An idea... From a Dream?

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An idea... From a Dream?

Postby the timey thing » Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:09 am

That I need your opinion on! Well it started last night, because this story is about a dream I had. I'm putting my own little tweaks to it so it isn't completely the same~ Remember, this is only one of the many dreams I had about this so stay in tuned!

-Insert title here-

Dream one....
A girl walked along a path, sword to her right, bow on her back. She had her eyes narrowed, thinking something was waiting for her. As soon as she stopped, a group of people came out, following her when she continued. The girl was Fang, the legendary girl with a curse to become a wolf whenever her rage is highest. The people following her were Spike, Fern, and Kain, her brothers that all could easily kill. It was soon be time for a large fight, but first they had to train, train to beat this devastating creatures.


Okay guys, comment below on what you think!
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TG: sup man names dave strider and im the only cool kid youll ever meet that has a decent amount of humor and loves to talk about size comparisons
TG: not
TG: im the knight of time and live in the land of land of heat and clockwork.
TG: there isnt much to say about me since it keeps the mystery pumpin like fireworks on the fourth of july
TG: i got balls of steel a voice of flat irony and nic cage really sucks
TG: apple juice is amazing and if i havent said it before
TG: i am the coolest kid around



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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby Medusa72 » Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:16 am

Wow! It looks really cool so far!!!
i will not sit down
did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby the timey thing » Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:19 am

Thanks~ Putting up Dream two now!

Dream Two...

THe girl growls, darting forward. She unsheathes her large, over grown claws and quickly skids to a halt. Her eyes look ahead, another group before them. They looks like creature from the dead, one looking like a mummy. She came face to face with the mummy, the two standing tall and proud, but still growling constantly. They turn away to there group, then turn around. All of Fang's group goes into a small stance, the other group just doing the weirdest stance you could of ever seen.
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TG: sup man names dave strider and im the only cool kid youll ever meet that has a decent amount of humor and loves to talk about size comparisons
TG: not
TG: im the knight of time and live in the land of land of heat and clockwork.
TG: there isnt much to say about me since it keeps the mystery pumpin like fireworks on the fourth of july
TG: i got balls of steel a voice of flat irony and nic cage really sucks
TG: apple juice is amazing and if i havent said it before
TG: i am the coolest kid around



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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby Medusa72 » Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:23 am

:o
Now that's just mean. You can't leave me hanging in the middle of an action part.
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did you ever make it out of that town

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where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby the timey thing » Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:24 am

Hey, dreams are dreams. xD I was all sad when I woke up from that dream. XD

Next dream will be posted when I get a few more people that like it~ ♥
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TG: sup man names dave strider and im the only cool kid youll ever meet that has a decent amount of humor and loves to talk about size comparisons
TG: not
TG: im the knight of time and live in the land of land of heat and clockwork.
TG: there isnt much to say about me since it keeps the mystery pumpin like fireworks on the fourth of july
TG: i got balls of steel a voice of flat irony and nic cage really sucks
TG: apple juice is amazing and if i havent said it before
TG: i am the coolest kid around



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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby Medusa72 » Tue Mar 13, 2012 4:28 am

XD
i will not sit down
did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby Into the Sky » Tue Mar 13, 2012 8:45 am

Nice ideas...or should I say dreams. xD
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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby the timey thing » Tue Mar 13, 2012 8:52 am

Thanks, to the next dream. xD

Dream three...

The two leader look at each other one last time before putting one hand out. They turn there heads and soon, a black light comes from each of there hands. Soon the two grin, walking forward before there hands touched. There seemed to be a awkward silence in the air from the two as they suddenly let the power go away. They turned face to face, "I will see your son soon," Fang spat before turning around and walking away. The mummy growled, doing the same.
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TG: sup man names dave strider and im the only cool kid youll ever meet that has a decent amount of humor and loves to talk about size comparisons
TG: not
TG: im the knight of time and live in the land of land of heat and clockwork.
TG: there isnt much to say about me since it keeps the mystery pumpin like fireworks on the fourth of july
TG: i got balls of steel a voice of flat irony and nic cage really sucks
TG: apple juice is amazing and if i havent said it before
TG: i am the coolest kid around



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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby Medusa72 » Tue Mar 13, 2012 8:55 am

Hmmm, mysterious. Might I add, a bit confusing.
i will not sit down
did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
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Re: An idea... From a Dream?

Postby the timey thing » Tue Mar 13, 2012 8:57 am

May I ask how it is confusing? I get the mysterious part, but how may it be confusing?

One more stalker and I will put up Dream four!
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TG: sup man names dave strider and im the only cool kid youll ever meet that has a decent amount of humor and loves to talk about size comparisons
TG: not
TG: im the knight of time and live in the land of land of heat and clockwork.
TG: there isnt much to say about me since it keeps the mystery pumpin like fireworks on the fourth of july
TG: i got balls of steel a voice of flat irony and nic cage really sucks
TG: apple juice is amazing and if i havent said it before
TG: i am the coolest kid around



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