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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 4 Up

Postby Medusa72 » Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:42 am

I totally understand... and take down that Critics Wanted! sign... this story only deserves compliments.
i will not sit down
did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 4 Up

Postby fly away. » Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:46 am

I wouldn't agree. I know there's some things I have to work on.

I do need critics.

But thanks for your faith in me. : )
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 4 Up

Postby fly away. » Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:12 pm

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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 5 Up

Postby Medusa72 » Mon Feb 13, 2012 3:20 am

:o :o :o *Amazing*
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did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 5 Up

Postby fly away. » Mon Feb 13, 2012 8:07 am

Why thank you *sweeping bow*
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 5 Up

Postby Velekaa » Mon Feb 13, 2012 8:16 am

:O Didn't see that coming.
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 5 Up

Postby fly away. » Mon Feb 13, 2012 8:17 am

I didn't either until I started writing it.
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