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Re: hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

Postby .oOFrøstBittenOo. » Tue Mar 06, 2012 2:21 pm

Lolz :3 Bump
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Postby waitingonhope » Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:53 pm

*cough* PlEaZe CoNtInUe .oOFrøstBittenOo.
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Re: hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

Postby vespas » Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:15 am

Wow. This is amazing! I can't wait to read more! But maybe Ivory should be more sad about her parents and sister being dead.
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Re: hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

Postby .oOFrøstBittenOo. » Tue Apr 03, 2012 5:03 am

Uh... I didnt write this XD Im just bumping it
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Re: hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

Postby . ѕℰℰιиg . тнιиgѕ . » Sat Apr 07, 2012 10:11 pm

LOL

I wrote it. x3

And sorry that I was gone, and not writing, I was temporarily COPPA'ed. Sorryz.

BUT NOW I AM UNCOPPA'ED! YAYZ!
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Postby youngster joey » Sun Apr 08, 2012 3:46 am

This story is totally amazing so far, I do have to say that when I read the intro, I was kind of creeped out and I honestly wasn't expecting much, but as I began to read, I grew more interested. I cannot wait for the next part! :mrgreen:
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