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Postby Qiokkabee » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:04 pm

VERY GOOD!!! VERY GOOD SO FAR!!! The scar part is so funny! I laughed real hard!
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Postby Foi » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:26 pm

duque_18 wrote:VERY GOOD!!! VERY GOOD SO FAR!!! The scar part is so funny! I laughed real hard!

Thank you very, very much, I'm glad you think so.
You may not know it, but you and my other fans are really inspiring me to right more. <33
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Postby Qiokkabee » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:43 pm

No prob! I'm glad when I make someone happy! Do you have any other stories you've made, oir is this your first one on CS?
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Postby Foi » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:45 pm

duque_18 wrote:No prob! I'm glad when I make someone happy! Do you have any other stories you've made, oir is this your first one on CS?

I have a few that I've given up, such as S P I C E, and some other ones that I did before I learned to write properly, so they suck.
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Postby Qiokkabee » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:46 pm

May you please give me all the links? Pm them to me? Maybe I can edit your work! ^^
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Postby Foi » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:54 pm

duque_18 wrote:May you please give me all the links? Pm them to me? Maybe I can edit your work! ^^

Oh, that's really not necessary, though thank you for the offer. <3
I have lost my muse for them, and probably will never write them again.

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Postby Qiokkabee » Wed Apr 25, 2012 1:04 pm

Thanks! ^^
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Postby Foi » Wed Apr 25, 2012 4:36 pm

Bump. New part soon. c;
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Postby Qiokkabee » Thu Apr 26, 2012 9:15 am

Okay! ^^
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Postby elie53 » Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:06 pm

Apple Ƨpice wrote:Aweh, thank you, I'll have to credit you in the first post. My ever-so helpful part-time editor. xD


Awww, yay!! ^o^ I'm so honored 8D
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