The Brave Little Goldfish (True story)

[Rosalind]

Rosie was holding her little "fish bag" which held within it two new addtions to the family. A bright orange medium goldfish, and a tiny white goldfish with just a little bit of orange on the top of its head. "So what are you going to name them Rosie?" Her mom asked while they drove home from Petsmart. "I think I will name the bright orange one Zack. The tiny one I'm thinking Olly. Do you like them?" "Those are very good names Rosie!"

A few minuets later at home.

"Ok they have gotten used to the tempature we can let them in with the others!" Her mom said cutting open the "fish bag" and letting Zack and Olly into their new home. "Yipee! I'll give them some food." Rosie said happily. Rosie sat there and watched them for a little while then went upstairs to do homework, and then go to bed.

The next morning.

"Zack and Olly have white bumps all over them mom! They aren't swimming around hardly at all either!" Rosie said scared. "I think they have ick Rosie. I'll treat them with the medcine, and they should be better soon." Rosie's mom said.

After school.

Rosie rushes to the fish tank only to find Olly on the bottom of the tank. If not for her guills moving Rosie would have thought she was dead. Zack was only a little better. But Olly was so small..."


The next morning.

Rosie once again checks on Olly and Zack. Zack is almost completely better, and wait a second! Is that Olly swimming around like crazy? Yes! "Mom, mom, Olly is better!" Rosie shouted excitedly. Rosie was so thilled. She just couldn't wipe the smile off her face the whole day. (Ok maybe it went away when the teacher annouced a pop quiz in math.)

[BlackHawkDown]

Keep going....

[steppittee]

yes keep going i wanna find out if they both live! poor fishies...

[Erille]

No!
Not the poor fish!

I have a fish so I would hate it if he died!

[ιƲɴλρરίɱε]

O___O You must continue! I have had rough times today, and this little goldfish story began to cheer me up until it ended!!! FINISH!!!

[Rosalind]

I have finally finished guys. Sorry for the delay...