'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of Suzi's backstory on page 15? NOTE: READ ENTRY ON PAGE 15 BEFORE ANSWERING!

Poor Suzi, she's had a hard life.
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I don't even know how Suzi went through all of that. It must have been so difficult for her.
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12%
I think I feel slightly sorry for Suzi.... BUT ONLY SLIGHTLY!
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4%
I feel so sorry for Suzi.
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4%
I think I sorta like Suzi now....
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16%
Still hate her the same.
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4%
She is still E.V.I.L.!
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So Suzi has scars.... so what?!
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16%
She still needs anger management.
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16%
SHE IS WACKO! How was Amy supposed to save her?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?!
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Total votes : 25

Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Apr 27, 2012 3:23 pm

TheHungerGamer wrote:PWEASE WRITE MOAR

I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm so sorry. I just have been really busy lately.
whoa gal1 wrote:NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! DO NOT STOP TIAJNAD IT IS TO COOL TO STOP!!!!!! please write at least one more book, CS won't be any fun without TIAJNAD.

The last part made me smile. :) Don't worry, I already have the next one's title as well.... so I'll probably be writing Nine. Not sure, though. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TheOneDirectioner » Sat Apr 28, 2012 8:22 am

YAY! At least one more
I used to be TheHungerGamer, then I changed it...k bai

The Truth wrote:
I guess Gale's cool, but Peeta's THE BOY WIT THE BREAD


Yea, you can't say The Truth is wrong.

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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Apr 28, 2012 10:58 am

Alright, you guys have waited long enough! New entry time! :)


















Gish led me into a tunnel and then into a dark, dark room. Suddenly, torches were lit, lighting up the whole room. And that's when I freaked out. On the walls were drawings.... of me!
Uh... Gish, what is that?
You, of course!
Uh.... why is it me?
Goodness, you don't know anything!
Well thanks!
Listen, what's the first picture of?
It looks like an upside down rhino.
Gish glared at me.
Come on, look really hard at it!
I stared intently at it.
Wait a minute, it looks like-
But it couldn't be! Why would she be in the picture?
Yup. It's her.
But why? Why is Jenette in the first picture?
CLIFFHANGER! SUSPENCE! *Dun dun dun* ..... Fine. I won't give you a cliffhanger this time.... but perhaps I'll give you a different one... I don't know.... I'm sorta tired. Maybe I'll just stop writing now.... nah. That would be mean. Fine then, I'm bored anyway. I'll tell you Gish's answer.
You don't know the prophecy? Wow. You really DON'T know anything.
Gish was so rude!
First off, you're probably wondering how I know "Jenette". Well..... because I know all history, I know every dog. Pretty cool, right?
Wow.
Anyway, moving on. Now, most call her Jenette, correct?
Practically everybody calls her by her real name...
Jenette isn't her real name.
WHAT?!
This was creapy.
Her real name is "The Keeper Of History".
What did that mean?
She has visited everywhere at every point of time. She can go back in time, and go forward in time, hence her name. She can also never die.
Never die?
But..... I saw her die myself!
I didn't die.
Wait a minute.... that was Jenette's voice! I whirled around.... and faced a strange face.
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Hi, Amy!
Jenette's voice came out of that strange dog's mouth! I gasped.
OMW! YOU ATE JENETTE!
I started screaming.
AGHAGAHGAHAGAHGAHAGHAGHA!!!!!!!!
Amy, Amy! Calm down!
The strange dog slapped me and I stopped screaming.
It's me, Jenette.
I stared at her. This strange dog with a voice like Jenette's was Jenette?
It's me, honestly.
I looked into the strange dog's eyes.... and I stared and stared. And then I knew. This was deffinately Jenette.
JENETTE!
I hugged and hugged her, tears rolling down my cheeks.
I thought you were dead....
I was sobbing.
It's okay, Amy. I wasn't dead. I just had to act dead.... for my cover. But now you need to know the real me.
Real you?
Gish was right. I am the Keeper Of History. And I can't die.
I felt woozy. All of this was happening so fast.... but then again, everything happened fast.... I should've probably been used to it.
I know this is all confusing, Amy. So let me explain some more. Are you listening?
I nodded.
Alright. A long time ago, and I mean a REALLY long time ago (like when there were dinosaurs), I was born. And when I was born.... I was born glowing. Everybody tried to kill me since I had been glowing and they thought that I was dangerous. But my dad, my realy dad, saved me. But the angry dogs killed my real mother, and then they found me real dad and killed him. But they couldn't find me, for my real dad had hidden me well. And then... I never died. No matter how old I got. And once I grew to be thirteen years old (in human years), I figured out how I could morph into different dog breeds. And so I morphed into what I called "My Jenette Breed", the one that you most know me from. I had never been named Jenette, but I really liked the name so I called myself that. I decided to stay in "My Jenette Breed", since I thought it was really pretty. And I never aged.... well, in looks at least. Of course every Birthday, I changed a slight bit, such as I would turn a different color for a day, or I would figure out one of my new powers. And every year on my birthday, I learn a new power.
I deffinately felt woozy.
So.... uh.... how old are you exactly?
Jenette/The Keeper Of History looked over at me.
I'm sorry, Amy, but I can't tell you. I'm not allowed. The only one who knows my age is me.... and, of course, God.
But.... what does this have to do with me? And why did you die?
I'll answer the dying question first. I had to do that because if I hadn't, you would have never found the Raboa and would have never known the truth.
Why couldn't you just tell me?
Because it was not my place to.
I stared at Jenette.
Oh, and the Giant Killer Lizard is also part dinosaur.
I stared blankly at Jenette.
He was gifted the title of "Dino Of History". He's still part lizard, but mostly dinosaur, which is why he's so huge. Anyway, we've always been friends.
Man. A lot of explanations.... and a lot of questions.
And now onto your "What does this have to do with me" question. Look at the wall again.
I looked over at the wall. On the picture next to Jenette's was a picture of me..... and I was fighting Aurauria.
Hey, I remember that day.
And I looked at the pictures next to that.... and it told my entire history. From every battle I had fought, to every doughnut I had eaten. And then there was the last picture. It was something that made no sense. I was holding a septer that had a jewel at the top of it, and I was wearing a cape. I pointed to the picture.
What's that one?
Jenette smiled.
That's your future.
What.... what am I doing?
Jenette smiled bigger.
Saving the world.






(Thank you Xela XIII for the idea of killing off Jenette and then bringing her back! :))



Hey guys, guess what? I'M IN THE TIAJNAD MOOD AGAIN! I've gotten more ideas into my brain, and I think I'm going to write 10 books in total! :) Might stil be 9, though.... it depends on how many ideas I have in all....

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TheOneDirectioner » Sat Apr 28, 2012 11:34 am

YAYAYAYAY!
I used to be TheHungerGamer, then I changed it...k bai

The Truth wrote:
I guess Gale's cool, but Peeta's THE BOY WIT THE BREAD


Yea, you can't say The Truth is wrong.

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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Sat Apr 28, 2012 12:54 pm

JENEATTE IS BACK! YA BABY!
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby nezuko. » Sat Apr 28, 2012 1:13 pm

    That was a beautiful entry. ♥
    Jenette is BACK!
    And yay, new TIAJNAD ideas! <33333

















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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby kaypatts » Sat Apr 28, 2012 1:28 pm

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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TPDebate » Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:01 am

YAY!!! 10 BOOKS!! That means at least two more books!! Jenette is alive!!! CS more fun than ever!!!! YAY!!!!
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:59 am

TheHungerGamer wrote:YAYAYAYAY!

I shall yay with you.... YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!
xxazul63xx wrote:JENEATTE IS BACK! YA BABY!

XD You sound like my dad (he says "ya baby" quite a lot. XD)
Artemis's Arrow wrote:
    That was a beautiful entry. ♥
    Jenette is BACK!
    And yay, new TIAJNAD ideas! <33333

Aww, thank you! And yush, I am very happy about the new TIAJNAD ideas floatin' around in my brain.... that sounded way weirder then I meant it to. XD
Kayla wrote:Jennette is back! I LOVE U

XD
whoa gal1 wrote:YAY!!! 10 BOOKS!! That means at least two more books!! Jenette is alive!!! CS more fun than ever!!!! YAY!!!!

Yush, 10 book! YES! I'm even happy about that!

Oh, and stalkerwans. I have some news that might make you happy. You know about the poll above (at the very top of the page)? Well.... I think I've decided that I actually am going to write a different journal. I will tell you what I decide when I decide it. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TPDebate » Sun Apr 29, 2012 8:40 am

great!! but now I want one about Jennatte because of the whole time thing.
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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