Tamed! (please read and comment)

[Nonexsitent]

That's good if you don't get something just ask

Okay well my vision didn't entirely go, I didn't black out it was the smoke rising in fumes. I knew I had to try. I felt the knot with my fingers and began to pull at it. It didn't loosen but it it made the rope thin out. I tugged forward as soon as the rope was weak enough and it snapped. Now to get out the fire. I began to climb the wooden cross my talent for roof hopping coming in handy. It was a steady climb.
Soon I was perched at the top staring at everyone.
"Autum, jump." Someone screeched as the flames flickered and pranced leaping on to the wooden cross and beginning to climb after me as if it was a spider closing in on it's pray. I leapt as soon as it reached me; burning the bottom of my trainers. I landed crouched on the ground like spider man. Everyone stared at me the Mayor was gone.
"How'd you do that?" A boy asked; I shrugged picking up my hat and bag. My journal-thingy was gone. I guessed I must've left in the cave so I hurried back toward it. Everyone watched me.
"No you must not go back." A girl yelled after me.
"Left something behind; it's valuble." I shouted jogging and jumping into the mine.
I couldn't find it. I was sad then. I ran toward the riot and stopped.
"Did anyone find a book; in the mine?" I asked, everyone stared at me blankly. A boy raised his hand.
"I saw Katiria come out with one earlier, she took it home. I ran toward her house and peered through the window. It was dim; she wasn't in. Lol that rhymed. I saw the book laid on the ground basically chucked. I sighed. Breaking an entry isn't my way but...
Once I gained entry I clambered in, she has dogs, judging by the signs one called Max and one called Oscar. She wrote in the journal-thingy but it was really short and her handwriting was really posh and dignified.
I think I want to leave. I left via the smashed window. I DID leave a letter of apology and escaped back to my home. It's a watch tower lol. I'm a watchmen.
I hope the journal-thingy won't be found 'cause I need to write a secret.
I'm the head of a spy company but we double cross other spy agencies. We start to recruit soon even though everyother one has started now. I'm smart and am a patient kid.

Damn I really desperatly need a AWESOME sign off.....
*Brainstorm*
~Autum~

[Alnitak]

It could be longer and you could use firefox to spell words correctly.When it goes red-underlined,right click for options of what it is really spelt like.

[AlphaLeonis]

Dear Journal,

I am sorry for not writing in you for a while. Autumn hid it under her bed, so I had to sneak in and get it. 'Twas tough, with those beady eyes ... Not that it mattered. I could beat her in a duel any day. She'd smashed a window, too. As for the signs ... well. I was getting my dogs from the farmers, so ...
I strode over to the farm. I listened to the farmers talk, before stepping in for a proper talk.
"Hello, there." I smiled. The two males blushed a little, tipping their hats in my direction. "Do you need my aid?"
"Neh, I-" Interrupted by the other male, the first farmer glanced warily at his work-partner, raising a brow at his welcoming actions.
"Ignore my friend there," Tim started, "He is quite phased at the moment. We have to give two of our favourite wolfs away, you see. Max and Oscar. You know them?" Seeing my nod, he continued, "Well ... As you are so great with animals, we're offering them to you." He smiled. Henry glared at the other man, before turning to retrieve the two dogs.
"I accept your request." I nodded, taking the leashes of the two hunting wolfs, leading them off from the village, into the forest - into the night.
We stopped at a large, open clearing, trees lining the edge. I sat, and I thought.
I thought quite a lot, actually. I'm here writing you in the clearing now with the dogs. I'm planning on leaving you here when I leave, as a laugh, to see if Autumn will find it. Max keeps carrying it around in his mouth all the time, though. I'll make sure he doesn't eat you - (I promise.)

Anyway. I'm so tired ... I better just go home and sleep. I'll see you soon, Journal.

^->Katiria<-^

[Nonexsitent]

Huh....
She wrote in journal-thingy again?
I didn't even realise journal-thingy was gone, I went to get wood and found journal-thingy underneath a massive oak tree in a clearing. That wasn't my bed it was under.
I need to put you elsewhere.
I got my axe on me; I sliced my arm though. It stings but I'll live. Chop, chop, chop, chop...

Once I was finished I hurried toward home. I mean hello...I didn't want to relax when it was drawing closer.
The tornament. For the best survivor in the whole world. I knew I was going to get picked. I mean I had a horrid 'X' painted on my door. I quickly replaced my door after that.
I'm even more of an outcast now...I just want a friend. I mean I know I'm not likeable, pretty and full of rainbows and candy but still. I'm stronger than most boys and I'm not afraid to speak my mind.
My mother.....
I remember the way she laughed....
And I remember him, how he killed her, how he tried to kill me. That's how I got the scar; the scar on my neck.
He's dead now; I am proud enough to say, I did it. I killed him.
He came at me after he cut my throat, I spun forward knocking the knife out of his hand. I then slid across the floor picking up the knife. He had growled and charged forward. I panicked and threw the knife; I stared in horror at him as he fell. I crept closer. The knife was right between his eyes.
I can't shake the horror of murder; but I'm glad he's dead.
The only reason he tried to kill me was because everything was wrote to me in mum's will.
He was a fat pig.
I just want a friend. No one will like me enough to be my friend. They put it down to me being a loner and I enjoy me own company. Autum the loner; Autum the unknown. Nicknames or taunts?
When the last leaf falls the autum will give way to winter...who ever winter is?
Katiria...she's the popular girl...beat me in a duel. Dunno, maybe if we orginize a fight...hmmm...
A twig just snapped....I'll have to update more later....journal-thingy

I thought of a awesome sign out because of Katiria.

Find you later!
~Autum~

[lucky15371]

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[Betta132]

Haha! "Find you later"

[Nonexsitent]

@lucky15371: I will (doing it now)
@Betta123: Yeah I didn't want see you later or smell you later, then because it vanishes I wrote Find you later. I'm glad you liked it lol XD

ANYWAY!
The thing turned out to be a wolf; what are the chances (VERY LIKELY) it growled at me. I took a step back straight into the jagged point of a knife. I raised my hands slowly.
"There's a good girl." The person behind me chuckled it was a man, I could tell by the deep booming noise that came from his throat, I felt like dropping and elbowing them where it hurts.
"Who are you?" I asked, it was getting slightly annoying.
"The tornament manager." He continued. I felt like slapping them.
"I'm not taking part in some stupid tornament." I snapped.
"Oh, but your names down," He snarled twisting the knife into my back, it was agony, "I think you are."
"I can't, my name wasn't burned." I replied the knife stopped as he pondered this.
"So it wasn't," He sighed; but I heard him scoff, he began to remove the knife. I relaxed till I felt the cool blade against my throat, "but who cares, right?"
"It's against the rules." I continued to fight my point. The man sighed and removed the knife altogether.
"You'll be there; alive or part dead." He growled and I heard his retreating footsteps. I have three words to say after that ordeal. I am hungry!

I saw Katiria today, she was with her friend Dorris. I smirked when I learned Dorris's name. I just find it too cool a name for kids. Dorris and Katiria were training two wolves who; juding by the information; were called Max and Oscar.
I was still nursing my wound so I really couldn't just go over there and hand the journal over; with no top on...
That would just be really awkward. But her bag is resting by the sign. I'm going to get changed.

Done, I'm going now since I'm about to slip journal-thingy in her bag.

Find you later!
~Autum~
PS: Katiria, nice skills with training Oscar to behave. I sense he is more disobediant than Max.

[CookieRaider]

i like it

[lucky15371]

love it and more please

[gizmo,]

Wait, I thought you said her mom died from a fire? In the entry up there you said she died because she was stabbed?