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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted!

Postby fly away. » Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:30 pm

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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter Two

Postby Poke- » Wed Jan 18, 2012 2:06 pm

Thanks for letting me feature this in my newspaper!
Here it is
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter Two

Postby ♥John 3:16♥ » Wed Jan 18, 2012 2:43 pm

I like it. Any more???
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter Two

Postby fly away. » Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:26 pm

I'm trying to work on Chapter Three as fast as I can.
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter Two

Postby ♥John 3:16♥ » Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:32 am

Okay. ;)
I'm trying to hold in the anticipation for as long as I can. :oops: :what: :shock: To late.
AHHHHHHH! AHHHHHH! There's a NEW chapeter comeing!!!!
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter Two

Postby fly away. » Mon Jan 23, 2012 1:20 pm

I'm sorry I haven't put the third chapter up yet, I'm really distracted.
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter Two

Postby ♥John 3:16♥ » Tue Jan 31, 2012 2:49 am

Okay. :) I'm waiting. I check this story every day. :D 8-)<---Random smiley.
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter Two

Postby fly away. » Thu Feb 02, 2012 1:18 pm

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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter Two

Postby ♥John 3:16♥ » Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:54 pm

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
This is gonna be good! I want to read more. Thanks for posting again. :thumbup:
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Re: A Silent Look On Life || Critics Wanted! || Chapter 3 Up

Postby Medusa72 » Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:54 am

Hey!! I saw this in the critique cafe, and stopped by to see.
I don't think this needs any critique. It's really good! :D

Keep writing! ;) :thumbup:
i will not sit down
did you ever make it out of that town

i will not shut up
where nothin ever happened


rivers and roads, rivers and roads
our love ain't nothin but a monster

rivers till i reach you
our love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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