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[comcom123]

I will post somthing, it means somthing deep to me, so umm heres nothing,

I had love.
It coddled me in its warmth,
saving me from the cold.
But now that love is ignorant.
My lion can not see my love,
for he is blinded by another.
I love him, and he can never
love me back.
death itsself would be better than this pain,
But i endure it for him,
the love of my life,
who loves another

[aberrant.]

That is actually really really good,

[aberrant.]

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username: In This Farewell...
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? Yes ^^ Lots of good, fresh ideas up in the old thinker ^^
What's your favorite color? Dark Red
Animal? Sugar Glider, or a Tasmanian Devil, depending my mood
Fish? Blob fish!!
Type of mythical creature? Dragon
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? Elves,
Anything else (do not leave blank): I really like fantasy or depressing stories, it all depends what kind of music I'm listening to... just warning...most the time, the stories are depressing...

[I Solemnly Swear]

I will post somthing, it means somthing deep to me, so umm heres nothing,

I had love.
It coddled me in its warmth,
saving me from the cold.
But now that love is ignorant.
My lion can not see my love,
for he is blinded by another.
I love him, and he can never
love me back.
death itsself would be better than this pain,
But i endure it for him,
the love of my life,
who loves another

This is really good!

[comcom123]

Thanks you guys. There is more to it if youd like to read it. Just ask. Here or pm.This is actually a seven stanza peom I wrote it at like, three am after getting my heart broken.

[aberrant.]

Yea, you should post the others)

[comcom123]

thank you. I will. heres stanza two:

The other,
was once a freind.
a dear companion.
but now she has hurt me,
and that is the unforgivable sin.
it is her who bears the guilt,
of my broken heart.
she stole him from me,
and i will make her pay.

[Raven~Scythe]

Bump

[I Solemnly Swear]

I would like to become a mini mod

[Kat.]

I want to join the Writing Army!
Username: Kat
Do you promise to write something at LEAST once a week? Yes :3
What's your favorite color? Hmm... purple!
Animal? Kittehz
Fish? FISH? Oh well... Pufferfish!
Type of mythical creature? Dragons
Do you like fairies, elves, or evil creatures? No... <.<
Anything else (do not leave blank): Uhh... I can call myself an awesome Warrior Cats fan/writer! ;D