My Haiku
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My Haiku
by art_dancer » Fri Apr 20, 2012 10:27 am
Silence
In here I'm alone,
but I feel there's some one else.
Am I going mad?
Please comment and feel free to post your poems here.
In here I'm alone,
but I feel there's some one else.
Am I going mad?
Please comment and feel free to post your poems here.
"Dancing is the air I breathe."
~Unknown
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"Every child is an artist. The problem is how to remain an artist once we grow up."
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Re: My Haiku
by Flightstar » Fri Apr 20, 2012 12:52 pm
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!
Feel free to refer to me as Flightstar or Flighty! She/Her - I am an adult!
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Re: My Haiku
by You are a Pirate » Fri Apr 20, 2012 2:19 pm
I love it. Short, sweet, and full of feeling. Amazing job!
"Why?" The girl cried. "Why can't we be together? I love you more than anything, yet you reject me."
The boy tore away. "I-I'm sorry. I can't tell you."
She wept. "I must know. Please, tell me why."
The boy stayed silent.
"Please..." She said. "I love you."
He finally replied. "I can't love you because...because you are a pirate."
The girl stared at him. "I'm a what?"
"You are a pirate, you're all pirates except me! Because I'm a princess!"
The girl narrowed her eyes. "Isn't it the other way around? I am a pirate, you are a princess?"
"NU! You are a pirate, and I'm a pretty pretty princess! M'kay?!"
"What?"
"Problem?"
The boy tore away. "I-I'm sorry. I can't tell you."
She wept. "I must know. Please, tell me why."
The boy stayed silent.
"Please..." She said. "I love you."
He finally replied. "I can't love you because...because you are a pirate."
The girl stared at him. "I'm a what?"
"You are a pirate, you're all pirates except me! Because I'm a princess!"
The girl narrowed her eyes. "Isn't it the other way around? I am a pirate, you are a princess?"
"NU! You are a pirate, and I'm a pretty pretty princess! M'kay?!"
"What?"
"Problem?"
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Re: My Haiku
by art_dancer » Fri Apr 20, 2012 11:26 pm
Amazing I love your story so unpredictable.
I also wrote a poem called "A Dream" on another post.
I also wrote a poem called "A Dream" on another post.
"Dancing is the air I breathe."
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~Pablo Picasso
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Re: My Haiku
by art_dancer » Fri Apr 20, 2012 11:29 pm
Here's the poem I was talking about.
A Dream
A dream is like a baby plant,
it needs water and sunlight to grow,
but to see the beauty in it,
that is a whole other thing you know.
To see the beauty of a dream,
love is all it will ever need.
A dream is like a baby plant,
it needs water and sunlight to grow,
but to see the beauty in it,
that is a whole other thing you know.
To see the beauty of a dream,
love is all it will ever need.
"Dancing is the air I breathe."
~Unknown
"The one exclusive sign of thorough knowledge is the power of teaching."
~Aristotle
"Every child is an artist. The problem is how to remain an artist once we grow up."
~Pablo Picasso
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Re: My Haiku
by Annie! » Fri Apr 20, 2012 11:56 pm
It is very short. But it is also very creative. Here's one of mine.
Oops! g2g! Sorry.
Oops! g2g! Sorry.
Sometimes life gets bad and you need a friend to be there for you. And then you realize you have none.
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