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A White Wolf's Tail

Postby DreamCaster » Thu Feb 16, 2012 8:12 am

Hey there users this is my second story i've made i know im terible but i'll write any way.
NOTE:When words are writen ,like this,it means some one ,mainly the wolf is talking in their mind(s).
And also if you have any advise or sujestions please do share.
The Prologue~:about a young white she wolf who at young age aciedently gets lost into a misterious (none magic) world
she hardly knows and faces meny dangerous taskes in life.And it all stars with Footsteps,A train and train tracks.(add more later)
CHAPTER 1
Footsteps And The Train -

In a cold dusty alley near a train station there was Tessa and her five pups; Aramis, Seraphim, Cyrano, Avlynn and Tera.
"Mamma where are we going?,"asked Avlynn looking up at her mother who was pantienly waiting for the sign.
"Somewhere safe my child,"replied Tessa her fur, pure white, shone like bright silver star dust as it does in the darkest of places.
"Why can't we stay with our master?" said Tera jumping on top of her brother Aramis. Tera was a white she wolf aswel.
Aramis looked up then and heard a thumping noise.
"Mum... what is that?".
Tessa, hearing the noise too, gasp. "Footsteps," she sighed,"he's here already."
Just then a black and white husky jumped out from the opposite dirrection.
"We have to move fast,"he said,"follow me".
"Do as he says dears,"Tessa said nudging them to where he was going.
The husky led them through holes, gaps between gates and finally into a big metal thing majiggy.
"WHAT IS THAT THING!,"asked th pups rather afaid and ran behind their mother.
"Do not fear,"she jumped in an open storage door where there were alot of boxes,"It's a train a vicle humans use to get around in."
"Pfft I wasn't scared mamma i was just curious,"said Seraphim being big headed.
"Liar unless being curious is being a scaredy cat, "Aramis teased.
The sound of footsteps seem to appear at a slow pace.
"HURRY!"Tessa screamed then the husky began to help Tessa bring the pups into a crate.
"I wish i could come with you Tessa bu-," his eyes sadened and lowered his voice. "You know how it is, sorry."
"Akino you have no need to be sorry,"she smiled as sweet as she could be to him. "You've been a good friend."
The sound of footsteps appeared again but LOUDER along with voices of men.
"I'll distract them enough till your train leaves." Knowing this was the last time he'll see his best friend he said, "Goodbye Tessa may the gods of wolves help you," he turned around and howled mighty and proud.
Tessa howled back as a tear slipped from her sky blue eyes.
The train set off leaving every where around it full of black smoke and made it hard to breathe in.
Tessa closed the door and her fur made light for them through out the darknessof the room.
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby DreamCaster » Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:29 am

CHAPTER 2
SAFE -

Early morning air filled the room from all sides.
Tera woke to the sound of tweating birds who were perched on a shelf just a few feet above her.
Her stomach made a noice she knew it wasn't suposed to be making.
Tessa was asleep and the others were snugled up close to her.
"Mamma," she said in a low voice whilist nudging her mother, but Tessa continued to sleep and repeated saying a word.
Tera stood silent for a moment to hear, "Safe, some were safe," Tessa mumbled.
I'll just find some thing to eat on my own, she thought to herself walking away from them and ducked underneath a hole which led to the very back of the so called train. It had no walls nor a roof just boxes and crates strapped from the sides to the floor.
Tera made her way to the back and sat down to view that there was not many surroundings, only mountains gaurded by two forests of trees and stone separated by the train tracks which were the only signs of human inhabitance. The ground had white soft looking dust which fell from the sky, she'd never seen such a thing before.
Some thing had gripped her from the back, she fell to her paws then jumped to try and attempt to swing her sharp claws at it.
"STOP!" It screatched before she could do anything, It was Aramis.
She got up on her four legs, "WHY DID'YA DO THAT FOR, DO YOU KNOW WHAT COULD OF HAPPEND?!" she demmanded.
"It was only for fun, I didn't mean to...,"Terra could see the dumb look on his face and nudged him, "I'm sorry".
They stayed out there sitting near the edge of the roofless carrage, Seraphim was about to join them when he cought eyeof a bird and started chasing it around the deck, "NOO!!!" he screamed as he slipt into Aramis and Terra.
Aramis was almost knocked off the side however Terra was no where to be seen...
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby DreamCaster » Sat Mar 24, 2012 11:11 am

Continueing...
"HELP!"a shriek came from the back of the train, "I'm slipping!"
"Hang on!"her brother called, "I'm going to get Mother," she heard Seraphim say and ran off.
CRANK! A piece of the bar that was holding Terra up swang to the left side causing her to go directly infront of the trains HUGE and heavy wheels "HELP!!!"bshe screamed with tears falling down her cheeks. By this time her head was spinning and all she was thinking about was, "Whats going to happen? Am I to die like this? Will any one miss me?"
Just then Aramis managed to stick his head low enought to catch her scruff but he didn't have the strength to pull her up. "HANG ON! STAY HERE!" She could literaly hear his words being screaming in her mind.
CRACK! The floor under Aramis's paws broke off and there was loud yelling and shouting, "NO! NOT MY PUPS TAKE ME INSTEAD! CURSE YOU ZEPHOS!" Tessa kept screaming for a while after that every thing went as a blur...
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby DreamCaster » Sun Mar 25, 2012 1:23 pm

Continueing...
Tera limped across from the scene to a nearby tree for cover, blood stains had streamed down her back of white and turned it to red, the white floor was soft but cold and made her bones shake.
There was movement everywhere however no one to see in clear sight.
Darkness grew, the white dust began falling harder and noises appeared in the wind. Howls of some sort, maybe foxes but something eles too.
ZUZUZU! Some thing ran straight past her, she looked it was a mountain lion and a middle aged cub.
"Next time take her down!" She heard the large one snarl.
"Why can't we find a diffrent prey?" He looked at her in pity he didn't seem like the type who'd kill.
"Don't argue with me Koper, GO!" and she started runing as fast as she could, althought it wasn't fast enough. She went through trees and bushes.
Tera looked back for a moment to check if they were still there. RAWUG! it seemed the small cub disobeyed but The large lion was right on her tail, "I'm ganna die...wait whats that? I'm ganna DIE!" she said in her imagination. Up ahead were a ULTRA,MEGA,MASIVE waterfall about a thousand feet up or should she say down.
She didn't have time to stop the lion wasn't going to give up until ether she was dead or they both were!
Tera had no choice but to jump so she did...
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby DreamCaster » Tue Apr 03, 2012 12:28 pm

Continueing...
Tera blacked out for several seconds and felt like she was floating away into a black corner where she'd never return from,
I guess this is the end for me ,i have no futer, i am nothing i have nothing to offer this world that is why it is throughing me out.
EEEK! NOOO!,She openned her eyes and saw a ledge agent to the waterfall, bellow her with the middel aged lion cub
and a black and grey wolf pup were yelling in horro,as they watched her fall toward them.
"QUICK! grab that vine!,"she heared the lio say to wolf,Koper went to a side and the wolf was at the other they both held
the Green ropes in their mouths ,"One, two, THREE PULL!," they did and created a web of some sort
Tera's body imediatly was trapped into it ,YES! ..maybe my life is worth some thing.
The pare lower their master minded web and Tera struggled to her paws ,she could hear her heart pounding like...like FOOTSTEPS!
Maybe it was her Kis-mit to end up here phaps an acciedent...,HOW the heck is she supose to know by this time her head was spinning and siding side to side of her BRIAN! (if that was posible) what is to be and not all she knew is she was safe...
For now...
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby zara244 » Tue Apr 03, 2012 12:58 pm

Wow! verry good! You did a very hard work doing this. Je, je, i will like to public these story in my forum, but quiet, i dont gonna do that whitout your permision. ;-)
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby DreamCaster » Tue Apr 03, 2012 1:34 pm

Thank you :D
and lol i'm not that good.
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i kind of need help
i need a good wolf god name (any)
and wolf names (2 male 1 female)
if any one can help.
for next chapter.
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby list the unknown » Wed Apr 04, 2012 2:17 pm

AHH!!!!! YAY!! more more!
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby AninaAna » Wed Apr 04, 2012 5:37 pm

I KILLED->CUPID wrote:Thank you :D
and lol i'm not that good.
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i kind of need help
i need a good wolf god name (any)
and wolf names (2 male 1 female)
if any one can help.
for next chapter.


Well I might be able to help
For the wolf god name I was thinking Dan (pronounced as in dun) I know it's short but it's often the short god names that wield the most power so it'd be like the wolf god Dan or the wolf goddess Dan just to put it in context for you (I think that's the word)
And a male name could be Sivanda(pronounced siv-un-du)..... Actually that sounds more girly so that would probably be the girls name if you used it.....
Another guys name might be Stiran (pronounced sti-run) and Gin
Hope you like the names and I have never used them (maybe one as a middle name for a Charrie that isn't yet on paper but....) by the way Great story!
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Re: A White Wolf's Tail

Postby leafpoppy1213 » Wed Apr 04, 2012 6:39 pm

this is really good!
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