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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ~JellyFish~ » Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:49 am

'Releasing The Darkness, Ch 1'


One dark misty night on the 06/06/66, there was two young boys of the age of 10, wandering a haunted forest. The forest was called 'sleepy hollow.' No one ever dared to enter, stories were told to young children.The two young boys had dared both to go in and come out alive, if they could. The eldet entered first and then the younger one. They both acted brave, but were they really?
They had no idea of what was in this forest. A couple hours past as they boys got tired and hungry. A hand was suddenly put of the young boy's mouth and pulled into the thick mist. The older one turned round. "Daniel? where are you?" he looked round. "Stop playing games and come out!" a scream was suddenly heard from a far distance. The boy ran as fast as he could. "I'm coming, Daniel!"
he yelled and kept running. He arrived to find Daniel dead, stiff and lifless on the ground. "No!!" he ran over and shook him. "Please don't do this! you have a long life to live! please.." James couldn't bare it. He picked up the body and put it in the near by river.
The river swept Daniel's body away into the thick mist.

James suddenly cut his hand. "Oww.." While Daniel's body floated away futher and futher, his eyes suddenly opened wide with bright red eyes! He stood up with a hiss and ran out of the river and into the woods. He could smell his brother, James from a mile away.
He ran fast, searching high 'n low to find him. James tore his sleeve off and wrapped it around his hand to stop the bleeding.
He continued to march on and unaware of Daniel's arrival. Daniel was standing behind James, he leaped at him, pinning him with his teeth clenched into Jame's throat. James yelped and tried to kick Daniel off. Daniel suddenly snapped James's neck!
James died instantly, lifless and stiff. Daniel smirked and picked him up. He put him in the river with blood trickling down his mouth. James's body flowed along the river gently. Daniel followed James's body. 10 minutes later, James's eyes opened fully bright red! He had his demon side.. Daniel smirked and helped him out of the river. "Welcome, my brother..' he laughed evily.
'Good to be back..' James's smirked evily. "Where is Jackie?!" Daniel hissed. 'In hell...' James's laughed.
'Think we should ask him for his secret weapon?' Daniel asked. James's nodded. "Why of course..the whole villages had to witness the darkness of Satan..' The two brothers crawled down a hell-hole and had vanished.

(End of chapter 1!)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby goldieyap » Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:37 am

MusicEmily wrote:I have a story I read -
"Drip, Drip..."

It was your average day in Jenny's suburb. Her neighbors were nice, and her parents had gone to work, leaving her home alone all day. Nothing unusual. She turned on the news and saw that the serial killer who had recently been caught had escaped from prison...and had last been seen heading towards her neighborhood. Her dog could sense her fear and knew something was wrong, and ran under the couch; where he usually went when he was afraid. She knew whenever he was afraid, he would lick her hand, so she put her hand down under the couch so he could lick it, and sure enough, he did. She got up to go make a sandwich and brought some treats back for her dog. When she sat back down, she called for the dog, and he didn't come.She kept calling, and when he still didn't show up, she figured he fell asleep under the couch. As she was watching TV, she heard a faint dripping noise coming from the upstairs shower. It didn't bother her too much, so she decided not to do anything. However, it kept dripping...and dripping...and dripping...finally she couldn't take it anymore and decided to go check it out. When she got to the shower, she screamed in both horror and fear. She fell and started sobbing...because hanging on the shower head, was her dog that had been gutted, dripping with blood. On the shower wall, written in that blood, were the words...

"Did you know people can lick, too?"


When her parents came home that day, Jenny wasn't waiting for them.

i heard a different version of that:
there was a little girl, she had this dog, when ever she was scared she would put her hand under her bed and the dog would lick it. one night she heard this creaking in the hallway, so she put her hand under her bed and the dog licked it. so then she went to investigate. she saw on the wall, written in blood: "i have been licking your fingers".

also, does anyone know "johnny, i want my liver back" or "the polkadot doll"?
clip,clop,slide
there was a girl called lucy. one day, (or night i should say) she asked her mother if she could go to her friend's house, it was 9:00pm and the girl said she would be back by 11:00pm. her mother said yes, so lucy went off to her friend's house. at 10:pm, the police came round and told lucy's parents to lock and bolt every door and window. so they did. when lucy came back, she knocked on the door. no one answered. the girl turned, she could her a noise. there was a person with no legs, but, hunormous hands, which he was using to pull him self along. clip,clop, slide was the sound he made as he moved. lucy knocked on the door more impatiently, then more, then more, then more. in the morning, when the mother opened the door, written in blood on the doormat was: "mother, why didn't you open the door?"
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zeee » Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:41 am

тояalєї . wrote:
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Written by: Toralei
This is just the begging part to a story I'm writing called "Master." A story based off of horror character "Slender Man".
c: So... Tell me if I should finish it! PM me for any questions!

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A figure darted through an endless amount of forever going darkness, narrowly missing a sea of high roots and thorn bushes. It stopped, pausing to look around at the surrounding fog that slowly started to creep in on her. The moon shown brightly through the trees, magnifying itself against the mist that lingered around the figure’s ankles. This dim light revealed a young girl, maybe around the age of 11. Her blue eyes looked fearfully around her, scanning the darkness for any slight movement around her small patch of meadow at which she stopped running at. A twig snapped at her right and another at her left. How could her predator move so quickly? “He-Hello?” Her cracking voice dared to call out. At no response, she dropped to her knees in the fog. Pulling her knees tightly into her chest, she wrapped her arms around them and hung her head. Her long, red hair fell from her shoulders and covered her face from view as tiny streams of tears poured from her eyes. The tree’s seemed to laugh and taunt her as the wind ruffled its leaves. “I want to go home!” She managed to whisper inaudibly as the lump in her throat grew larger. Wiping her eyes and standing up, she began to look for an exit to this maze of brush and over-growth. As she straightened her back bravely, another snap in the distance reminded her that she was not alone. Giving out a small whimper, the young girl started to back away from the sound and turned to run when she stopped dead in her tracks. There, for the first time, she could identify her killer. Her eyes traveled from the 8 spider like arms which held him off the ground, to his blood splattered suit. He was about 7 to 8 feet tall, and very skinny and slender in his fancy black suit. She gulped as her eyes locked on his literally blank face. He had no nose, no mouth, no eyes… nothing. She started to back up again, ready to speed away, when one of his arms stretched out inhumanly and wrapped its sticky and furry spider arms around her in a pain piercing grasp. Letting out a wavy scream, she felt her feet go numb as she was lifted off the ground. Feeling a warm liquid slide down her arms, she started to breathe heavily as the stench of bitter iron filled her nose. All at once, the world around her started spinning as her vision started to blur.
“What is your name?” A scratchy and robotic voice traveled through the wind as it stabbed at her cheeks. Focusing a bit, her vision cleared but not much. She could see the no-faced man was grinning. Wincing at the horrible sight, she almost started to gag from blood loss and the sickening picture in front of her. Where his mouth should be, a slit had opened in his pale skin, stitches and thread woven inside of his mouth to keep his jaw from ripping open. Blood had started drooling out of his mouth, and tiny black bugs and spiders crawled in and out of his stitched mouth. Having no choice but to answer his question, she let her vision crawl out of focus again. Her own voice was the last thing she heard before she blacked out. “Hayley….”


Very nice.
God slender man is freaky. D:
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby †♉Ӝ̵̨̄❆Raven❆Ӝ̵̨̄♉† » Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:55 am

one day a boy name landon had a sister that treatend him.2 weeks later he was tierd of being treatend and killied his self his sister walked in his room to see him dead on the floor she screamed of horror landon was dead and had blood all over him but he got up his eyes gray she rememberd that she said ill kill you to him but this time he said ill kill you and surely she was dead her mother and father walked in to see there son and daghter dead on the floor.and a note i love you and two blood prints.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby dinofan247 » Sun Feb 26, 2012 11:40 am

MY LIFE/DREAM yep that's my horror story


Once there was a girl she saw her grandma's ghost before they buried her heard little kids giggling at cemeteries and has to deal with her psycho mom. Would you believe that everyday she cries her self to sleep she wishes everyday that she can die she hates bein around her mom all her mom does is yell and scream. No one can save her from that life she tried to get help but all they said was that she should either take consoling or call cps. One day her mom screams at her that she's no good and that she is stupid like her grandma she gets angry and snaps she looks at her mom no tears no fear in her eyes and says i hope you die better yet i hope i die so then you'll know what you've been doing to me you'll know the pain i've been put through. She walks away locking her self in her room and gets her razor she cuts her thigh and watches as blood comes out she gets the alcohol out and pours it on the cut she doesn't flinch at the pain she just stares at the big cut. She cuts her other thigh and stands up she drops the razor and gets the knife that she hid for years she quickly grabs her meds that she uses for the stress. She cuts her leg with the knife and use's her blood to write's on the wall. She grabs her bottle water and takes all her meds with no hesitation......

2days went by and her mom called the cops telling them that her daughter locked her self in her room and she couldn't get in.

An hour later the fire department arrived at the scene the broke open the door to reveal the 13 year old girl dead lying on her bed with the knife and razor near her. The girls mom read's what was on the wall and falls back having a heart attack.
Everybody knew bout the girl knew bout her struggles and the only thing that she wanted was for people to know was all the pain she went through.Now the only thing her mom knows is what she wrote on the wall those last words that would kill you all "I hope you go through the same pain i did".
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ~ A n g e l ~ » Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:58 am

~*Little Girl, Big World*~

Chapter 1

I'm a freak. Everybody knows it. One picture, now it's all over the school. Me eating a dead animal's corpse. What the hell is wrong with me? I'm Susie, I'm 15 and I just so happen to be some sort of new species of zombie. I'm perfectly alive, yet I eat dead things. Creepy or what? Nobody knows my biggest secret though, the secret that only I and I alone know about...

"I'm not going to a freaking hospital! I'd rather let myself die!" I screamed, tears pouring down my face. I ran into my room and slammed the door and locked it. I shuddered and collapsed, falling to my knees and sobbing. I hated life, I wish I would just die. I looked over at the curtains that covered my dresser. "Oh Lucifer, I miss you so much. Why did you have to leave me?" I cried, getting up and walking over. I opened the curtains, revealing a glass coffin with a demon trapped inside. "I am always here for you my love." Lucifer whispered.

The coffin was made specially for ghost and demons. They can't escape, other whys they implode into nothing. I pressed my hand against the glass and he did the same with his. I felt the coldness through the glass and sighed, my breath coming out in a blue cloud. "Susie, you have to stop doing that! You're down to 5 clouds, if you lose them you'll die!" Lucifer cried, his red eyes full of pain.

"I don't care. I want to be trapped with you in there, I hate life." I whisper, my fingers sliding against the cold spot on the glass. "I mis you Lucifer. I want to be with you." I beg, tears streaming from my red and puffy eyes.

Lucifer takes his hand away from the glass and drifts to the far side of the glass coffin. He looks at his human self's photo. He had been a handsome blonde man, my age really. He was tall and tan. He had been mislead by the Devil himself and now he was but a lonely demon, contained in glass.

I go to the corner of my room and open up the drawer on my desk. I pull out a blade, as sharp as broken glass and go to the wall. I look at the knot holes and cracks in the wall and jab the blade into the top one, slicing it through the pattern made by the knotholes and cracks. Light shines through and the wall splits in half revealing...

(Chapter 2 soon to come!)
When you see the blue box appear,
When you see the troubles in the city disappear,
When you know that I'm not the same,
You'll know,
That the Doctor came.


"The Doctor. He's like Ice and Fire and rage."
"You need someone. I think you need someone to stop you."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Sweetart » Mon Feb 27, 2012 8:10 am

ilovefreddy wrote:
MY LIFE/DREAM yep that's my horror story


Once there was a girl she saw her grandma's ghost before they buried her heard little kids giggling at cemeteries and has to deal with her psycho mom. Would you believe that everyday she cries her self to sleep she wishes everyday that she can die she hates bein around her mom all her mom does is yell and scream. No one can save her from that life she tried to get help but all they said was that she should either take consoling or call cps. One day her mom screams at her that she's no good and that she is stupid like her grandma she gets angry and snaps she looks at her mom no tears no fear in her eyes and says i hope you die better yet i hope i die so then you'll know what you've been doing to me you'll know the pain i've been put through. She walks away locking her self in her room and gets her razor she cuts her thigh and watches as blood comes out she gets the alcohol out and pours it on the cut she doesn't flinch at the pain she just stares at the big cut. She cuts her other thigh and stands up she drops the razor and gets the knife that she hid for years she quickly grabs her meds that she uses for the stress. She cuts her leg with the knife and use's her blood to write's on the wall. She grabs her bottle water and takes all her meds with no hesitation......

2days went by and her mom called the cops telling them that her daughter locked her self in her room and she couldn't get in.

An hour later the fire department arrived at the scene the broke open the door to reveal the 13 year old girl dead lying on her bed with the knife and razor near her. The girls mom read's what was on the wall and falls back having a heart attack.
Everybody knew bout the girl knew bout her struggles and the only thing that she wanted was for people to know was all the pain she went through.Now the only thing her mom knows is what she wrote on the wall those last words that would kill you all "I hope you go through the same pain i did".

I didn't really wanna go to sleep anyway
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Let's get out, let's get out
'Cause this deadbeat town's only here just to keep us down
While I was out, I found myself alone just thinking
If I showed up with a plane ticket
And a shiny diamond ring with your name on it
Would you wanna run away too?
'Cause all I really want is you
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nonexsitent » Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:32 pm

Can someone tell me what you think of this chapter from my novel I am currently writing?

Chapter 5-The 'Spider-Man'

He smiled evilly, it was time to pay an old friend a visit. He walked up to the door and pushed it open it was dark inside and cold. But it would soon be full of the screams of the owner who lived here and that warmed his chilled body. The human, which if he was correct, a sickly human they’d be a easier kill. He nodded at his arachnids as they peacefully guarded the door. Nothing could get in...and nothing could get out.

He proceeded into the wooden halls, his black, stained shoes making no sound. His gaze shifted around the room and fell on the stairs. They were curved and seemed to go up forever. But as the fault with every staircase...they came to end somewhere just like life. That was why he loved them so much; he loved to kill a person when they were halfway down the stairs; they reached the bottom as corpses, their life bitterly ended before they reached safety, just like life.

He ascended the stairs taking three at a time, it was a flawless effort. He never dreamed big, he only killed big.
The upstairs hall was no different from the downstairs; the room he needed to visit, it’s door was slightly ajar. He made his way over to it.

“I’m here...” He called out and a scream rang out from the room, a ear piercing scream.

“NO, NO, LEAVE ME ALONE, PLEASE I HAVE KIDS!” His victim screamed. He smiled and found himself singing a song based of a nursery rhyme.

"Little Miss Muffet screaming her head off,
You’re going to make me deaf,
Along came a spider,
Coming to silence her,
Oh how quickly she caught her death."


The screams never ceased as he pushed the door open. He smirked nastily at victim. He’d never seen anything so pathetic.

A frail woman lay in the bed; her mouth open where the scream projected from; her grey eyes full of tears. The ‘Spider-Man’ smiled and used four of his eight arms to lift her from the bed. She frantically squirmed but she was no match for him. He opened his mouth allowing the spiders to pour from the hole. His eye sockets doing exactly the same. The three streams connected and scurried across his arms and onto the woman. They flooded into her open mouth and her scream stopped, she gagged and flailed. The spiders swarmed her hair and he laid her back down on the bed.

When she was finally limp he produced a needle and long black thread and set to work. Sewing her mouth up; sewing her eyes closed.

He finally stepped back and tucked her in. She seemed so peaceful no she was dead. The spiders flooded out of her ears and joined the rest in her hair. The ‘Spider-Man’ grinned his work was complete, finally.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby AninaAna » Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:50 pm

I recognize this one you posted this in random short stories and poems or whatever it was called but I'll repeat my thoughts for it anyway it's really good....... Not really what I'd read but not because it's bad or anything like I said its really good it's just...... Not the kind of story that I read *shrugs a smile*
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:37 pm

Do you guys think there should be a new version when this one has 500 pages up? I'd be happy to make one :P
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