you just leave me I had it with you, you don't even know who I am." "Yes I dooo." Sam said calmly then ripped me forward and kissed me hard on the lips putting this hand around my hips. Then a wiggled out of his grasp and screamed "WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?" I threw a rock at him hitting him in the cheek then ran back to school running into the redhead. (Yes him again) The redhead snickered saying "Well, Well the nice, pretty, sweet girl, who are you an your boys." I growled at him walking on. He fallowed me and teased "I hope you can give me a little kiss because I just want to make you better." I turned around and pushed him over. Then he got up and ran to the price able and said all the bad things I did and made him self look like he did nothing. Then she came over yelled at me and I got a Saturday detention. The redhead stuck his tongue out at me and explained "Loserrrrr." Loudly and everyone started laughing. Then Sam came in crying his eyes out and the boy on the first day who explained "Nice hair my milady." Walked over to me and whispered "Everyone here is so judge mental and will try to hurt your feeling. Just sit and listen like it is interesting." Then added "My name is Grant by the way." I smiled and went home after being fake sick and then I saw Oliver we kissed and hugged I felt better but something still felt lonely one the inside like something wad missing an unexplainable feeling that make you feel a little down. You ever have that because I had it a lot.

Chapter 7
The next day school was out for the weekend so I wrote poems.

Alone
Even when no more tears fall
Even when people say now your good
I still feel alone
With love slowly drifting away for my heart

You’re love hurts me even more
When you hug me I shatter
When you say you love me I fall
When you kiss me I wish that I would die
Because I know you don't care at all

Perfect is just a word
Pleased stop breaking me with that word
I can't take it anymore
Even though I know it's just a word
From you I feel like it's
All my life down a drain


Any one can use theses name of poems for user names or in a story even the poems just say I made it

I am really sorry for the delay but I was going to right tonight but I went to a band concert and it was so loud and I was light headed form playing now I have a huge headache sorry write tomorrow

Chapter 8
Then school started again and Lauren was now like 5 month into her pregnancy and she is being a B***. I wanted to kill her. Luke hates Lauren because she never took her birth control pills and he never wanted kids only to have the thing. Sam still can't get over me and he asked me is I wanted to go out on a date. You can guess what I did. Knocked him out and threw him into a closet and I got suspended. For tens day that was so smart or me. My parents yelled a me and I got grounded not aloud to see any one of my friends for 10 days. But after getting board I stuck out when my parents were out for 3 hours and saw Alex (because he lives right next to me) we hanged out for a bit and swam in his pool. Then he told me something that he likes me but he knows I have Oliver. Then right after he said that I said bye and ran home sitting under my covers and then texted Oliver "My heart is braking tomorrow after school can you come and fix it?" He replied yes with XOXO. Then I texted back "I got suspend form school for 10 days, so only 7 more days come to mine at 6 parents will be out." He texted back "Love you." I then put my phone away and went down and had a candy bar. When I looked at my calendar in room a saw I only have 3 weeks till school is out. Then saw that when I get back to school Lauren will be 7 months in her pregnancy. She hates me and all the girls at school hate me too and the boys but Grant and Luke still loves me. Oliver tomorrow and soon I would be in big high school.

Chapter 9
There I hated my life, that day I went and thought of turning emo. Yes that day I almost killed someone so nice right. It was 7 days after my suspension, I then went back too school and Laura walked in with her followers and her pregnant belly. Then she walks over to me and bragged "I am having twins." Then lift up her shirt and explained, "I pregnant and going to have a beautiful babies, bet you are never going to have children like mine." Then she shoved her belly in my face and stormed off. I then sat there on the bench and looked at her. Not wanting to say anything at all but then she walked back over to be and whispered in my ear "You are never going to be as great as be, I am the best your the worst and I am having children when you are not." I sat there still and the got up and away. I understood deep down in my heart she was right I am would never have children , I couldn't,no one knew that but my parents and I. But that didn't matter because I wasn't mad about that,it didn't hurt me at all. She did get on my nerves, no one should care about that she is worthless. For me I just wanted to kill her. Then behind I herd her throw up and she screamed, I kept walking to my locker and there I saw a note with flower taped above it. The note said "I know that you never meant the stuff you said to me and did, I forgive you and I know you really love me. you just had to had time to think. -Sam" I threw the paper to the ground the ripped it up throwing it out. I took the flower and dumped them in the trash. Anger raced though my body, I threw my stuff in my locker and ran outside smashing the door opened. Then door swung hitting the brick wall and I ran to the gentle stream off the mountain near the school. I was the only person who knew about it well i though.I then saw Grant sitting there next to the stream sitting on one of the large rocks, i walked over to him and put my hand on his shoulder. He jumped a little then saw me and I sat next to him watching the stream. My eyes met his and I asked softly "Why are you here?" Grant turned his face to mine and I saw tears dripping down it slowly. For me right now i was a wreak and so was me.
He then wiped the tears off and explained (Clife hanger)

[Jaysquirrel]

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[broodingtulip]

Love it, though there's some grammar and spelling errors. Please continue!

[Svel]

As Blossom said, there are a few grammatical and spelling errors, but this is one good start!

[Jaysquirrel]

Thank you and I an bad at both so ya and I will wirte more

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Yay, can't wait for more!

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