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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Extraordinary_Girl » Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:30 am



My name is Belail Natas, let me tell you from the begining how I came to be what I am now.
I was one of the prettyest girls in the school, and I had all the followers, I was little miss popular.
I was the girl all the boys wanted, but I had my heart set on the one that didn't want me, Anthony Crowley.
He was the most amazing looking boy, but he looked very deamonesque, and his personality showed it. But every so often, he would dissapear for a couple of days.

I was amazed when he chose me for the Halloween Midnight Ball.
But that was when things started to get weird.

"Your mother has been hiding something from you," He said in his silky smooth voice "Your soul is tainted with Lucifer's presence. Do you know who your father is?"
'My father died in a car accident when I was young.'
"No. He didn't. Your father, like many of us, fell from the heavens and became inprisoned in what your mother's kind would call Hell. Your father doesn't 'run' Hell, he was treated like the rest of us who betrayed the "mighty" God. The only reason I'm here is to bring you down to see him. So say good bye to your dear mother, and your sweet friends cause you're coming with me sweet-cheeks."

I couldn't stand, I couldn't breath. And what happened next was crazy. A portal opened up infront of me and Anthony and we were pulled down. When we got there our appearances changed to weird, satyr like humanoids and we were stood infront of Him. Lucifer. And from then on I have been one of His servants. And that's how I'll stay for eterinty.
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I embrace who I am.
If I listen to emotistical, punk or screamo music don't assume that I'm an emo.
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Green Day, Linkin Park and Muse being among my favorites.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ❤Sylveon❤ » Fri Feb 17, 2012 6:42 am

I got one
Once there was a hamster and he ate a boys bed...thus the creation of hamster beds
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Garnettfox » Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:07 am

Hi :) I saw this forum and this story I read came to mind:
The Devils Dolls
Many years ago miss Watercress bussled around her pawn shop rearangeing displays to attract custiomers when a tall dark man came in. he was dressed right out of the mid eighten hundreds navy.
"What can I help you with?" She asked and he opened his coat to show four well made dolls. you would almost think they where miniture people.
"I want to sell these to you, half a shilling each." Exstatic Miss Watercress happily bought them from him and put themin a display on her window.
A few days later a man was dragged in by his eight year old daughter who wanted one of the dolls. Happily she ranger it up for a shilling and sent them on there way.
the next day a distrought woman cam in insisting she remove the dolls claiming that one of them looked liek her brother who had comitted suiced. She removed the dolls but the next day put the back in the display. a few days after the man who had bought the first doll came charging in and thew a foul smelling cloth covering somethign on her desk. he then went on to explane his wife had accidentally stepped on the doll and it cracked open showing what looked and smelled horribly like putrifed blood and orgens.
nervious Miss Watercress refunded the man and when he left picked up one of the doll squeezingit a little. it almost burst in her hand covering her arm in rotting muck. horrfied she threw the four dolls into a box she sealed and franticly washed her hands.
Weeks later she picked up the corage to look into the box. and saw four perfect mini human scelingtens looking up at her with rotten much and the decayign clothes of the dolls still on them.

the most commen thery of the dolls is that it was the devil who came to her shop with four dammed souls with him to punish.
the worse part is I may have changed it a little but a incodent just like this actually happened according to credably resorsed.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nonexsitent » Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:27 pm

izard96 wrote:
BlurryKat wrote:
Kinchovi wrote:I saw a few pages back abot disneys suicide mouse. I found it is true. Click. It is quite disturbing

So do any of you remember those Mickey Mouse cartoons from the 1930s? The ones that were just put out on DVD a few years ago? Well, I hear there is one that was unreleased to even the most avid classic disney fans. According to sources, it's nothing special. It's just a continuous loop (like flinstones) of mickey walking past 6 buildings that goes on for two or three minutes before fading out. Unlike the cutesy tunes put in though, the song on this cartoon was not a song at all, just a constant banging on a piano as if the keys for a minute and a half before going to white noise for the remainder of the film. It wasn't the jolly old Mickey we've come to love either, Mickey wasn't dancing, not even smiling, just kind of walking as if you or I were walking, with a normal facial expression, but for some reason his head tilted side to side as he kept this dismal look. Up until a year or two ago, everyone believed that after it cut to black and that was it. When Leonard Maltin was reviewing the cartoon to be put in the complete series, he decided it was too junk to be on the DVD, but wanted to have a digital copy due to the fact that it was a creation of Walt. When he had a digitized version up on his computer to look at the file, he noticed something.

The cartoon was 9 minutes and 4 seconds long.

"After it cut to black, it stayed like that until the 6th minute, before going back into Mickey walking. The sound was different this time. It was a murmur. It wasn't a language, but more like a gurgled cry. As the noise got more indistinguishable and loud over the next minute, the picture began to get weird. The sidewalk started to go in directions that seemed impossible based on the physics of Mickeys walking. And the dismal face of the mouse was slowly curling into a smirk. On the 7th minute, the murmur turned into a bloodcurdling scream (the kind of scream painful to hear) and the picture was getting more obscure. Colors were happening that shouldn't have been possible at the time. Mickey face began to fall apart. his eyes rolled on the bottom of his chin like two marbles in a fishbowl, and his curled smile was pointing upward on the left side of his face. The buildings became rubble floating in midair and the sidewalk was still impossibly navigating in warped directions, a few seeming inconcievable with what we, as humans, know about direction. Mr. Maltin got disturbed and left the room, sending an employee to finish the video and take notes of everything happening up until the last second, and afterward immediately store the disc of the cartoon into the vault. This distorted screaming lasted until 8 minutes and a few seconds in, and then it abruptly cuts to the mickey mouse face at the credits of the end of every video with what sounded like a broken music box playing in the backround. This happened for about 30 seconds. From a security guard working under me who was making rounds outside of that room, I was told that after the last frame, the employee stumbled out of the room with pale skin saying "Real suffering is not known" 7 times before speedily taking the guards pistol and offing himself on the spot. The thing I could get out of Leonard Maltin was that the last frame was a piece of russian text that roughly said "the sights of hell bring its viewers back in". As far as I know, no one else has seen it (...untill now).



Is this a true thing? Did it really happen, or is it just a story, and the video is modern?

I was gonna ask the same thing. I just clicked on the link and now I'm REALLY creeped out. I had my sound off though and now I'm wondering what it sounds like =3

It's happy music at the start....when it goes black static...when it comes back on a man moaning then it becomes a scream...somewhere between 6:00 and 7:00 it a man mumbles something in jibberish then at 8:54 the noises stop and it sounds like a broken record playing :) funny as hell though
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby beanbag1234 » Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:30 pm

yeah, its real guys, thats whats so creepy bout it,
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby beanbag1234 » Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:32 pm

wanna get scared? read this with volume turned up , and you have to read it on a computer, it doesnt work on a phone

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.n ... 0217&no=31
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby driftz » Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:37 pm

beanbag1234 wrote:wanna get scared? read this with volume turned up , and you have to read it on a computer, it doesnt work on a phone

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.n ... 0217&no=31

I remember watching the video of PewdiePie reading that *shivers*
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ghostboy » Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:47 pm

beanbag1234 wrote:wanna get scared? read this with volume turned up , and you have to read it on a computer, it doesnt work on a phone

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.n ... 0217&no=31

That's alright, I didn't want to sleep tonight anyways.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ~ A n g e l ~ » Sat Feb 18, 2012 2:49 pm

Made one up.

~*SweetHeart*~

It all went wrong the day I moved. So I was going to have 2 baby sisters, we had to move. I left the only friends I ever knew, to start this crappy life I live know. Only I didn't know it was about to get a hell of a lot worse.

I'm Mary, a 13 year-old girl. My hair is midnight black and my eyes are, believe it or not, red. Everybody calls me either a freak, a vampire or another name. I'm just a freaking girl, I wish I could go die in a hole. Little did I know I might.

So I was watching tv, when I heard somebody knock at the door. I sighed and paused my Doctor Who dvd to get it. "Probably some of the lunatics I learn with, here to complain about me being a freak." I grumbled, opening the door. No one was there. "Hello?" I called, poking my head outside and looking around. Suddenly, cold clammy air blew around my throat and I couldn't breathe. Choking and gasping, I backed into the house, tripping over a parcel that somebody had left on the steps. The air left my throat and I sucked in deep breaths of terror. Grabbing the package, I slammed the door and rushed back to my living room.

I looked at the brown paper wrapping. It read: Open it SweetHeart, before I find you. I shuddered and opened the package. A voodoo doll stared back at me. I picked it up. "Cut some hair off and tie it to me, I want some!" It cried in a high-pitched screechy drawl. I screamed and flung the cursed object at the wall. It hit the floor with a thump and lay motionless. Was it my diseased imagination playing tricks on me? I rubbed my eyes and the doll was sitting up, staring back at me with a creepy grin. I grabbed it around its rough waist, opened the door and flung it into the street, watching in satisfaction as a car whisked by and shredded it.

That night, I woke up to the feeling of metal near my neck. I screamed as something cut my hair and whipped around to see the voodoo doll standing on my chest, a lock of my hair tied on top of its head. "Sweet dreams." A voice whispered. A ghost appeared, its red eyes matching mine. It was me, but in a ghostly form. Me from Hell. It picked up the doll, giving me a sneer, before taking the scissors and stabbing it through the chest.

Blood poured out of my wound. Before I died, the creature lay one hand under my chin and sneered in my face. "Yes, you picked it up SweetHeart. Now, you get to have sweet dreams in Hell SweetHeart." Then her hand whisked away and I fell bloody and lifeless to the floor.
When you see the blue box appear,
When you see the troubles in the city disappear,
When you know that I'm not the same,
You'll know,
That the Doctor came.


"The Doctor. He's like Ice and Fire and rage."
"You need someone. I think you need someone to stop you."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nonexsitent » Sat Feb 18, 2012 4:18 pm

Zaelyna wrote:
beanbag1234 wrote:wanna get scared? read this with volume turned up , and you have to read it on a computer, it doesnt work on a phone

http://comic.naver.com/webtoon/detail.n ... 0217&no=31

That's alright, I didn't want to sleep tonight anyways.

lmao hilarious XD but sad poor person....
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