Life of a teenage were-wolf

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I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!
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It's EPIC!
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Its great
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its Okay
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Eh...
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BAD
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*barf* terrible
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2%
How could you post this! its awful! revolting! disgusting! i've been scarred for life!
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Wed Jan 25, 2012 5:51 am

Finally done!
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby list the unknown » Wed Jan 25, 2012 11:59 am

AH! MORE! MORE!
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby Harkness<3 » Wed Jan 25, 2012 2:02 pm

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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby list the unknown » Fri Feb 03, 2012 3:14 am

bump and more plz
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:05 am

Im working on it, im just having connection problems these days, while your waiting, do you think you guys could think of names for this story, I think it should have a better name.
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:45 am

Kia rolled to one side, dodging Dara's razor sharp claws. Dara leaped on to Kia and dug her teeth in her scruff, Kia snarled and tossed her head, throwing her off.
"Dara what are you doing?!" She snarls, tail lashing.
Dara lunged at her, but Kia leaped out of the way just in time.
"Isn't it obvious?" scoffed Dara with a smirk. "I'm not on your side. I was never on your side, I was the one who told them where you lived."
Kia growled, she reared up and slashed her claws across Dara's face. Then she tucked her muzzle beneath Dara's foreleg and tossed her through the air. While Dara was distracted, Kia took the time to look around.
Justin was in wolf form and fighting off some guards. Lauren was freaking out and trying to break free from a guard's grasp, her blue eyes wide. Jay was punching and kicking guards, who where grabbing his arms. Mike and Blair were working together to fight some other were-wolves. Suddenly she felt claws dig into her back, she yelped and bucked like a horse. She caught a glimpse of pale brown fur and knew it was Dara, her teeth flashed as she grabbed Dara's paw and pulled her down.
"Follow me!" she barked, running onto to Lauren and carrying her on her back.
Justin got Jay on his back then followed Kia, Mike and Blair close behind. She streaked through the forest as a black blur, her long legs carrying her past the trees. She could feel Lauren's fingers tangled in her thick neck fur and her knees pressed into her sides as she struggled to keep her balance. Kia could hear the distant pounding of paws from the other were-wolves, their barks as they searched the forest. Suddenly she spotted something up ahead, a junkyard.
"Over there!" she shouted.
She could hear her friends bark in agreement, she began speeding up, getting ready to jump the fence. She took a flying leap and practically soared over the seven foot fence. She landed on a junk pile with a thud, sending metal cans clattering to the ground. She could hear more clattering as her friends followed.
"Lauren, you have to roll in the trash to hide you scent!" said Kia, hearing the barks of the other Were-wolves as the followed.
"What?! do i have to?" she groaned.
Kia growled at her and shot her a glance, Lauren sighed and rolled in the trash. Kia did the same, getting wrappers tangled in her fur. Lauren got on Kia's back and she ran down to the ground.
"Which way?" whispered Lauren.
Kia didn't answer, she spotted a gutted, rusty car that was half-sunken in the ground. She streaked towards it and squeezed through a hole in the side. Lauren slid off her back and sat, hugging her knees, at the back of the hollow car. Kia pushed a plank of wood in front of the hole with her paws and crouched in front of it, ready to attack anyone who pushed through. She perked her ears at some barking outside.
"Find Them!" Dara barked the order.
Clattering and crashing could be heard as the other were-wolves searched the junkyard for Kia and her friends. Kia held her breath when she heard snuffling on the other side of the wooden plank. She let it out when it the were-wolf walked away, Good, it didn't smell us.
After a few moments the could hear a gruff voice, "They're not here."
Dara's voice replied "Then go find them! search the town! enter homes if you have to! Oh, and if you let them escape, I'll turn you all into fur coats! Now GO!" she snapped.
Their paw-steps faded as they ran off to search the town, Kia let herself sigh and pulled the plank out of the way. She squeezed through the hole with Lauren close behind. She looked around and spotted Justin (In wolf-form) and Jay pushing through some trash, Blair and Mike climbed out of a cardboard box. Kia morphed into a human and ran towards Jay, he opened his arms and she didn't hesitate to go into them.
"You came to rescue me." she whispered.
"Of course." he murmured, holding her tight, his breath tickling her ear.
"Uh, sorry to interrupt....." said Blair "But where the heck are we?"

Finally done! sorry for the wait but i've been having limited connection these days.
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby list the unknown » Fri Feb 03, 2012 7:26 am

hurray!
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby Betta132 » Fri Feb 03, 2012 7:54 am

BAD 1 3%
*barf* terrible 1 3%
How could you post this! its awful! revolting! disgusting! i've been scarred for life! 2 7%

Who the flipping bug juice voted for these?!?! Now I can see voting for "Eh" if it's not your thing, but voting for these is rude! Especially the last one! I, personally, LOVE THIS!! Please ignore these people, (who I'm going to track down and throw to the heyenas), and write more awesomeness!
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby Nellas » Fri Feb 03, 2012 11:21 pm

*raises hand* Agreed. You post against her, you post against me. And that's not something you want. Rawr. (lol)
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Re: Life of a teenage were-wolf

Postby xxazul63xx » Sat Feb 04, 2012 5:25 am

Aww thanks you guys, this means a lot
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