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Re: If L o ve had a T r u e Course | Dear Thing | Read Now!

Postby Kinchovi » Wed Feb 01, 2012 5:12 am

MasterTigress Lover wrote:I can't wait. <3 This is the best story I've seen.


Thank you very much!

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Postby proud.little.wolf » Wed Feb 01, 2012 8:00 am

Wow. This is awesomely amazing! Please, write more. :thumbup:
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Entry 4!

Postby Kinchovi » Wed Feb 01, 2012 7:03 pm

Xela XIII wrote:Wow. This is awesomely amazing! Please, write more. :thumbup:


You don't know how much that means to me! You've been half my inspiration, your 'dear stupid jounals' are the best! <3

7th September|Just after Lunch wrote:Dear thing,
OMG! I ran out of the lunch hall straight bang into Wind. I knocked him over and landed on top of him. *embaressment*
"Are you okay?" Is what he asked me,
"yeah- I think. Actually.. no." I replied
"make your mind up!"
"Ok!My sister has had to go to hospital. She fell down the stairs and broke her neck"
"Oh, I'm so sorry!"
"I'm fine! I just need to get to the entrance hall."
We stood up. Wind ended up walking me to the entrance hall, if I weren't crying I would have savoured that moment. Wind even asked if he should come with me, I kindly rejected. Now I'm sat here, waiting for my dad to come and collect me. I'm so worried about Penny!"

Tai Tai X
{To upset to write a PS.. oh.}


Short entry- It is my birthday C;

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Postby breadstick » Wed Feb 01, 2012 9:28 pm

I am loving it!
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Re: If L o ve had a T r u e Course | Dear Thing | Read Now!

Postby Kinchovi » Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:19 am

MasterTigress Lover wrote:I am loving it!

Thank you C:
7th of September|Evening wrote:Dear Thing,
Sorry not to write in you earlier, it's been so busy!
Anyway, Dad rang just as Wind was going to get lunch and said he was stuck in traffic, could take a few hours. I told him I'd catch a bus but he said (completely ignoring me) to meet him halfway at the traffic lights, walk with a friend.
I smirked, I knew who to take.
"Wind?" I asked noticing he hadn't left and was probably listening.
"Yeah?" He answered
"Will you-"
Wind interupted, "Come with you to meet your dad? Yes sure!"
I rolled my eyes, "Come on then, get your bags" I nodded towards our class.
Anywho the reception told us we couldn't leave, so I called my dad and we set on our way.
It was a 20 minute walk, all Wind wanted to talk about was me. I can't count the amount of times I blushed under my fur, in fact I was thankful when we reached my car.
"See you later" I nodded to wind, and shoved my coat and bag into my car.
Guess what my dad said. Yep.
"I like your boyfriend" He laughed.
"Oh- we aren't.. going out.."Wind answered, and then I noticed he added "yet"
"Hey- " My dad said, ignoring wind, "Want to come with us?"
Wind nodded, perhaps too eagerly.
I rolled my eyes and got in the back of the car with Wind.
"So, neat dad" he chuckled.
"he has his days" I replied.

When we *finally* arrived at the hospital, we stepped outside and checked in at the reception. Leaving Wind in the waiting room, I stepped in to see Penny in a hospital bed.
"heeyy" I whispered and stroked her paw.
She didn't answer.
"How are you feeling?" I asked.
She didn't answer.
"She is asleep" mum sobbed in the corner.
"I'll wait outside for a while" I nodded and gave a last look at the broken Penny.
"Whats up?" Asked Wind.
I just burst into tears.

One minute, Penny's waking up.

~Tai Tai
{I can't believe Wind is at the hospital with me!}

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Postby cswolf. » Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:58 am

More please. I love it :)
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Re: If L o ve had a T r u e Course | Dear Thing | Read Now!

Postby Kinchovi » Thu Feb 02, 2012 6:54 pm

||CSWolf|| wrote:More please. I love it :)


Thank you, becuase of long entry above I may not do more tonight. I may do, if I get time though.

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Postby breadstick » Thu Feb 02, 2012 8:02 pm

I really love this story. <3
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Re: If L o ve had a T r u e Course | Dear Thing | Read Now!

Postby Kinchovi » Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:26 am

MasterTigress Lover wrote:I really love this story. <3

Thank you c:

7th September|Nightfall wrote:Dear Thing,
As I was saying..
Wind put his arm round me and I held on tight.
"It's ok.." He murmured
I sobbed and looked up.
"Your really not like the Tai Tai you are at school."
"Which one do you like better?"
"You tell me"
I leaned over to kiss him but then my mum came out in tears.
"not the ideal place.." I whispered. Wind smirked.
"We're going home Tai Tai" Mum sobbed,
"Are we taking Wind home?" I asked.
"I am" said my dad popping his head round the door, "Your going with your mother Tai"
"ok" I shrugged.

Penny isn't ready to come home yet. It's so empty without her. I need to go to bed now.

~Tai Tai
{What is that knocking on my window. I'll go investigate!}

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Re: If L o ve had a T r u e Course | Dear Thing | Read Now!

Postby breadstick » Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:35 am

Again captivaiting and I just love it. <3
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