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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby . ME » Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:42 am

Same with me; And I just ate tons of bacon and a piece of toast.
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The F E A R of falling apart
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The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby driftz » Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:47 am

Walkin on thin Ice… wrote:The Rake

During the summer of 2003, events in the northeastern United States involving a strange, humanlike creature sparked brief local media interest before an apparent blackout was enacted. Little or no information was left intact, as most online and written accounts of the creature were mysteriously destroyed.

Primarily focused in rural New York state, self proclaimed witnesses told stories of thier enounters with a creature of unkown origin. Emotions ranged from extremely traumatic levels of fright and discomfort, to an almost childlike sense of playfulness and curiosity. While their published versions are no longer on record, the memories remained powerful. Several of the involved parties began looking for answers that year.

In early 2006, the collaboration had accumulated nearly two dozen documents dating between the 12th century and present day, spanning 4 continents. In almost all cases, the stories were identical. I’ve been in contact with a member of this group and was able to get some exceprts from their upcoming book.

The Rake

A Suicide Note: 1964

As I prepare to take my life, I feel it necessary to assuage any guilt or pain I have introduced through this act. It is not the fault of anyone other than him. For once I awoke and felt his presence. And once I awoke and saw his form. Once again I awoke and heard his voice, and looked into his eyes. I cannot sleep without fear of what I might next awake to experience. I cannot ever wake. Goodbye.

Found in the same wooden box were two empty envelopes addressed to William and Rose, and one loose personal letter with no envelope.

‘Dearest Linnie,
I have prayed for you. He spoke your name.’

A Journal Entry (translated from Spanish): 1880

I have experience the greatest terror. I have experienced the greatest terror. I have experienced the greatest terror. I see his eyes when I close mine. They are hollow. Black. They saw me and pierced me. His wet hand. I will not sleep. His voice (unintelligible text).

A Mariner’s Log: 1691

He came to me in my sleep. From the foot of my bed I felt a sensation. He took everything. We must return to England. We shall not return here again at the request of the Rake.


From a Witness: 2006

Three years ago, I had just returned from a trip from Niagara Falls with my family for the 4th of July. We were all very exhausted after a long day of driving, so my husband and I put the kids right to bed and called it a night.

At about 4am, I woke up thinking my husband had gotten up to use the restroom. I used the moment to steal back the sheets, only to wake him in the process. I appologized and told him I though he got out of bed. When he turned to face me, he gasped and pulled his feet up from the end of the bed so quickly his knee almost knocked me out of the bed. He then grabbed me and said nothing.

After adjusting to the dark for a half second, I was able to see what caused the strange reaction. At the foot of the bed, sitting and facing away from us, there was what appeared to be a naked man, or a large hairless dog of some sort. It’s body position was disturbing and unnatural, as if it had been hit by a car or something. For some reason, I was not instantly frightened by it, but more concerned as to its condition. At this point I was somewhat under the assumption that we were supposed to help him.

My husband was peering over his arm and knee, tucked into the fetal position, occasionally glancing at me before returning to the creature.

In a flurry of motion, the creature scrambled around the side of the bed, and then crawled quickly in a flailing sort of motion right along the bed until it was less than a foot from my husband’s face. The creature was completely silent for about 30 seconds (or probably closer to 5, it just seemed like a while) just looking at my husband. The creature then placed its hand on his knee and ran into the hallway, leading to the kids’ rooms.

I screamed and ran for the lightswitch, planning to stop him before he hurt my children. When I got to the hallway, the light from the bedroom was enough to see it crouching and hunched over about 20 feet away. He turned around and looked directly at me, covered in blood. I flipped the switch on the wall and saw my daughter Clara.

The creature ran down the stairs while my husband and I rushed to help our daughter. She was very badly injured and spoke only once more in her short life. She said “he is the Rake”.

My husband drove his car into a lake that night, while rushing our daughter to the hospital. He did not survive.

Being a small town, news got around pretty quickly. The police were helpful at first, and the local newspaper took a lot of interest as well. However, the story was never published and the local television news never followed up either.

For several months, my son Justin and I stayed in a hotel near my parent’s house. After we decided to return home, I began looking for answers myself. I eventually located a man in the next town over who had a similar story. We got in contact and began talking about our experiences. He knew of two other people in New York who had seen the creature we now referred to as the Rake.

It took the four of us about two solid years of hunting on the internet and writing letters to come up with a small collection of what we believe to be accounts of the Rake. None of them gave any details, history or follow up. One journal had an entry involving the creature in its first 3 pages, and never mentioned it again. A ship’s log explained nothing of the encounter, saying only that they were told to leave by the Rake. That was the last entry in the log.

There were, however, many instances where the creature’s visit was one of a series of visits with the same person. Multiple people also mentioned being spoken to, my daughter included. This led us to wonder if the Rake had visited any of us before our last encounter.

I set up a digital recorder near my bed and left it running all night, every night, for two weeks. I would tediously scan through the sounds of me rolling around in my bed each day when I woke up. By the end of the second week, I was quite used to the occasional sound of sleep while blurring through the recording at 8 times the normal speed. (This still took almost an hour every day)

On the first day of the third week, I thought I heard something different. What I found was a shrill voice. It was the Rake. I can’t listen to it long enough to even begin to transcribe it. I haven’t let anyone listen to it yet. All I know is that I’ve heard it before, and I now believe that it spoke when it was sitting in front of my husband. I don’t remember hearing anything at the time, but for some reason, the voice on the recorder immediately brings me back to that moment.

The thoughts that must have gone through my daughter’s head make me very upset.

I have not seen the Rake since he ruined my life, but I know that he has been in my room while I slept. I know and fear that one night I’ll wake up to see him staring at me.

The mental image of it scrambling around the bed & then its position looking like it was hit by a car then it touching someone freaks me out :S
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby leaving soon » Mon Mar 19, 2012 5:28 am

*Angel~Fyre* wrote:((I thought this story in the car... ))

There was once a un-popuar, ugly girl and the only way to fill her dreams was to lisen to a particular raido station - but it wasn't so simple. That radio station ((6)) ((capital)) was said to drive people crazy and commit suicide, by a voice that controlled your mind. This girl was foolish and didn't belive such tales - a mistake she'd soon regret.

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Sitting in the car driving on a high hill, she pesterd her mum to put capital on. Her mum looked sadly at her and slowly pushed the button. Nothing un-useall happend- untill a sly voice came out off the speakers it said: "Turn left off the hillside, turn left of the hill side, if you don't I'll kill your daughter." The voice had a mind controlling edge to it. Maybye it was a joke, the girl thought. The voice said it again, but much more louder and dangerous. Suddenly the daughter began to scream, clutching her neck. With no choice the mother drove off the road and down the hillside. But it was too late - the daughter had died off suffication. When the police found the ruinded remains of the car two hourse later, they found made in the recige of the car was : ' why didn't you drive off in the first place?'

((the end.... Any one like???))) :D ))
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Hazza » Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:13 am

((I don't understand it that much... whats the plot?))
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That what I need to survive is not Gale’s fire, kindled with rage and hatred. I have plenty of fire myself. What I need is the dandelion in the spring. The bright yellow that means rebirth instead of destruction. The promise that life can go on, no matter how bad our losses. That it can be good again. And only Peeta can give me that.

Sometimes, someone says something so small, and it just fits right into this empty space in your heart. <3

There comes a point in every child's life, that they learn a dandelion is a weed. Not a flower.

Reach the unreached and touch the untouched.

Make a wish. Just because it makes you happy thinking about it if it did come true.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby . ME » Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:30 am

I think the plot was that the daughter didn't really believe anything would happen, but something did.


But..It makes no sense cause the people who control the radio wouldn't put something that makes people commit suicide on the radio....
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If you love me let me G O
‘Cause these words are K N I V E S that often leave scars
The F E A R of falling apart
And truth be told, I N E V E R was yours
The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Hazza » Mon Mar 19, 2012 7:31 am

((Also, how did the girl suffocate?))
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That what I need to survive is not Gale’s fire, kindled with rage and hatred. I have plenty of fire myself. What I need is the dandelion in the spring. The bright yellow that means rebirth instead of destruction. The promise that life can go on, no matter how bad our losses. That it can be good again. And only Peeta can give me that.

Sometimes, someone says something so small, and it just fits right into this empty space in your heart. <3

There comes a point in every child's life, that they learn a dandelion is a weed. Not a flower.

Reach the unreached and touch the untouched.

Make a wish. Just because it makes you happy thinking about it if it did come true.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby . ME » Mon Mar 19, 2012 9:12 am

The guy on the radio killed her. I guess he was a ghost or something.
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If you love me let me G O
If you love me let me G O
‘Cause these words are K N I V E S that often leave scars
The F E A R of falling apart
And truth be told, I N E V E R was yours
The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby MagicGirl_Helia » Mon Mar 19, 2012 9:15 am

If it was a ghost, the people at the radio station wouldn't be able to control it. So I think its a good story.
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"And wouldn't it be nice to live together,
In the kind of world where we belong..."

They were never scared
of the kids who might die,
or the empty spaces
they would leave behind.
"They were afraid of us
The ones who lived."
"It is the fire.
The spark.
Black is the color of memory.
It is our color.
The only one they'll use
to tell our story."
“I used to dream
about turning back time,
about reclaiming
the things I'd lost
and the person I used to be.
But not anymore.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Hazza » Mon Mar 19, 2012 9:17 am

Oooooooh
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That what I need to survive is not Gale’s fire, kindled with rage and hatred. I have plenty of fire myself. What I need is the dandelion in the spring. The bright yellow that means rebirth instead of destruction. The promise that life can go on, no matter how bad our losses. That it can be good again. And only Peeta can give me that.

Sometimes, someone says something so small, and it just fits right into this empty space in your heart. <3

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Reach the unreached and touch the untouched.

Make a wish. Just because it makes you happy thinking about it if it did come true.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby leaving soon » Tue Mar 20, 2012 4:00 am

I <3 VAL wrote:If it was a ghost, the people at the radio station wouldn't be able to control it. So I think its a good story.



Thx and I'm sorry I forgot to put the plot she/he got it right
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