'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of Suzi's backstory on page 15? NOTE: READ ENTRY ON PAGE 15 BEFORE ANSWERING!

Poor Suzi, she's had a hard life.
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4%
I don't even know how Suzi went through all of that. It must have been so difficult for her.
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12%
I think I feel slightly sorry for Suzi.... BUT ONLY SLIGHTLY!
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4%
I feel so sorry for Suzi.
1
4%
I think I sorta like Suzi now....
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16%
Still hate her the same.
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4%
She is still E.V.I.L.!
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No votes
So Suzi has scars.... so what?!
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16%
She still needs anger management.
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16%
SHE IS WACKO! How was Amy supposed to save her?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?!
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Total votes : 25

Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Apr 29, 2012 3:09 pm

whoa gal1 wrote:great!! but now I want one about Jennatte because of the whole time thing.

Yush, that would be a bit epic, wouldn't it?

Also, if you have any questions about the series, just PM them to me! Like, questions about Jenette and her being the "Keeper Of History" and such. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TheOneDirectioner » Mon Apr 30, 2012 4:13 am

Now my butt-kicking, time-keeping friend is back!
I used to be TheHungerGamer, then I changed it...k bai

The Truth wrote:
I guess Gale's cool, but Peeta's THE BOY WIT THE BREAD


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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby -Frost- » Tue May 01, 2012 3:20 am

Me want more :D
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue May 01, 2012 5:16 am

TheHungerGamer wrote:Now my butt-kicking, time-keeping friend is back!

Yes, yes she is! :)
Brownbeak wrote:Me want more :D

Then you shall get more!


















Alright, I don't know if anybody has told you that you need to save the world, but as for me this was a first.
What do you mean save the world?!
Trust me, Amy. It'll make sense soon.
None of this was making sense!
You'll figure it out. Now, I must go.
GO?! What do you mean go?!
Amy, I can't stay. You do know that, don't you?
Well now I did.
But I don't want you to go! I want you to stay! You're my best friend...
I'm sorry, Amy. This will be the last time we meet.
WHAT?!
No, no, no! Please stay!
Jenette sighed.
I can't.
Why can't you?
I felt angry and sad.
I can't tell you.
Jenette was whispering.
But know this: Even when you can't see me, I can see you.
Uh.... Jenette? That doesn't make much sense...
You're forgetting, Amy. I'm the Keeper Of History. I can go back in time. And you don't know, but I already have gone back in time and saved your butt a few times.
WHAT?!
What do you mean "Saved my butt"?!
Let's just say you got in a little trouble with the government...
WHAT?!
Too big of a story. You'll have to hear it some other time.
But I won't hear it another time if I'm never gonna see you again!
Exactly!
Jenette smiled, but I didn't.
Amy, I really gotta go now. Take care of yourself.
I ran to Jenette and hugged her hard.
I'll miss you.
I'll miss you too, although I can just go back in time and see you any time I want.
We smiled. And then Jenette and I stopped hugging and she ran in circles. Just watching her made me dizzy! And then there were rainbowy sparkles everywhere as she disappeared. And I was never going to see her again.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby -Frost- » Tue May 01, 2012 5:26 am

Awww.....They can't see each other again?
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Tue May 01, 2012 8:56 am

you are evil, you bring back my favorite Character and THEN YOU TAKE HER AGAIN! THATS JUST CRUEL.
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby kaypatts » Tue May 01, 2012 9:03 am

xxazul63xx wrote:you are evil, you bring back my favorite Character and THEN YOU TAKE HER AGAIN! THATS JUST CRUEL.


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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TPDebate » Tue May 01, 2012 10:00 am

YOU ARE EVIL!! NO, YOU ARE WORSE THAN EVIL, YOU ARE MEGA EVIL!!!!
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby nezuko. » Tue May 01, 2012 10:15 am

    As much as I luffles Jenette, I'm glad she's going to leave us forever.
    She was starting to get a little irritating at the end...
    Otherwise, nice entry!

















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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TheOneDirectioner » Tue May 01, 2012 12:14 pm

WHAT HAPPENED TO JENNETTE??? She used to be fun and weird and AWESOME, now she's all serious-like.
I used to be TheHungerGamer, then I changed it...k bai

The Truth wrote:
I guess Gale's cool, but Peeta's THE BOY WIT THE BREAD


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