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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby synthwave » Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:44 am

Meh, I deleted the story because it was kinda dumb to me. :p
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Hazza » Thu Mar 22, 2012 12:00 pm

((It was still pretty scary even though I didn't get it. I guess... everything she knew of loved was... disappearing in a matter of hours???))
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Sometimes, someone says something so small, and it just fits right into this empty space in your heart. <3

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby synthwave » Thu Mar 22, 2012 2:50 pm

Basically like that.

I didn't get it either. But it just came from the top of my head, so I deleted it. :p I might go write another.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dinofan247 » Thu Mar 22, 2012 3:46 pm

It was kind of an odd stupid death with no light just tree's above me.....

Death wish!!!!

I was always interested with death decomposing and maybe vultures would come and eat the person are you would burn to ashes i mean i would wanna dye in my lover's eye's but i'd kinda rather not traumatize the person.Me and my friends played a game that we found in this old lady house she was strange but her grand son was giving things away he said his family didn't need this stuff they were religious . That sentence always repeated in my head i mean what did he mean by that i mean everyone knew that the old lady died by falling down stairs but wow... why would some one say that with no reason. Me i usually would of just ignored it but no after that day that we played that old weird game that we had to translate in 5 different languages things kinda went bad my cat died my friends animals died it was just weird. We finally searched the house again yes we broke in but what should we do think that that stupid young grandson of her's was gonna let us in? no. Gosh so finally we heard a noise we knew no one was there cause the grandson hated the place he paid someone to get all the stuff out just so he wouldn't have to step foot in the place. After many noises and a weird vase rolling down the stairs we got out the same way we got in as we ran to my house we noticed a light on in one of the rooms which was strange considering the electricity got cut off. We ran inside my house closing it behind us no body else was home my parent's had left to a stupid auction in California. My friends and i dashed to my room of course locking the house down first we noticed things out of place in my room which is weird considering i had to clean it before my parents left. After hours of worrying and re-assuring well cathy one of mine and faith's friend's we slowly closed are eyes and drifted off....

(3AM in the morning)

We all woke to banging,banging on walls doors we all jumped huddling closer to each other i took a deep breathe taking a flashlight and leading the amigo's to the hall way. Slowly glancing each way with the trusty light of the flashlight we slowly made are way down stares we heard a crash and looked at a vase that just fell infront of us. Jumping back we slowly go further finally the noises stopping we go back to my room slowly After 20 minutes we sit there staring at each other wide eyed. We heard another crash down stairs i jumped a bit not expecting anymore noises i slowly stand telling them to stay i walk down stairs with the flash light clenched in my hand i but then i realize i just heard my bed room door slam close. Then i hear screams i run as fast as i can but i trip out of thin air i trip but it felt like some one tugged on my ankle i get up and run to my door. I twist on the nob for the door to open but its close i bang on the door screaming for them to let me in finally the door opens. falling to the floor i scramble to get up but i wish i didn't cause right in front of me was my friends my dead friends there intestines spread everywhere across the floor there eye on my windows blood everywhere.
And a smiling old lady's grandson covered with blood i stare in horror and look at him in disbelief he looks at me but his face changes from evil to caring evil. He slowly walks up to me i shake my head backing up kinda shaking i hit against the wall as he rubs my cheek "Shh it'll be fine honey i just had to get them out of my way" he chuckles a bit. "W-why?" i stuttered as he put one of his hands on my waist and rubs some blood on my lips. He leans in looking at my lips "So we would have no distractions" He looks at me in the eye now. "You killed my friends" i said in a low teary voice yet no tears left my eye's. He smiles "Yes for us....every since i saw you i knew you where perfect" .He pauses looking at my face then back into my eyes "for me of course". "Why would i wanna be with the monster that killed my friends"i said with pure hate in my voice. I quickly push him off me and run down stares i run to the kitchen to get a knife but i get pulled back and slammed against the floor. He gets on top of me and holds my hands down "now why would you say that sweetie you love me dont you?". I spit in his face "I would rather dye you son of a B****" he slapped me. He chuckled "Your wish is my command" he picks me up and i punch him and kick him as hard as i can trying to get away but no use. Finally he lays me on a bed and tie's me down he gets his knife out and stabs me in the legs and arms not to kill but hurt. I scream louder than ever but then i feel lips against mine as the knife is stabbed into my leg i try to get him to stop but no use the pains to strong. he looks at me with anger in his eye "What do you wish for my dear" he said with a smile. I glared at him "Kill me I WISH THAT YOU WOULD KILL ME i'd rather not see your face ever again". With those last words i was stabbed that was the end to it i died in a bed of my blood he was never found it turns out he wasn't even real.....
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nonexsitent » Sat Mar 24, 2012 1:44 pm

Needs a Name!


The night air was thick and the silence heavy, two teenagers cuddled together under the fall moon of the night air. Ash pulled Vi in closer the cold air seemed to hang around them.
A woman sat on the bench across the street watching the two of them. The pier was quiet, just him, Vi and the old woman.
She wore a black dress and a black veil. She seemed to watch them, Vi gripped Ash's hand sending tingles up his spine like tiny electric shocks.
"I'm sorry the stadium was closed." She giggled and Ash smiled, he rubbed her arm in attempt to warm her.
"I'm sorry we had to spend our first date out in the cold." Ash chuckled. As the clock struck midnight the two teens stood and cuddled, the first snow drop falling upon the ground.
"That woman is still watching." Vi muttered and Ash smirked, the stars twinkled as the snow fell like wishes all around them.
"Let's give her something to goggle at." Ash whispered and Vi smiled, their lips locked a perfect moment to begin a new day.
"LEAVE THIS PLACE!" The old woman screeched, the two teens broke apart the old woman was stood pointing at them her long spindily fingers out stretched pointing at them with a burning hatred.
"Why?" Vi called out.
The old woman's hand never but her reply shook them, "IF YOU DON'T, YOU WILL JOIN THE DEAD!"
Vi trembled her hands slipped round Ash's waist.
"Do you think she means it?" She asked a shiver running down her spine. Ash smiled and shook his head.
"I doubt she even knows what she is saying." Ash chuckled.
The air shifted and the old woman was next to them; the veil covering her face.
"I WARNED YOU! YOU TEENS ARE ALL THE SAME! YOU IGNORE THE LOGICAL PENSIONER!" Her voice carried on the wind and echoed in their ears. Vi was wrenched from Ash's arms, he cried in shock as she was flung to the floor.
"Ouch!" She exclaimed climbing to her feet, instantly the woman was there prodding her with a blade and drawing the blood.
Ash leapt into action knocking her away.
"Leave her!" He warned.
"YOUR PARENTS DON'T APPROVE, WHAT MAKES YOU THINK YOU HAVE ANY CONTROL OVER ME?" The old woman roared and the two teens hugged. Flinching from the undescribable rage the woman showed, what had they done?
"We came here to be alone, not to be stabbed by some woman." Vi sobbed, Ash tried to comfort her, Vi's crimson blood slowly dripping upon the wooden pier.
"YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO BE TOGETHER! APPRECIATE THE LAWS OF YOUR FAMILIES!" The woman yelled. Vi shook her head and Ash joined in.
"No, not when we love eachother so..." Ash muttered and Vi slipped her hand within his again.
"GET UP!" The woman roared and the two of them obediantly climbed to their feet. The blade stabbed Violet first and Ash's cry was choked and sounded as if it came from a strangled cat. She fell back her blonde hair flowing her blue eyes wide with fright. Ash caught her just as the blade pierced his own chest.
The two teens tumbled into the water. Linked hands, they cuddled as they struggled for breath. To ease the flow of crimson pouring from their wounds. As dawn broke through the night sky they locked lips, to enjoy one last enternal kiss.

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Not really scary!

The old woman was a ancestor who started the family war the two teens were from the families at war (like romeo and juliet!) they fell in love and she punished them! I hope it's good!

Do any of you guys like it?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby MusicalMoony » Sat Mar 24, 2012 1:56 pm

єναи wrote:Oh, I found another one.
It's called Bloody Mary.

She lived deep in the forest in a tiny cottage and sold herbal remedies for a living. Folks living in the town nearby called her Bloody Mary, and said she was a witch. None dared cross the old crone for fear that their cows would go dry, their food-stores rot away before winter, their children take sick of fever, or any number of terrible things that an angry witch could do to her neighbors.

Then the little girls in the village began to disappear, one by one. No one could find out where they had gone. Grief-stricken families searched the woods, the local buildings, and all the houses and barns, but there was no sign of the missing girls. A few brave souls even went to Bloody Mary's home in the woods to see if the witch had taken the girls, but she denied any knowledge of the disappearances. Still, it was noted that her haggard appearance had changed. She looked younger, more attractive. The neighbors were suspicious, but they could find no proof that the witch had taken their young ones.

Then came the night when the daughter of the miller rose from her bed and walked outside, following an enchanted sound no one else could hear. The miller's wife had a toothache and was sitting up in the kitchen treating the tooth with an herbal remedy when her daughter left the house. She screamed for her husband and followed the girl out of the door. The miller came running in his nightshirt. Together, they tried to restrain the girl, but she kept breaking away from them and heading out of town.

The desperate cries of the miller and his wife woke the neighbors. They came to assist the frantic couple. Suddenly, a sharp-eyed farmer gave a shout and pointed towards a strange light at the edge of the woods. A few townsmen followed him out into the field and saw Bloody Mary standing beside a large oak tree, holding a magic wand that was pointed towards the miller's house. She was glowing with an unearthly light as she set her evil spell upon the miller's daughter.

The townsmen grabbed their guns and their pitchforks and ran toward the witch. When she heard the commotion, Bloody Mary broke off her spell and fled back into the woods. The far-sighted farmer had loaded his gun with silver bullets in case the witch ever came after his daughter. Now he took aim and shot at her. The bullet hit Bloody Mary in the hip and she fell to the ground. The angry townsmen leapt upon her and carried her back into the field, where they built a huge bonfire and burned her at the stake.

When she was dead, the villagers went to the house in the wood and found the unmarked graves of the little girls the evil witch had murdered. She had used their blood to make her young again. But, just before she had burned to death, Bloody Mary screamed a curse at the villagers. If anyone mentioned her name aloud before a mirror, she would send her spirit to revenge herself upon them for her terrible death.


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby MusicalMoony » Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:58 pm

(I dunno if this one has been shared...)

A young boy by the name of Johnny lived with his mother in a small poor village. They were the kindest but most broke family you could imagine.
One night, Johnny is asked by his mum to get a liver from the butcher's. Johnny accepts and his mum hands him some money that she earned that week at her work. Johnny heads off down the road to the butcher's... but Johnny was tempted by the feel of money in his hand and decided to keep it. "But where can I find a liver for free?" he asked himself. He glanced across the road at the local cemetary and headed over.
Johnny finds a grave that is only a fortnight old and digs it up. He finds the body successfully, cuts open the body, removes the liver, and recovers the body in its grave. And so he heads back home.
Johnny and his mother eat the liver for dinner.
The next night, Johnny is asked by his mum to get a heart from the butcher's. Johnny accepts and his mum hands him some money that she earned that day at her work. Johnny heads off down the road to the butcher's... but Johnny was tempted by the feel of money in his hand and decided to keep it. "But where can I find a heart for free?" he asked himself. He glanced across the road at the local cemetary and headed over.
Johnny finds the same grave of the old man from whom he stole the liver from the previous night and he redigs it up. He finds the body successfully, removes the heart, and rerecovers the body in its grave. And so he heads back home.
Johnny and his mother eat the heart for dinner.
The next night, Johnny is asked by his mum to get a kidney from the butcher's. Johnny accepts and his mum hands him some money that she earned that day at her work. Johnny heads off down the road to the butcher's... but Johnny was tempted by the feel of money in his hand and decided to keep it. "But where can I find a kidney for free?" he asked himself. He glanced across the road at the local cemetary and headed over.
Johnny finds the same grave of the old man from whom he stole the liver and the heart from the previous nights and he reredigs it up. He finds the body successfully, removes the kidney, and rererecovers the body in its grave. And so he heads back home.
Johnny and his mother eat the kidney for dinner.
But that night...
In his bedroom in the middle of the night, Johnny awoke to a voice outside his window. "Johnny. I want my liver back. I want my heart back. I want my kidney back. I'm gonna getcha." Johnny, a little scared, pushes the voice out of his mind and falls asleep again. Bt only a moment later, he hears the voice again. "Johnny. I want my liver back. I want my heart back. I want my kidney back. I'm in your bedroom. I'm gonna getcha." Johnny, terrified out of his mind, slips into his mum's room, not wanting to be alone. But yet again, he hears the voice coming from close by. "Johnny. I want my liver back. I want my heart back. I want my kidney back. I'm in your mother's room. I'm gonna getcha." Johnny, terrified out of his mind, slips into the bathroom. But yet again, he hears the voice coming from close by. "Johnny. I want my liver back. I want my heart back. I want my kidney back. I'm in the bathroom. I'm gonna getcha." Johnny, terrified out of his mind, slips into the kitchen. But yet again, he hears the voice coming from close by. "Johnny. I want my liver back. I want my heart back. I want my kidney back. I'm in the hallway. I'm gonna getcha." Johnny, terrified out of his mind, cowers in the corner. But yet again, he hears the voice coming from close by. "Johnny. I want my liver back. I want my heart back. I want my kidney back. I'm in the kitchen. I'm gonna getcha." Johnny, terrified out of his mind, closed his eyes... and screamed.
His mother awakes also and flies into the kitchen. She can see nothing but red splattered everywhere. "Johnny, I thought I told you to stop eating the expensive strawberry jam-" but as she rounds the counter, she gasped and cries out, falling to the ground and clutching her hair. Johnny's body is sprawled on the ground, torn open roughly with fingernails, drained. Autopsies later would reveal that some of his vital organs were missing... And beside him, written in his own blood, is a message.
"Johnny. I got my liver back. I got my heart back. I got my kidney back. Who's next?"
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the Grey Husky from the Christmas 2015 Husky litter, and the
Green Field Moon 2nd Gen from the April 2011 Field Moon 2nd Gen litter!

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I'm collecting the 2020 Easter bunnies designed by Anouki. They're based on a
Japanese pottery technique where items are repaired by glueing the pieces back
together with a (typically) gold lacquer. It's called "kintsugi" and the idea behind
this is that broken things can still be beautiful, a mantra that has helped me cope
with the latest years of my depression. I've been saving up for a tattoo, to be my
first one, which will also be fashioned after kintsugi. That's why this design holds
a lot of sentimental value for me and, consequently, why I'm setting up a hoard
for them: to remind myself that even though I'm still struggling now, I will get
better. Please help me with this hoard. Thanks for reading. ~Love from Moony
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Dovahkiin » Sat Mar 24, 2012 3:08 pm

I read CreepyPastas, but I never watch the videos because they scare me. I watched the Lavender Town Tune video and was like, "NOPE, NO MOAR VIDEOS FOR ME."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby beanbag1234 » Sat Mar 24, 2012 3:17 pm

whats that one about?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby leaving soon » Sat Mar 24, 2012 8:51 pm

Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
Needs a Name!


The night air was thick and the silence heavy, two teenagers cuddled together under the fall moon of the night air. Ash pulled Vi in closer the cold air seemed to hang around them.
A woman sat on the bench across the street watching the two of them. The pier was quiet, just him, Vi and the old woman.
She wore a black dress and a black veil. She seemed to watch them, Vi gripped Ash's hand sending tingles up his spine like tiny electric shocks.
"I'm sorry the stadium was closed." She giggled and Ash smiled, he rubbed her arm in attempt to warm her.
"I'm sorry we had to spend our first date out in the cold." Ash chuckled. As the clock struck midnight the two teens stood and cuddled, the first snow drop falling upon the ground.
"That woman is still watching." Vi muttered and Ash smirked, the stars twinkled as the snow fell like wishes all around them.
"Let's give her something to goggle at." Ash whispered and Vi smiled, their lips locked a perfect moment to begin a new day.
"LEAVE THIS PLACE!" The old woman screeched, the two teens broke apart the old woman was stood pointing at them her long spindily fingers out stretched pointing at them with a burning hatred.
"Why?" Vi called out.
The old woman's hand never but her reply shook them, "IF YOU DON'T, YOU WILL JOIN THE DEAD!"
Vi trembled her hands slipped round Ash's waist.
"Do you think she means it?" She asked a shiver running down her spine. Ash smiled and shook his head.
"I doubt she even knows what she is saying." Ash chuckled.
The air shifted and the old woman was next to them; the veil covering her face.
"I WARNED YOU! YOU TEENS ARE ALL THE SAME! YOU IGNORE THE LOGICAL PENSIONER!" Her voice carried on the wind and echoed in their ears. Vi was wrenched from Ash's arms, he cried in shock as she was flung to the floor.
"Ouch!" She exclaimed climbing to her feet, instantly the woman was there prodding her with a blade and drawing the blood.
Ash leapt into action knocking her away.
"Leave her!" He warned.
"YOUR PARENTS DON'T APPROVE, WHAT MAKES YOU THINK YOU HAVE ANY CONTROL OVER ME?" The old woman roared and the two teens hugged. Flinching from the undescribable rage the woman showed, what had they done?
"We came here to be alone, not to be stabbed by some woman." Vi sobbed, Ash tried to comfort her, Vi's crimson blood slowly dripping upon the wooden pier.
"YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO BE TOGETHER! APPRECIATE THE LAWS OF YOUR FAMILIES!" The woman yelled. Vi shook her head and Ash joined in.
"No, not when we love eachother so..." Ash muttered and Vi slipped her hand within his again.
"GET UP!" The woman roared and the two of them obediantly climbed to their feet. The blade stabbed Violet first and Ash's cry was choked and sounded as if it came from a strangled cat. She fell back her blonde hair flowing her blue eyes wide with fright. Ash caught her just as the blade pierced his own chest.
The two teens tumbled into the water. Linked hands, they cuddled as they struggled for breath. To ease the flow of crimson pouring from their wounds. As dawn broke through the night sky they locked lips, to enjoy one last enternal kiss.

* * * * * * * * * *


Not really scary!

The old woman was a ancestor who started the family war the two teens were from the families at war (like romeo and juliet!) they fell in love and she punished them! I hope it's good!

Do any of you guys like it?


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