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a wolff by ponegrl12

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a wolff

Postby ponegrl12 » Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:35 am

redid the wolf this time. comment. i don't think it's intermediate worthy but it's better than the first one! You know how your dog sticks has head out the window?? this is one of those times. I'm going to need criticism!
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Re: a wolff

Postby Sheba Tigercat » Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:06 am

This is good, but the fangs need some work. And you should add shading.
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Re: a wolff

Postby Bennymegi » Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:08 am

Mountainstream wrote:This is good, but the fangs need some work. And you should add shading.

I agree, fix the fangs, they seem to stand out, maybe make them a bit darker.
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Oh be calm.
Be calm.
I know you feel like you are breaking down.
I know that it gets so hard sometimes,
Be calm.
Take it from me, I've been there a thousand times.
You hate your pulse because it thinks you're still alive
and everything's wrong
It just gets so hard sometimes
Be calm.

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Re: a wolff

Postby katelwil » Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:44 am

This is super good I just think maybe yea fix the fangs and maybe make the outline smoother otherwise It looks GREAT!! :D
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Re: a wolff

Postby ponegrl12 » Fri Jul 09, 2010 6:02 pm

yea, i tried... i dont know what else too doo
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Re: a wolff

Postby Gene » Sat Jul 10, 2010 1:45 pm

I think it's pretty good, but not really intermediate, sorry.
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Re: a wolff

Postby ponegrl12 » Sat Jul 10, 2010 3:34 pm

i know... thanks though.
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