Let the 23rd Annual Hunger Games Begin!~Semi-lit/Need 6 more

[zippyzoo77]

((@shadow- Several things, numbered for your convience.
1. Still need that writing example.
2. Capitalization. Fix it.
3. The personality on the tribute is way too short. It needs to be 4 lines long, no exceptions. If you can't get at least four lines (which is also the minimum length for posts in this roleplay) out of your character's personality, then you aren't literate enough for this roleplay.
4. The history's a bit better, but not good enough. It needs to be 5 lines long. I will be taking no exceptions here either. The same goes, here as with the personality, but you need a line more. You're character is 17, something interesting has to have happened to them at least once.
5. Your weakness can't be "getting hurt" it's too broad. Squeamishness- maybe, but not just getting hurt. Can they defend against knife attacks? What about survival skills other than hunting?
6. Less a point to work on in your form, more of one to work on over all. I have looked through your posts and I don't see any that are long enough for this roleplay. I expect 4 lines in every character post you do. And more on occasion. If you can't do that, then you won't be accepted. Good grammar, punctuation, and spelling are essential to this roleplay, (And Sherlock will catch most, if not all, of them, if I don't.) so you will need to step it up a bit to keep up here.

I will be giving you one more chance, so don't tell me you're done with the edits until you're certain you've got it all there. You can tell me via PM if you would like, and please send the writing example there too.

I know I sound strict, and I am, but I also hate having to kick people out for not being literate enough, so I do want to make sure you are.))

[~*~Aqua~*~]

Name:Kristina Rose
District:6
Age:17
Gender:Girl
Weapon preferred:Bow and Arrow
Strengths:Archery, climbing, agility
Weaknesses:spears, fishing
Personality:Quiet, shy, and athletic.
Alliances:N/A
Crush/BF/GF: N/A
Skills: Very good at climbing trees and has great aim with her bow and arrows.
Pic/reference:
(A little darker brown hair than that, though)
Other:Family: Mother, Father who died along with her older sister, Younger Sister, and Older Sister who died ( was killed by Peacekeepers when she was 7 )

[~*~Aqua~*~]

Sorry, nevermind

[zippyzoo77]

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[PapaRoachFan]

--I'm sorry to say but I'm not sure I will be able to finish. I'm not very good at playing multiple characters and I'm low on muse at the moment. Super sorry if I was of any inconvenience.--

[zippyzoo77]

Which spots did you have reserved?

[zippyzoo77]

bumps

[zippyzoo77]

Never mind, I found them. I hate to see you leave before it starts, but if you want to you are free to do so. Thanks for telling me so that I could remove your reservations.

[zippyzoo77]

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[zippyzoo77]

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