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[Smamm]

We know if you haven't read the front, so read it ALL. If we know you haven't (and we'll know), you will be DENIED! Stop using intro posts as your RP example!

Welcome to the Semi-Literate+ Roleplayer's Club!

There will be an acceptance post every Sunday. Members will be brought in weekly. This way pending members don't need to pester me unless I miss the acceptance dates. ^^

Note:
Since it seems no one actually reads the whole thing, I have been inclined to post these here so you all see it. I have been given permission from BlissfulFarrago to take care of the thread. If you are not on the members list below, and you have applied, please quote your form from the old thread, or just create a new one, and allow me to read through your application!

This thread is dedicated to the roleplayer's of chicken smoothie that are at the semi-literate+ level. There has been a lack of semi-literate or literate roleplays here on chicken smoothie, and so this thread is for roleplayer's of this level to get together!

Note: To those of you who are not at semi-literate or literate level, please do not be offended. Everyone has to start somewhere. c:

What This Place Is For:
Here you may discuss roleplaying in general, more advanced roleplaying (but please no bashing of people who are not semi-literate or literate), roleplay ideas you have that you want feedback on, your own semi-lit or lit roleplay's, or form ones with other members.

General Rules:
1. Be polite
2. No bashing of anyone
3. Stay on topic
4. No mini-modding
5. Don't quote your form, it only makes it harder to update.
6. If you have not been accepted, you are not a member, so do not post. Please wait until you have been accepted to start posting.
7. Please don't tamper with the form! I know we all love to make them pretty, but there is a reason I have them set up the way they are.
9. Please do no use intro posts as your sample.
10. Please only post/advertise semi-literate+ roleplays.
11. Do not contact any of the mod's to ask if you were accepted or declined. Take a look yourself.
12. Do not contact any of the mod's to ask if you were ignored or skipped over. We use the search engine. We don't miss anyone.
13. Once you have broken too many rules, we reserve the right to decline you.
13. Listen to the mods! This consists of Smamm, Kiro & Hikari, and an asian to the knee.

Rules for Advertising:
1. Please post the plot along with the link. Tell us about it, don't just ask us to join. Not doing so is lazy.
2. Do not consistently (or ever) quote or repost your idea.
3. Only advertise NEW roleplays. Don't bring things that have already begun here, please.

That's all I can think of, I'll add if I need to. c:

Form:

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Form:
Username:
Favorite type of RP:
Roleplay sample: (no intro posts... delete this from your finished form)
Any semi-lit/lit RPs you have:

For your reference, the general things I will be looking for in forms are as follows...
1. Quality over quantity;
Don't pick your longest post ever if it is not a good example of your current work. When I say this, I want you to give me a good example! Too many applications have examples that the writer says "not my best. I usually write better," or something along these lines. I see this as lazy. Give me a good example please, and if I see anything written about your work is normally better I will not even look at your form.
2. Grammar & Spelling;
It's a simple thing that should be second nature to all semi-lit+ writers. I don't want to see wrong tenses, incorrect punctuation, incorrect spelling, or any of that (I understand there may be a mistake every now and then; we are only human, after all).
3. Sentence Structure;
Your writing should flow. Sentences shouldn't be overly long, and they shouldn't be unbelievably short. I'll be looking at your writing style, and you general mechanics. The number one no-no is I don't want your writing to sound mechanical/forced. It shouldn't sound like a children's book (Susie did this... Then Susie did this... Susie saw Bob and said hi...).


Current Members:
1. RedBlueGreen
2. Rosslin
3. Kiki
4. Arya The Shadeslayer
5. Lainalou
6. Karne
7. Kari Lion
8. asiandragon
9. Shiba_Your_Inu
10. firestar398
11. Gatanitazul
12. Rainy//Drai
13. Metallic Dragon
14. galaxyglitch
15. Gwen Trix
16. Jade Mystic
17. Frosty&Angel
18. emgeal
19. Clowesia
20. Calypso Sky
21. Kitteh
22. Ninjutsu
23. CreativityLives
24. Hatter
25. Molybdenum
26. Chii-sai
27. Cheshire<3
28. rainingdarkness
29. WhenPigsSoar
30. Atwood
31. Teacup
32. Kat Shadow
33. Harbor
34. Lakota Many-More
35. Try•and•Fly
36. Uoneko
37. Dunch
38. The Wolf Chick
39. Meadow
40. Pengutaina
41. Jelly Bean <3
42. Princess_Mekka
43. Emmaishere
44. softballsava
45. ~Amberleaf~
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49. ShadowSlayer
50. Mango-Burst
60. The Cat Did It
61. Toppyrocks
62. Hanoverian
63. A Thousand Suns
64. Friar
65. Spockylass
66. Smamm
67. Caprice
68. Roseness
69. the s i l e n c e
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71. Quill
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75. blue_dun
76. iVersus
78. Folly + Zmija
79. Poofle
80. ExpressionlessShadow
81. Labrador.
82. Danyell-Chaos
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84. Muggafinn
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86. н'ιρ:sтɛʀ
87. Glᴑw
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91. *Skylar*
92. ♥Blood Corruption♥
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95. average
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98. Tenebre
99. Sharubii
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101. Ɯιnтeя Єve
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108. Wolf of your dreams
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135. Wildmagic_warrior
136. Inudog
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138. Mayia Hikamaru
139. rozz18
140. ~Lotus~
141. 808
142. Shirafune
143. The Vixen
144. .:EASILYAMUSED:.
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146. Kitten.
147. Chry
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151. wickedwolfgirl
152. Utopia
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156. Danazo
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161.Owl Of The Rain
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163. Zoketi
164. MBRShorse
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166. Spawn
167. CoffeeAddict
168. Twig
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171. .communication
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177. .mintfeather.
178. Toxi+Bbun
179. Tcat77
180. oceanshimmer
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182. SnowStar
183. ｏｄｄ...
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185. zippyzoo77
186. Avimara
187. Artesian
188. Ivalynfyre
189. Snow911
190. ChelsieLea
191. light.
192. { C a s c a d e }
193. mint.
194. my Lalia
195. d a n d e l i o n
196. the minimalist.
197. мυιѕ.
198. Pockyy
199. city;
200. ; o r c a
201. {{ f i a s c o }}
202. ET4252
203. .:after-life:.
204. AbbeyDawn
205. mountains
206. Magique
207. abandoned.
208. Fietelux.
209. destonation.
210. 33Kitty
211. ƒour
212. H o w l i n g
213. prodigy.
214. Liddi
215. Yomi Aino
216. Painted Turtle
217. Wolf'sflame
218. small tooth
219. passion.
220. 4dogowner
221. Ashbreeze
222. Narwhal
223. Silent Symphony
224. h o r i z o n .
225. post-apocalyptic.
226. b r o k e n ;
227. an asian to the knee
228. dearie.
229. -Vengeance-
230. Goldfire1200
231. AngelJoyeuse
232. Rauty~
233. four-
234. BloodyCrystal56
235. :: nyctophobia ::
236. ƜσℓʌɛƨǤσЯαωя
237. .musicality
238. corιαɴder.
239. redninetails
240. Nimble Awesomeness
241. ~Erica~
242. melody.
243. Flyn & Risu
244. Nellas Lissësúl
245. malice is silver.
246. glittermousebb
247. Taima
248. Against All Odds
249. Jetta
250. Marwari Horse
251. nosebleed
252. Wildmagic_warrior
253. Zombie Skittles
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255. 0live
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257. Ourpawprints
258. Touko
259. HolyHandGrenades
260. Starkit12
261. anonymous.
262. Sgt. Llama
263. Zenyatta
264. ʀose ;
265. BloodyCrystal56
266. r a i n d r o p
267 Kartharon
268. Make_a__Scene
269. Notorious.
270. peter pan
271. regals
272. gїzмо.
273. Primrose Everdeen <3
274. amour.
275. Silversky-
276. ιмperιalғaтe
277. Shazinga
278. Skellington.
279. ιяιѕlуα
280. Mrs. Liz Knox
281. irkMasterPsyKou
282. Cap'n βʋииι
283. ConsultingOkaku
284. daisy lou
285. Sherbert.
286. Koiyote
287. -- SarahSapphire. --
288. Flaire.
289. RoseMyth
290. Jenjo
291. mercy.
292. s t a g ;;
293. Lixi
294. Adoration
295. Iberian Lynx
296. .cheetah;
297. Gluttony
298. Luckypaw
299. NeonSpirits
300. ❅Cider Chi.
301. Typical Aquarius
302. Kalika Kai
303. ιrιdeѕcenт.
304. . Reηηix .
305. Harlequin Raven
306. Cydnezz
307. that one girl.
308. talia23
309. sugarstrings
310. -Benexo
311. the journey wolf.
312. Alyss Baskerville
313. Tainted Kitten
314. moose.
315. au revoir,
316. Pooka.
317. toujours.
318. && e t e r n i t y

I look forward to having more members! c:

if your username has changed from what is on the front, please fill out this simple little form for me! c: Thanks!

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[color=#FF8080]Hey there! I've changed my username![/color]
Old username:
Member Number:
New Username:

Here's a nifty little stamp you can stick in your signature! c:

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Weren't accepted? Need to improve your writing? Look no farther than the Illiterate to Literate RP School! A few of the members here help run the place, and we can help give you pointers to improve your writing! Who knows, maybe the next time you apply you'll make it in because of the help! ^^

[Smamm]

I was hoping to never have to use one of these, but I suppose no thread can go too long without having to make one. The black list serves as a ban list, and any of the users listed have been banned from the club for various reasons including rule breaking, flaming, spamming, plagiarism, and other things.

Black List:
.silent
AbbeyDawn

[nopenope123]

Are we allowed to powt now? If not, PM me and I'll delete this post.

[plum]

Ooh, shiny new thread!

I'll go quote my form from the old thread later.

[Smamm]

Are we allowed to powt now? If not, PM me and I'll delete this post.

Posting is fine! c:

[nopenope123]

Okay,good!
Color
Need males. Everyone seems to want to take the female spots! c:

[Artesian]

Username: Artesian
Favorite type of RP: Humorous, hard Sci-fi, fantasy. No romance-focused RP's.
Sample of writing:

Example 1: [In this, a character has been captured by the authorities.]

Finn woke silently. Years of waking up from forced unconsciousness had taught him the wisdom of withholding groans until he'd taken stock of the situation. He lay with his eyes closed for a few moments, testing his range of motion.
Range of motion: nonexistent.
Position: comfortable.
That ruled out a gutter, a metal cell, and a folding chair, but not a coffin or an armchair with straps. He opened his eyes a crack. “Oh...” he mumbled. Okay. Armchair with straps was closest.
“I see you are awake,” a disembodied female voice observed.
“No, no, going back to sleep now,” Finn said, closing his eyes again.
The female voice sounded a little irritated. “Remain conscious.”
Finn attempted to shake his head.“No. Sorry, I'm drifting... back... to sleep.”
“Finn Dash, you degenerate zrat,” another voice said. It sounded angry, and male.
He opened his eyes. The colored contact lens he'd donned for this job were out again, and the alterations they'd done to his chin were gone, too. “Guilty as charged. What can I do for you?”
“You can tell Commander Fletcher everything,” said the female voice. Finn snorted.
“Or you can die a horrible death. Personally, as long as one of you tells us the truth, I'm not especially partial to either option,” the angry male voice said.
“Here he comes now.”
The door swung open.

Example 2: [This character has -almost- died, and is in a dream-like state.]

It was cold here. He could feel time passing slowly, like thick, dirty motor-oil, allowing objects to slide through it like cogs in a machine. He couldn't hear anything, see anything, or even feel anything but the sluggish time flow and the frigid cold. It was seeping into him slowly, wearing away at him. He could feel grains of himself slipping away, wearing down at himself.
He felt as if he should shiver, but here, there was no relief from movement. Nothing purposefully, just the time sliding away from him, taking molecule layers of him as it went.
Time passed.
He could feel something else now. Instead of the endless absence of heat, the chill of nothing, he could feel himself now. Yes, he did exist. He had wondered about that, before the time brushed that thought away. Now, it took the memory with it, but he was still there. There was warm here, a stubborn lukewarm feeling deep inside him, resisting the icy tide. It was faint... failing slowly, as the cold chilled his surface and eased biting tendrils into him.
He fought it. He didn't know why, but that warmth was precious. He couldn't let the time eat him away. He fought, and time quickened, speeding on with the deliberation of a star's slow, inevitable, cooling. Then, with one more tooth of cold emptiness something sank into him, he realized with the strange logic of a dream, that the time wasn't what was attacking him, that center of warmth which was him. The time was indifferent, a slow, natural opponent. Some creatures, with fangs which reached deep down into his soul, was trying to rip him apart, send shards and shreds of the warmth into the inexorable flow of chilling time.
To know that something unnatural, something that wasn't simply a force of nature was trying to hurt him... it helped him. The slow dissipation of the warmth inside him slowed, steadied, sunk from the grasp of the teeth and claws of his opponent.
Suddenly, he knew why he was warm. He was a person, with a body which held the warmth of life. He breathed in, and out. In, and out. In, and out. He drank in the feeling... knowing, all the while, that the flow of time was still here, and the warmth was still fading slowly.
That was natural though, he considered. That was life.

Any semi-lit/lit RPs you have: None. I don't RP much, although I'd like to do more.

[plum]

Form:
Username: Navajo
Favorite type of RP: Don't really have a favorite.
Sample of writing:


(( It's fine with me. :3 ))

A set of bold orange ears flicked under the sunlight. They belonged to the mutt demon, who went by the simple name Holly. Part lycan, werecat, and mostly demonic fox, the girl lived in the wastelands of a world full of demons. It was an easy life for her - living underground, alone, able to survive off of nothing but the blood of others. Like most demons, she was able to teleport herself to and from the human world, but unlike most, it drained her almost completely.
Blonde hair reached down to several tails with fur that matched the color of her fox ears. Orange-brown eyes held a certain innocence, despite the slit pupils. She stood in the middle of no where, yellow grass caused by the sun's harsh rays under bare feet. Something in her subconscious had told her to go outside instead of dozing off in the cool underground cavern she called home. Since I'm out here, might as well do some exploring.
There wasn't much to explore, though. Dying yellow grass for miles in each direction. There was a dirt path, though, that led to the more populated areas of the world. But, being a mutt, Holly wasn't welcomed there. That was why she lived in the wastelands - so she wouldn't be bothered by the pureblooded demons.
The humanoid creature began walking, forward. Her tails moved with each step, and occasionally one of her large ears swiveled around to listen to nothing. They flattened immediately as a crack broke through the air, and her eyes went up as the sky seemed to break apart. It was something she'd seen every time she'd traveled to the human realm. "Someone's going through the barrier?" she wondered aloud. A beam of dark-hued light came down, and something humanoid-looking appeared on the ground.
Curiosity was stronger that cautiousness and the demon half-ran, half-trotted over to the figure when the light dissipated. The sweet, slightly familar scent of humans became stronger as she got closer. Holly immediately bent down and slipped onto her hands and knees to smell the man who'd come out of no where. Her face didn't express the shock that came to her when under the human scent was more human smell. Not a demon. Unconsciously, she licked her lips, since to most demons, humans were more or less an irresistible treat.

Any semi-lit/lit RPs you have: Not at the moment.[/color][/size]

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[Yuki.]

I have an angel role play in my sig, highly realistic and literate
~Snow

Edit; Alwyn, My apologies, I am so used to telling new members that they can post XD

[plum]

I know, but in an above post it said if you aren't on the list quote your form from the old thread. o3o