The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Jericho]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
TigressJaguiar
Link to your form:
click
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Bright is Better (BIB)
Deadline for your form:
The judging occurs on the 30th of this month.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM Please

Sending....

[Jericho]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Foxtrot55
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=594698&start=4880#p26667420 <---- both forms in this post if someone has time, or you can just do one!!
Adoption Agency you are applying for: SCAA
Deadline for your form: 11th Febuary.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM or here, I honestly just care about the critique!
Thanks!

[deletedeltedelete]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: FeliDragon
Link to what needs critiquing: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1024674(I didn't finish yet but I would like critique anyway)
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc): Novel type of thing
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM As I would be able to find the replies to my form more easily

[fly away.]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
-Invisible-
Link to what needs critiquing:
A Silent Look on Life
What is it:
Mystery
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM, please.

[Medusa72]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: TBWTB
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1013875
What is it: Sort of a mystery novel, with some upcoming action.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Whichever you prefer.

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Username:

h o p e . 2 . d i e

Link to what needs critiquing:

I seriously need a critic!

What is it:

Kind of a sci-fi, violent novel. xD With a bit of romance.

Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?

If I get critiqued better by PM, then let's do it, if not, then I don't care. I still get the critique, and it helps others learn from my mistakes.

[Rainbowchocolate]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: TBWTB
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1013875
What is it: Sort of a mystery novel, with some upcoming action.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Whichever you prefer.

I read your story and I am in the process of giving you critique, I will PM you. This is my first time seriously giving critique so I won't be very good at it.

[Haagen-Daagen]

I won the character! Woot woot! No need for critiques now. :]

[satuurnity]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
The Wolf Charm
Link to what needs critiquing:
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1223379
What is it: Story
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please

[Papyrsatyr]

Hi guys, sorry I haven't been very active around here. Rest assured I haven't given up on this place. Since no one has bothered to critique forms and all my critics who I hired decided to leave me in the dust. I might take some time out of my busy schedual and attempt to help some forms only. I'm no good with stories sorry. :c

This place really needs critics, if you aren't busy and enjoy reading stories and such please help out!