Tamed! (please read and comment)

[Nonexsitent]

Me and my friend Zeelea25 are teaming up for this XP please read and tell us what you think.

The based story is inspired by minecraft we were messing about on Minecraft when my friend starting to describe everything she was doing via a diary entry.
It's about two different girls, one who hides away and one who is really popular. The one who hides is never seen usually and the popular one is very kind and sometimes spiteful.
The story will develop from there, please enjoy...

Okay weird book thing...
I found a journal book thing under my bed, at first I thought it was a story and decided to read it then I found out it was blank.
Not much use to read.
THEN I thought it was used for burning, but it wouldn't burn. It turns out the stupid book had an enchantment on...
What much use is that?
I hunt, at night when the shadows attack, I kill the cattle the mayor has bred. Who cares? No one misses them.
Wanted signs are all over for the 'Night Hunter' ha good luck finding me. Plus I prefer 'The Nothing' it means alot of things to me.
Lol, I'm called Autum; weird name? Well take a hike; I like it, plus I was born in autum so...it's an awesome name.
I don't really know anyone in this town...oh right...
I hide away in my house, alone. My mother died.
She's inanimate. Tears...I'm not a stranger to them, I've met them many times while growing up. My last town was a torture zone. I was beaten, fireworks were posted through my letterbox. That started the house fire; which killed my mother. All because I'm different. I was a, how do I say, pure bred magician. Or conjourer, or whatever people call people with magic. Being pure bred meant my magic was strong.
I don't know many pure bred magicains (or conjourers) I mean hello! I am a human too! I mean they kill you for being different; burn you for causing a magic crime. Hello people in charge of punishment; I AM MAGIC; I WAS BORN LIKE IT SO DON'T KILL ME! Pretty simple, hmm?
I mean they kill Homosexuals for being a bender...and Biosexuals just for liking both genders. I mean what in the world. I witnessed a burning once; for a friend of mine who was a bi.
I was too scared to speak up but now I wished I did.
I miss everyone they killed just for being different. My mum was one of them she was a homo...I was an orphan which means; I don't even know my real mother, or father.
I could pass them in the street or on the road and never know it's them.
Pathetic; I know. I don't go to the village school but I'm considering...don't think it'll be much use though; hate to boast but...I'm pretty smart right now.
Plus all you learn is archery and mining skills and I am pretty good at that too.
The school would have no benifits for me and if I DID go I would have to wear a mask. I don't want to show my face. I'll think aimlessly till I come up with something.
Tims up; I have one!
I'll go, for a day just to see what it's like. Ugh but there is one person I can't stand, she is really popular and girly she's good at EVERYTHING so she has boys fawning at her heels. Seriously those boys need their eyes checked...I know I shouldn't sterotype but I don't think she'd like me. I'm poor, withdrawn and stupid. In her eyes anyway. Ah sterotyped again, I might as well pack my stuff, nightfall is arriving shortly. I have a sudden lust for adventure. I can't wait to mine so I can gather coal to heat my stove. I'll need some beef as well.
I need some awesome sign off don't I?
I'll think of one.
~Autum~

[Nonexsitent]

I love the thrill of the pitch black mine, I have to use torches. It makes it so much funnier when you find lava and water. Don't you see that the two don't mix yet they are found together. But I'm stupid.
I know lava is dangerous so I creep around the lava even though it's hot....
I've alredy got the beef it was a simple kill. I just snuck onto the roof shot it with my arrow. See simple kill.
I then trespassed on the mayor's land (I did that before to kill the cow but never mind) to get to the coal mine. I mean it's the town's coal really but the mayor insists on keeping it to himself.
Greedy man.
He sells it for money as well.
I wanted to burn him at stake. I still do but I can't be fussed with his ugly face today so off I continue.
I feel like a lost child, Shadows swarm everywhere. They eat you. Well they eat you soul and leave you as a vessel till your saved. But I have awesome powers therefore I am safe so HA in your face shadows.
I am awesome. I hate to boast, but it is true.
I know I was told I was a dirty mage that would destroy the world using bad magic, but seriously I know bad magic but I won't destroy the world with it lol.
I'd just save the world with it, NOT! If I wanted to destroy the rock on which we live I'd of done it years ago.
I'm only 15 what do people take me for a mass murderer?
I DO NOT WANT TO KILL ANYONE SO GET OVER IT!

I found coal hoorah!
I'm going home. I want to get in before morning. I'm going now.
I got out and walked straight into the mayor, he looked really mad. He grabbed my wrist and began to yank me toward the court. Oh god, escape is needed.
"Let me go!" I yelled, he only laughed.
"You little theif, you will be delt with severly." He growled.
"No..." I trailed off as he yenked me in the court, which is really a massive empty field everyone was gathered there, right in the middle was a massive cross. Like the one they put Jesus on. They were putting hay all around it. They were going to burn me at stake. My worst nightmare.
They dragged me then; I still say they could be a bit kinder. The mayor had the privalidge of tying me up.
"No you can't." I wept as he took my hat off and my long redish-brown hair fell, tumbling in little ringlets that outlined my face.
"Ah, Autum the unknown." He spat and stepped away lighting the fire. I saw everyone gasp as I just stood there and glared at them.
"I only stole to eat, is that a crime eating?" I asked, the vile rising in my stomach. The mayor grinned.
"No, but stealing is." He hissed.
"Your stealing from the town, you should be burnt too." I screamed at him, the town gasped, smoke was filling my lungs.
"Kill him." Someone yelled.
"Save Autum." A girl yelled. I didn't see much, my vision was hazed by the smoke. I coughed, I was going to die.
I felt nothing as my world swelled to black.

Damn I still don't have a cool sign off word. I will think of one.
~Autum~

[AlphaLeonis]

Hey! Here's my first entry. My finger is seriously injured, so I'll type what I can. Ow.

~

Dear Journal,

I found you in a mine nearby. Autumn's name was on your cover. I can only wonder where she went. When I read it though, I realised that she had been looking for coal. Seriously, I never noticed that un-popular girl was so talented! I want to be more like her. Either way. I immediately tossed you to the side, realizing you were just a 'piece of junk', heading out of my house, calling my two dogs with me. Their names were Max and Oscar - they were hunting dogs.
My face burned under the sun, and my armour heated. I took it off to cool me down.
Walking down a steep hill, I came face to face with my base. It was at the bottom of that cave.
I leapt for it, charging, and falling for god knows how long. The wind of gravity blew against my face.
... I felt it. That sense of being at home. I loved it.
Then I hit the ground, my balance faltering for a moment, but soon returning. I glanced around.
My dogs were sat either side of me as I sat, glancing through some documents. One caught my eye.
'Spy for hire', it said, 'Powerful magus' are taking over the village. Please help us.'
What I was going to do?

... The complete opposite.

^->Katiria<-^

[G๏l๔єภєאє]

ooh. i like so far!!!

[Alnitak]

its good,could be inprovved though...

[wonderfullyphicotic]

((good but could be improved... How I don't know.. I give it a 7 out of 10))

[Nonexsitent]

Do you mind asking what needs improving we'll work on it?

[wonderfullyphicotic]

((well I fund it hard to follow first Autum has it then some one else and I'm confused on stuff like the shadows.. If you wrote an explanation on things like that it would be easier to understand and for me improve because I would have a better understanding about the world))

[Nonexsitent]

Shadows are just shadow that attack and eat souls. The person they stole the soul from will remain a vessel till someone retrives their soul.
It's a joint journal so Autum will write and so will Kataria.
Sorry if it confuses you....I will improve most definatly
so thanks ^.^

[wonderfullyphicotic]

(;ok that has helped me and so I will hopefully be able to follow along better!))