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by Mz. Hyde » Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:17 pm
@ Moon : You should definately keep writing :)
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Red, red roses
For a valentine who will never love you
Sad, sad eyes
Shed when you finally face your fears
And they end in regection
Broken, broken heart
Broken, broken girl
They pretend to love you
But it's all just an act
Lonely, lonely
Broken
Corpse.
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?
- Hate It When You See Me Cry, Halestorm
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by Gothic_Wolf » Mon Mar 19, 2012 6:37 pm
Nice work both of you
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Can you let me go
Free me from this world
This one painted black
I gave up
I want to fall
But you still hold on
Release me from this pain
Let me fall
Don't let me live this lie
As you hold on
I am caused more pain
And you just smile
Tighten your wrists
You watch me suffer
So why wont you watch me die
Is beacuse I will win
Beacuse I will escape
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by Gothic_Wolf » Tue Mar 20, 2012 9:52 am
You only cause pain
Tears to sheed
But you take it to far
You made it a borken world
You tore it apart
I fight for my rights
My life
For all those who care
But I'm to weak
You torment me to much
Push me over the edge
So I grab the knife
And pierce my skin
Scarlet red blood pours out
My life starts to come to an end
It I die here
Who's fault is it really
The one who holds the knife
Or the one who passes it
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by Mz. Hyde » Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:17 pm
Great work everyone :)
@ Chirai : What kind of poem ?
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Bloodied arms
Tearstained eyes
Tried to be
The girl that they wanted
But she wasn't good enough
never good enough.
I'm your rock 'n' roll Joan of Arc
The queen of broken hearts
I'm here to save the world, but who will save super girl?
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by AninaAna » Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:36 pm
A Wolf Howls Into The NightAs the full moon emits a ghastly glow over the valley, a girl twists and turns in her sleep, hiding from the cold fingers that gripped her sweat caked body. A door opened in her bedroom and a head poked in, it had a black ski mask covering its hair and features, the young person motioned to another, who moved into the room with the first, the second persons hair came out the bottom of her ski mask, soft and brown, removing his mask the boy started to quietly search the room, glancing over at the sleeping child, whenever she made a noise in her restless sleep, the second followed his lead at the opposite end of the room, "where is it?" the boy hissed, and she shrugged " maybe Ashley doesn't keep it in her room" putting a brown hoodie back haphazardly on a chair the boy rolled his eyes " 'course she keeps it in her room, where else would it be?" the second shrugged again " why do you want it anyway Kiren? I mean it's just a stupid necklace, 'sides she's probably wearing it" Kiren just shook his head roughly, and impatiently, whilst proceeding to check Ashley's neck, it wasn't there. Her eyes opened. "Kiren?" she murdered sleepily, "what are you doing?" her eyes lifted to the girl just standing there, arms crossed, "and what is Sarah doing in my room?" ripping her skimask off of her head Sarah growled "What's the point of wearing these things if she's gonna recognize me anyway?"I hope you like it the rest is in my school diary/planner whatever you wanna call it pm me if you want the rest

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