hope 2 die [ -c r i t i q u e- needed ]

[.oOFrøstBittenOo.]

Lol, Its 12:08 here for me... Also, yayyyyy!

[placidcoast]

This. Is. Epic. The only thing I can think of for you to work on, is slight pacing. Your story is near perfect. Like, I would buy it. But you need to work on stretching things out a bit more maybe. Possibly describing things a little more. Over all, stunning! I cannot wait for more! <3

[glorified oblivion]

Lol, for me its 12:12 how odd. That is the same number as my school bus.

[.oOFrøstBittenOo.]

Lol :3 Bump! This story needs to be spread to the world, its so amazing :3

[glorified oblivion]

Yesh. Yesh it is.

[. ѕℰℰιиg . тнιиgѕ .]

Wow, everyone, thank you so much!

@Northeern Lights- I agree, everything is past-paced. I need to slow down, take sometime to smell the roses. Thank you all SO SO SO much! Just so you know, I'm hope2die on wattpad, this is up there, too, but not as updated, I believe.

[H o w l i n g]

Bro, I need another chapter. xDD
-Lurks-

[. ѕℰℰιиg . тнιиgѕ .]

Sorry. I have a huge essay to write for school, 15 pages. -_-

[H o w l i n g]

Oh, I feel your pain. ;w;
Just got done with one not to long ago.

[. ѕℰℰιиg . тнιиgѕ .]

HUGE NEWS::::

HOPE 2 DIE MIGHT GET PUBLISHED IN A MAGAZINE OR NEWSPAPER!!!!! SO EXCITED!!!