Pet Stories

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Okay. Thanks. I tried to write a different type of story this time, I tried to mix it up a bit.

[SilverDust144]

Okay. Thanks. I tried to write a different type of story this time, I tried to mix it up a bit.

Yeah, I really like it

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should i create more pet stories?

Tell me what it should be about i prefer realistic animals.

[Pongo.]

Annie http://www.chickensmoothie.com/viewpet.php?id=1276884
Buddy http://www.chickensmoothie.com/viewpet.php?id=1400355

The Rainbow Bridge
There is a bridge connecting heaven and Earth.
it is called the Rainbow Bridge because of its many colors. Just this side of the Rainbow Bridge is a land of meadows, hills and valleys, all of it covered with lush green grass.
When a beloved pet dies, the pet goes to this lovely land. There is always food and water and warm spring weather. There, the old and frail animals are young again. Those who are maimed are made whole once more. They play all day with each other, content and comfortable.
There is only one thing missing. They are not with the special person who loved them on Earth. So each day the run and play until the day comes when one suddenly stops playing and looks up! Then, the nose twitches! The ears are up! The eyes are staring! You have been seen, and that one suddenly runs up from the group!
You take him or her and embrace. Your face is kissed again and again and again, and you look once more into the eyes of your trusting pet.
Then, together, you cross the Rainbow Bridge, never again to be separated.

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Any ideas?

Nice one!

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Well, from what I've seen you lack description in parts that need it and have too much in parts that don't. Maybe you can make it evened out?

Can you give me an example from my story?

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BUMP for you

[SilverDust144]

Well, from what I've seen you lack description in parts that need it and have too much in parts that don't. Maybe you can make it evened out?

Can you give me an example from my story?

Sorry I've been really busy lately and I can't really give you an answer at the moment. I'll do my best to get back to you as soon as possible.

[SilverDust144]

Any ideas?

Nice one!

No but keep em coming

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Still got no ideas