Pet Stories

[cookies.]

Thanks i called it, The Horse Tail (Tail=Tale)

[Pongo.]

i started out as a foal of natural color, i was un-usually white, i was different, but of a normal color. my mother was brown and white, and my father was black and white. my master was very upset, and he sold me. i was sold to a family with a 7 year old girl, and a 17 year old boy. the boy thought it would be funny to tie-dye me. he got the die ALL over me. i looked RIDICULOUS! he laughed and laughed and laughed! the little girl wanted to know what was so funny, and when she walked into the open barn, she stared at me with a HUGE grin, she thought i looked perfect,they only had me a couple days and hadn't named me, thats when the girl named me... Rainbow, it was horrible... all the other horses laughed at me and teased me.
it was now time for the county fair, i was still all tie-dyed... i was going to be in the horse show. when the judges came, the gave me 2nd place! they said i was really an original horse, then, i realized, its ok to be different, i got tie-dyed every month or so and i enjoyed it C:

[Quiting]

Aww thats cute! I like the story, ts pretty realistic.

[Taisi]

i started out as a foal of natural color, i was un-usually white, i was different, but of a normal color. my mother was brown and white, and my father was black and white. my master was very upset, and he sold me. i was sold to a family with a 7 year old girl, and a 17 year old boy. the boy thought it would be funny to tie-dye me. he got the die ALL over me. i looked RIDICULOUS! he laughed and laughed and laughed! the little girl wanted to know what was so funny, and when she walked into the open barn, she stared at me with a HUGE grin, she thought i looked perfect,they only had me a couple days and hadn't named me, thats when the girl named me... Rainbow, it was horrible... all the other horses laughed at me and teased me.
it was now time for the county fair, i was still all tie-dyed... i was going to be in the horse show. when the judges came, the gave me 2nd place! they said i was really an original horse, then, i realized, its ok to be different, i got tie-dyed every month or so and i enjoyed it C:

Isn't that story a lot like I just said should be a story?

[Pongo.]

i started out as a foal of natural color, i was un-usually white, i was different, but of a normal color. my mother was brown and white, and my father was black and white. my master was very upset, and he sold me. i was sold to a family with a 7 year old girl, and a 17 year old boy. the boy thought it would be funny to tie-dye me. he got the die ALL over me. i looked RIDICULOUS! he laughed and laughed and laughed! the little girl wanted to know what was so funny, and when she walked into the open barn, she stared at me with a HUGE grin, she thought i looked perfect,they only had me a couple days and hadn't named me, thats when the girl named me... Rainbow, it was horrible... all the other horses laughed at me and teased me.
it was now time for the county fair, i was still all tie-dyed... i was going to be in the horse show. when the judges came, the gave me 2nd place! they said i was really an original horse, then, i realized, its ok to be different, i got tie-dyed every month or so and i enjoyed it C:

Isn't that story a lot like I just said should be a story?

i dont know, i just started writing, i didnt read your post until after i posted this C:

[leafrost]

will it be fine for me to write my own pet story here? im new at chickensmoothie, (well kind of) and im a little nervous

[Quiting]

To answer to your question, of course you can write on here. It is for anyone.

Part 2

On a ranch in Texas, USA, two wild horses were being led toward the stables. The humans holding the ropes, hot and sweaty, tied each horse up in an individual stable, where they were separated by half a wall. They were fed water and oats. One, a female white horse, sagged almost to the ground, exhausted. The male, looking much like his companion, stood tall, but had a defeated look in his eyes. His black, dusty mane covered most of his face.

A man approached them, holding hair clippers. He went inside the female's stable, and led her out. Not bothering to resist, the horse followed. They rope was handed to another man. Three other men surrounded the horse, ready to hold her if necessary.

The man reached out, taking a clump of hair between his fingers. He held the clippers up to the hair. The white horse, surprised, tried to wiggle away. "Hey now," the man murmured. "I'll just be giving you a small hair cut, than you can go." The man had a soft, soothing voice, which made the horse calm down.

The horse was led back to the stall, where she looked over to her father, who was staring at her. He tossed his head, acknowledging her shorter mane. She lowered her head, shaking out her short mane.

Suddenly, the male horse reared as humans approached. He slammed down, warning them. The man who had cut her hair tried to calm him down, with no success. The female looked up, then lowered her head again, leaning against the side. That is how I should have acted. I shouldn't have let them touch me.

The man grabbed onto a rope of the horse's, yanking it sharply. He unlatched the door, pulling the stallion out. The male reared again, but was yanked down. The man pulled him to where the female got her mane chopped, and tied him to the post. Another rope was put around his neck, which he had another man hold. Avoiding being bit, he started snipping at the hair.

They finally finished, taking much longer than they had before. The horse put up a struggle, but lost most of his mane just the same. He had been brought back to the stable, where both ashamed horses kept their heads down, planning on how to escape.

[cookies.]

((Will post my story. Not complete though.))

[Pongo.]

(Link goes here when I get off my kindle fire)


I frolic all day like when I was a puppy. But before I reached this wonderful world. I was born into a cold world in the dead of winter. Only 2 of us survived. There was originally 4. Mother was very upset. But she stayed alive to feed my sister and I until we were strong enough to live on our own.


We were woken up when mother left us in the cold. It had been a year. We were taught the skills we needed to survive. Mother had drunk green water and became very sick. When she left, We found her asleep, the kind of asleep that you never wake up from. We were on our own. We left the comfort of our forest and ventured to the busy pavement. It had metal things that moved on wheels and whizzed by us on the asphalt. It was getting warmer though. The white snow was now grey mush.

It was time to find food. We crossed the street after a car went by, we heard a loud nose then a loud honk. It was painful, I felt the metal thing on wheels hit me. It HURT. I got up quickly and ran to the side of the road. After a while, a white van pulled up next to me. A man with a net stood in front of me. He had food. It sleeked good. Si, I allowed him to come, I wagged my tail to show the I was friendly I got food, then, I was being lifted, I let out a yelp and the man almost dropped me, it really hurt, my tail my back leg and my back, my tail got ran over. The man comforted me. And told me I was a good boy. Last I checked. I am NOT a boy...

(I need to get on a computer so I can fix the typos and continue the story... BRB)

[cookies.]

~Horse Tale~
Characters:

Grandfather Jewel (Mom):

Shadow (Dad): Well, I don’t really know. (Me):



I was a small horse. Living in a village called… Well, I don’t really know what the humans called them. But I was so called the “Horse Slave”. I remembered that name because I used to be one of them. They killed my parents. Well, I really should start from the beginning.. It happened 100 years ago. From what my grandfather told me…. They died before they even gave me a name…
100 years ago……..
Back in the old times, I wasn’t even born yet… “Look at my baby mare, all grown up.” Jewel said smiling. Shadow looked down at the baby mare. “Well what should we call her?” Shadow said nuzzling the baby mare. “I don’t know…I know! I will call you……” Jewel said before finishing, a man came in and toke Jewel by her hair and pulled her out of the stables. The baby mare whinned for her mother. Shadow stamped his hoofs as the man stormed into the stable and toke Jewel out by pulling on her hair. Shadow nuzzled and licked the baby mare. “Its aright little on. I am here.” Shadow said not wanting to think what the man might do to her after giving birth. Another man came in. But wait.. it wasn’t a man, but a women. Shadow was shocked. The women always stayed in the village’s houses. He went in-front of the baby mare when she came over running. “Its alright, there.” The women said stroking his head then his nose. “My children told me you had a baby. Let me see.” The women said going behind Shadow. Shadow whinned and stamped his hoofs. The women shushed him and looked at the baby mare. The women picked up the baby and put the baby in a basket. A cannon burst and sounded the explosion. Shadow whinned once more and stamped his hoofs. The women gasped and picked up the basket with the baby mare inside and ran out. Knight ran after the women but the stable door shut close. He kicked the door with his hind legs. Cracking the door and opened. He jumped through the crack and looked around for either Jewel or his baby mare. He knew if he saved Jewel, she and he would be heart-broken for the baby mare. But if he saved the baby mare, he might not be in time to save his beloved Jewel. He was thinking when another cannon burst came out. He panicked and ran to Jewel, where she was carrying 50 times more the weight then her. Well, she was used to it. But never for Shadow. He wanted to help Jewel, but the man always whipped him, threw rocks at him and kicked his until he couldn’t stand up and kept on vomiting for 3 hours. He looked at the plane flying above the village as they were about to throw bombs. He whinned and warned all the horses there are danger. The horses bucked their riders, what they are carrying and ran off to where Shadow was. As you can see, shadow was the Lead Male. And Jewel was the Lead Mare. The horses stopped as they reached Shadow. The man and villagers started to aboard the train. Shadow looked at the villagers. He looked for the women carrying their baby mare. The train left…Without any of their horses. There must be no space for horses or any animals. It’s up to Shadow and Jewel to find their baby and escape their slavery and make sure no horses are captured and tortured as they were. Shadow looked at Jewel. Jewel looked back. “We have to find our baby mare.” Jewel said sadly. Shadow nodded and called for the horses. “It’s time. The time we have all been waiting for. Escaping. But now, we are on another journey. The journey to save our herd and protect the horses in this world!” Shadow said as the horses bucked whinned and stamped their hoofs in agreement. Shadow nodded to the horses the Jewel. Looks like it’s time to head to the desert! Shadow said heading to the path for the desert with the horses following behind and dogs, cats, birds and other animals left behind followed.

At the middle of the desert…..
Shadow whinned when bomb explosions landed right near him and his herd. He whinned and stamped his hoofs warning the horses. The horses whinned back and ran for cover. Shadow ran behind while he nudged Jewel to be the safest. A bomb landed on his slight hoof and he neighed.

What will happen next? Part 2 coming up!
~The End~