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[maximum entropy]

Look back on page 17 I think please, guys...

[I Solemnly Swear]

What's on page 17? I looked there is nothing there

[I Solemnly Swear]

I would like to be an owner. I choose 6

[aberrant.]

So, I'm on the member list, I used to be Meg-n-mia, but then I changed it.... anyway... here's my story:
PROLOGUE
Erin woke up on a hard wood floor. Where is everyone? Erin asked her self looking around the empty gymnasium. Her face had several bleeding cuts on it. They have to be here! "Guys!" She called. "Is anyone here?" Erin looked around. She sat on the floor hiding her face in between her knees. Tears welled up in her bright blue eyes. An hour ago a tall man came in the gym with a gun. She got hit on the head with the gun and got knocked out. She didn't know what happened to her family or why they were even in the gym, but they were all gone. Erin stood up. "I will save you, I promise" She whispered clenching her fists.

I think I'm gonna stop now, and if anyone likes it, I will continue ^.^ I know, this is like suuuuper short, sorry, it is just the prologue, sooo yeaaa, more to come if anyone likes it ^.^

[aberrant.]

Okay, so a couple of people liked the Prologue, so here's a tad bit more. I don't know what to name the story, so I'm just going to say:

Yet To Be Named

Chapter 1

Erin slept there in that gymnasium that night, she had no where else to go, her house was locked, and her mom had the key. She used her blue sweat shirt as a pillow. The gym was cold, but she managed to still go to sleep. In her dreams she saw the man's face. She saw the look of terror on her family's face. She tossed and turned in her sleep. The only thing her dream was about was what the man looked like.
She woke up sweating and sat up. That's the man's face, I just know it. She thought to her self, referring to her dream. She wiped her eyes and stood up. Erin walked over to the gym door while putting her sweat shirt back on. She went out side. It was still night, and the stars were bright. She looked around for any clue onto were the man took her family. She saw skid marks made from tiers. Erin followed the skid marks. They stopped after a sharp turn out of the parking lot. She turned the way the marks did, and followed that road until it came to a split-off. Left, or right? She asked herself. "I'm going left," Erin said out loud.

Okay.. Ta Da! I know, It's short, I like to leave things off in cliff hangers, and I didn't want to make it like 16 billion paragraphs... That would take too long for me to write, and too long for you to read... It would be like your whole after noon
I hoped you enjoyed it

[I Solemnly Swear]

Ere is this story I'm writing, but I posted it on a sie for people who ACTUALLY post stories, and it is like a legit site for storywriting, so I'm wondering if I should post it here too. Please tell me your opinion!

[aberrant.]

yes... yes you should ^_^

[I Solemnly Swear]

Prologue

I have always loved spending time in the Castle's attic. The mystery the hidden items would bring to me was the most amazing feeling in the world. I remember looking through the boxes, as curious as a nine-year-old could be, or possibly even more. My parents have old me not to play here, for there are thing that would change forever, but I isn't listen, careless. The day I found his letter was the day I dreaded, yet couldn't be happier of. Not because it was my ninth birthday, but because it was the day I got closer to him, yet I isn't even meet him. "Dear Cindy" his note said, "If you are reading this that means I am no longer with you, because I would tell you this in person; I love you, I always have, I always will. I have left for my own selfish reasons, without you. I am so sorry, please accept my apology, like the good-hearted person I know you are. Your step-mother is what has driven me here, for she is the moster I never expected to meet. She took advantage of me, just so she can get to you. I am so sorry, Cindy. I fear I have ruined your life..."

[GentleMonster]

am i accepted? i never saw anything that said i was or wasn't...

[The Scribe]

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username: homeworkfan.
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? Yes, I will do the best I can.
What's your favorite color? Green.
Animal? A dog.
Fish? Pencilfish?
Type of mythical creature? A dragon.
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? I like elves.
Anything else (do not leave blank): I have been making up stories since before I could read. I used to pick up a book and make my own story from the meaningless letters. I enjoy writing and people often tell me that they like how much description I put into what I write.