Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
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What do you think about this thread?

It's great and creative!
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14%
I think it's nice to have something like this, especially when no copying is heavily stated.
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This is Pointless!
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It's peaceful knowing no copying without permission is strict here
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Total votes : 7

Re: Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Postby SilverDust144 » Tue Mar 27, 2012 9:54 am

PLEASE NO COPYING WITHOUT PERMISSION!

Warning: This poem contains violence. Viewers discresion is advised!

PLEASE COMMENT! I love to see what others think of my poems and to see how I can improve

Author's note: I write poems in Blank verse or Free Verse style, meaning they don't rhyme but do have a certain beat!

Deceiving

I loved you with all my heart,
But you just used me

I was butter in your hands as you smiled at me,
While Manipulating my every thought

You ripped out my heart and held it in your hand
As my blood spilt down and soaked the barren earth
And I still loved you with all my being

You killed a part of me day by day
While I loved you and fed your hungry soul
And your lust for blood

You deceived me!
"Giving Up doesn't always mean you're weak, Sometimes it means you're strong enough to let go!"


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Re: Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Postby FuzzyAlpacasWa2Here » Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:29 pm

(Hi! may I post part of my story? )
Hi There! I'm a Homestuck artist in 7th Grade. I love to draw and adopt pets on this game! :) I am IWarnedYouAboutElevatorsDude on Tumblr... LOL Bye!!!! P. S. emmaboo11312 is my Lil' Sister and guitarGoddess is my Step sister!

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Re: Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Postby SilverDust144 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:55 am

FuzzyAlpacasWa2Here wrote:(Hi! may I post part of my story? )


Go for it :) Post as much as you want :)
"Giving Up doesn't always mean you're weak, Sometimes it means you're strong enough to let go!"


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Love stories about pets? Love to write? Then come to Pet stories!
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Do you love pet journals? Do you love to write? Then come to Dear Mystery….
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1088448

Do you love to read stories write? Then come to Story scrap Book!
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Re: Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Postby SilverDust144 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 5:28 am

PLEASE DO NOT COPY WITHOUT PERMISSION!

Warning: Violence is in this poem, veiwers discresion is advised!

PLEASE COMMENT! I love comments on my work. It helps me fine tune things and lets me see what others think.

Author's Note: My poems are free verse/Blank verse meaning they don't rhyme but do have a certain beat!





Drowning in Tears

They run down my face
Into my mouth and nostrils,
Flooding to the point
Where I suffocate

The skin they touch
Burns with grief,
As if they were lave
In which incases my lungs,
Incapacitating them from use

Hard as I try
They flow,
And drown me
With their sorrows and woes

Gasp I may try
But to no prevail,
They coat my lungs
With the blackness they contain

Breath after breath,
Failed attempts,
Choking in misery.
Life ends
"Giving Up doesn't always mean you're weak, Sometimes it means you're strong enough to let go!"


Snow Whistle Adoptions!
viewtopic.php?f=22&t=1087664

Love stories about pets? Love to write? Then come to Pet stories!
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1087569

Do you love pet journals? Do you love to write? Then come to Dear Mystery….
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1088448

Do you love to read stories write? Then come to Story scrap Book!
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1087789


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Re: Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Postby SilverDust144 » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:15 am

Bump :)
"Giving Up doesn't always mean you're weak, Sometimes it means you're strong enough to let go!"


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viewtopic.php?f=22&t=1087664

Love stories about pets? Love to write? Then come to Pet stories!
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Do you love pet journals? Do you love to write? Then come to Dear Mystery….
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1088448

Do you love to read stories write? Then come to Story scrap Book!
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Re: Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Postby SilverDust144 » Thu Apr 05, 2012 2:32 pm

SilverDust144 wrote:Bump :)
"Giving Up doesn't always mean you're weak, Sometimes it means you're strong enough to let go!"


Snow Whistle Adoptions!
viewtopic.php?f=22&t=1087664

Love stories about pets? Love to write? Then come to Pet stories!
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1087569

Do you love pet journals? Do you love to write? Then come to Dear Mystery….
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1088448

Do you love to read stories write? Then come to Story scrap Book!
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1087789


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Re: Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Postby SilverDust144 » Fri Apr 06, 2012 1:05 pm

Bump
"Giving Up doesn't always mean you're weak, Sometimes it means you're strong enough to let go!"


Snow Whistle Adoptions!
viewtopic.php?f=22&t=1087664

Love stories about pets? Love to write? Then come to Pet stories!
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1087569

Do you love pet journals? Do you love to write? Then come to Dear Mystery….
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1088448

Do you love to read stories write? Then come to Story scrap Book!
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1087789


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Re: Writing Collection (For everyone!)

Postby SilverDust144 » Sun Apr 08, 2012 1:44 pm

Bump
"Giving Up doesn't always mean you're weak, Sometimes it means you're strong enough to let go!"


Snow Whistle Adoptions!
viewtopic.php?f=22&t=1087664

Love stories about pets? Love to write? Then come to Pet stories!
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1087569

Do you love pet journals? Do you love to write? Then come to Dear Mystery….
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1088448

Do you love to read stories write? Then come to Story scrap Book!
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1087789


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