Tough As Nails Adoption Fan Club (Happy Holidays!)

[Toadfoal]

Yeah, do you know when this round ends?

[Atwood]

It ends on Wednesday, so in about four days not counting today. ^^

[Ebonpyre]

Atwood, I have a question about the forms. I have some info I would like to add that doesn't fit into any of the categories already there (history/personality/likes/dislikes). Is it allowed to add more categories to the form for the other information, or are your chances better keeping the form as is?

[Atwood]

Sure, you can add it on to the end if that works easiest for you. ^^ Depending on what the other questions are, they'd probably be grouped vaguely with either personality or background in the evaluation, but I'm not picky about where things are placed in the form so long as it's coherent and the placement makes at least some sense based on how the form is being written (e.g. you might include a lot of background in 'Species' to show how being that species affected the character's life, things like that). I'm used to having far more questions in character forms, so I don't mind having a few added on here - for my own characters, the main form that I use is about five pages long before I start writing in the answers. XD

[Ebonpyre]

All right, thanks ^_^

[Xanre]

I've got a question. Whatever happened to the TaN RP? It seems to have died. XD

[Ebonpyre]

I have no idea, Tenma. I'm so busy now, though, that I wouldn't have time if it revived.

And...I'm getting inspiration from the wierdest places.

Completely overhauled Deimos' likes and dislikes. Page 9 here, page 191 in the main topic.
I'm not so sure about the likes part; something seems wrong about it. Critique on that part?

[birdie,]

Do we have to join befor comenting? Or can we just coment?

[Atwood]

You can just come in and start chatting. ^^

[birdie,]

Okay ^^

I need some crituque on this form so far:

I would like to adopt!
Number: 3
Picture:

Name: Zodki (Zod•KI)
Species: Red wolf
Personality: Zodki is a loving, creative, different, hyper, and curious red wolf. He can be over protective over his friends and loved ones. He dosen't like to have any enemies of any sort, he'd rather gain friends than loose them. Some say he can be a little too curious and he gets in lots of situations that hard to get out of, but some how he always makes it threw tough situations. Zodki also isn't afraid of anything, not even things bigger than him, other red wolves find this odd about him. Zodki dosen't care about what others think of him as, he just always keeps this in his mind "Go with the flow and do what you please." That moddo has helpped him alot over the years. As you can see zodki is a pretty confident wolf, and he is very proud of himself for that.
Likes: Forests, life, rivers, flowers, his friends, being with his loved ones, spending time exsploring, and the cool breeze on a summers day.
Dislikes: Cranky people/animals, Ambark (a wolf, read his background to find out), Rainy and or depressing days, being left out, hatred, gloomyness, Ect...
Background:
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Birth year.

One cool summers day a wolf was born into the forest. This wolf was zodki. His mother smiled at him sweetly and began to groom him, while his father began to think of names. Zodki opened his eyes a bit to early that one day "Honey whats going on, he wasn't supossed to open his eyes for a day or so!" His mother shriked. "I guess his one of those early bloomers..." His father protested. Zodki watched his parents talk to each other, he smiled and began to take a couple steps. His parents talked to each other about zodki's early developing, while zodki made his way out of the den. Zodki stepped to the rivers side and nearly fell in "What do you thik you're doing?" His mother said with a giggle "Thats it, we hould name him Zodki, after his adventrious grand-father!" Zodki's father said looking at his mate and child. "You got it Kiku! That fits him perfectly." His mother said while bringing him to the den. "Hedi, let me take him in, you should rest for a bit." Kiku said softly. Hedi nodded and let Kiku take their child into the den, she soon then softly closed her eyes and took a nap. Kiku took Zodki in safely, he then lied down around zodki, zodki did exsactly what kiku did, then he shut his eyes as his older brother Lumi lied next to zodki and his father, Hedi soon got up from outside of the den and curled up around Kiku, then zodki soon dirfted into sleep as well as the others. That was Zodki's first family moment, and he still remembers it.
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A few years later.

Zodki quickly learned how to speak when he was about four years old. His parents smiled at every word he said, and the soon relized that he needed to meet others o his kind, so they took him to a clearing in the forest, little red wolves played simple and fun games together. Zodki looked at all the wolves and the little wolves beckoned him to come play with him. He ran up to the wolves and said "Hi I'm zodki!" And the other wolves nodded and said their names, Zodki remembe each one, he also easly remembered the game rules. Zodki and the others played the simple game, then all of the sudden all of thewolvs Zodki was playing with quickly rushed to their mothers, Hedi and Kiku were wide eyed and they stood still looking frozen. Zodki slowly looked over his shoulder, there stood a hudge grizzly bear. Zodki smiled at the bear and said "Hi i'm zodki!" The bear growled a little zodki "Um couldyou please leave, this is my pack territory." Zodki said politely to the bear the bear growled and said "What makes you think I am going to leave?" Zodki looked up angerly at the bear "you made me do this" Zodki said then he grabbed a pine cone and threw it and the bear, then he nodded and looked at the other wolves, the wolves began to though pine cones at the bear. The bear fleaed and zodki was considered a hero of the pack. After the bear buisness zodki me a wolf, the same age as his older brother, named ambark. Ambark hated zodki for taking his glory, by scaring the bear away, so ambark wared zodki that he would soon get revenge any way he could.
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Teen age years

Zodki was appreciated by all of his pack mates, and one day he met a beautiful white wolf with beautiful markings. She had dark pine green eyes and her name was Pine. Zodki felt like he fell in love. He walked up to her and began to start a conversation. "Um, hi, i'm Zodki" Zodki said softly. Pine smiled "I'm Pine" She said. Zodki felt nervious then said "Do you have a mate or like a mate to be?". Pine sighed "Well yes I do, but, can we be friends Zodki" Pine said softly. Zodki sighed then smiled "Sure, as long as you run with me on the big journey." Zodki said nicely. Pine nodded then smiled "Okay, would you like to go on a run with me zodki?" Pine said sweetly. Zodki nodded, then the two ran off racing each other, they did this for two years each day until one tragic day. Zodki and pine were on their nomal route, and suddenly zodki found some wild flowers. He walked up to them and began to pick some, he heard pine scream. He quickly turned around and saw a bear on top of pine, it was trying to kill her. Zodki growled and tackled the bear, he told pine to run, and pine got up and ran, she had a limp to her run. Zodki fought the bear for an hour, then finnally zodki ran back to the pack, as soon as he got back he ran to pine "How is she?!" Zodki said worried. The wise wolf looked at him i'm afraid, she can no longer run, zodki" the wise wolf said softly. Zodki sighed "At least she's still alive..." He murmured. Pine looked at zodki "My leg is pemenitly broken, but you saved my life zodki, you saved me!" Pine said happily. Zodki smiled and lied down next to pine. "My mate ran off today...I just barely got the word" Pine whispered. Zodki sighed "Maybe we can...Travel together now" Zodki said. Pine smiled and nodded "I'll go where ever you go." She said. Zodki smiled, he now had a very strong friend, Pine was always his friend but now she was one of his strongest. Soon after that Zodki noticed that he had gotten a strange mark on his thigh, it was some-how shaped like a wing, he went into the river to try and soak it off, but there was no use, his un-natural marking was still there. Zodki shrugged "Well, it kinda looks cool..." Zodki said looking at the new and strange marking. Zodki walked back to camp flaunting his new marking. Zodki returned to his mother's and father's den to show them his new marking, he walked in and saw his brother Lumi dieing right then and there. "What happened?!" Zodki yelled. Lumi looked up at zodki
"A-a-a-a-mbark.." Lumi said stutering. Zodki eyes began to fill with tears "What did he do to you?!?!" Zodki said studing lumi's body serching for wounds. Lumi looked strait in front of him then began to speak "a-a-a-a-a-a-a-all he said w-w-was r-r-r-r-r-revenge..." Lumi said. Zodki growled "WHICH WAY DID HE GO?!" Zodki yelled, he was scared of the thought that he might loose his older brother. Lumi pointed in the dirrection that ambark ran off to. Zodki began to bust in tears, his eyes were still wide open, then Zodki lied next to lumi, and put his snout on lumi's head. Zodki closed his eyes "Lumi don't leave me, don't leave me, Don't leave me now Lumi!" Zodki said. Lumi tried to smile, then he put his paw on zodki's heart "Z-z-z-zodki, i-i-i-i'll always b-b-b-be w-w-w-with you, j-j-j-j-just don't forget m-m-m-m-me." Lumi said, then he began to shake violently. Zodki lifted his head "Lumi?! Lumi?! Lumi?!" Zodki said shaking his brother. Lumi didn't answer. "T-t-t-this can't be happening! Lumi! Stop kidding, Stop it, Please!" Zodki said hopelessly. Zodki flipped lumi to his back, then he put his ear against his chest the hear his heart. There was no thumpping, his heart stopped. Zodki began to shiver. "No, no, no, no, Lumi! Can you hear me! Don't worry lumi i'll get ambark back for this, i'll get him back, I promise." Zodki said, tears drizzled down his face. Zodki then ran out of the den following ambark's sent, he saw ambark ahead, zodki began to run faster and faster, then he tackled ambark "WHY DID YOU DO IT?!" Zodki said while looking down at him. Ambark smiled devilishly "Hmmm, I guess you found out, I told you i'd get revenge...and look, I did..." Ambark said. Zodki growled, tears still drizzling down his face. Then he got hold of ambark's neck, he began to crush it, he let go then sighed "I wouldn't stoop as low as you, but if I ever see your face again, I will kill you..." Zodki growled then he steped off of ambark "NOW SCRAM!" Zodki yelled. Ambark's neck was bleeding, he scowled at zodki, then he ran off. Zodki began to sob, he fell to the ground, and covered his eyes with his paws.
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Adult hood

Zodki soon had to leave his mother and father. He bowed respecfully at each parent "I will miss you, promise that I will always be in your hearts, because you will always be in mine." Zodki said to his parents, tears filling his eyes. His parents nodded and said "You were always in our hearts, we will miss you too." Zodki nodded and turned and began his long journey. He sighned and looked up at the clouds, then he heard a slight howl, he looked back and saw pine "Oh hi pine." Zodki greeted. Pine smiled "Remeber I said i'll go wherever you go, now slow down, we're not in a hurry." Pine said limping due to her broken leg. Zodki smiled then stopped waiting for pine to catch up "Yeah, sorry it just looks like a storm is coming, I wanted to find shelter." Zodki Said softly. Pine caught up with zodki she looked zodki in the eyes, her dark pine green eyes enchanting him "We'll be fine...The storm won't be her for another three days. But we should find some shelter, in a resonable place, with a pleasing amount of prey...and maybe a rier or two in the area." Pine said looking deeply into zodki's eyes. Zodki nodded "Exactly, thays what I was going to do..." He murmured. Pine smiled "Yes but you don't need to be in a hurry, it's not close to dusk, now comon' lazy bones, lets go find the dream land" Pine said with a slight smiled, then she got up and began to limp up the trail. Zodki sighed then smiled at pine, he got up and began to run up to pine. Zodki looked at her broken leg "You wouldn't have that if it wasn't for me, I feel so stupid whenever I see you and we walk together, were you ever mad at me for doing that to you?" Zodki said nomally. Pine sighed "No zodki I'm not mad at you, I was never mad at you either, remember you saved my life for wolves sake!" Pne said, then she licked zodki nicely. Zodki blushed a little "Yeah, I just never think of myself as a hero" Zodki siad as he looked at the ground. "Pine who was you're mate?" Zodki said lookeing up at pine. Pine sighed "Well his name was ambark..." Pine saidsoftly hoping zodki wouldn't reconize the name. Zodki lifted his head "Did you just say ambark?" Zodki said. Pine nodded "Y-y-y-yes..." she stuttered. Zodki frowned "He killed my brother, I hate that wolf, how could you love him pine!?" Zodki said. Pine sighed "I was hopeing you wouldn't remember, I begged ambark not to kill lumi, I really did Zodki, he was just to power crazy! And I didn't love him, I was forced to mate him, He told me if I didn't then he would kill my family...He ended up killing my family, I tried to run away from him, but his threatened to kill you...I couldn't let that happen." Pine said. Zodki sighed "Waht makes you think i'm going to believe you pine?!" Zodki said, then he ran off and found a small, but nice den to stay the night in. Pine sighed then she followed zodki's scent, and suddenly a wolf tackled her, everything faded to black. Zodki sat in his small den he looked at his paws, and sighed. Suddenly he heard a faint howl in the distance, it didn't sound like pine, or any wolf zodki had ever met. Zodki jumped out of his den, he stood strongly. He howled loudly, there was no answer. He howled again but this time louder, the cold air revealed zodki's breath everytime he howled. A goustly howl came from a tall pine tree. Zodki looked around himself "Who goes there?" Zodki yelled. A goust-like wolf appeared from out of the pine tree, he had Lumi's markings, and eye color. "Who are you?" Zodki asked the wolf. The wolf looked at zodki "Zodki it's me, lumi" The wolf said. Zodki scouled at the wolf "No you aren't Lumi is dead." Zodki growled. The wolf shook hishead "Zodki, please believe me, It reall is me, try to touch me, I'll prove myself to you!" The wolf said. Zodki stood still "This is a trick isn't it?" Zodki growled. The wolf put it's head down "Zodki, i'm 100% Sure it's not a trick, watch" The wolf said then he walked right through zodki, the wolf was Lumi's spirit. Zodki stood there speechless, looking at lumi's spirit. Lumi's spirit smiled "I told you" Lumi's spirit said. Zodki nodded "why are you here?" Zodki asked lumi. Lumi sighed "Zodki, Pine is in deep trouble, so are you, ambark has pine!" Lumi said. Zodki looked down at his paws "She's a trader...To me and you" Zodki growled. Lumi sighed "Zodki, he is going to kill her, you need to save her, Zodki I know you deep down, and you wouldn't let a wolf die for better or less." Lumi said. Zodki tried not to cry "Where is she." Zodki said. Lumi smiled "I knew you wouldn't let her down, Now follow me." Lumi said floating along a trail. Zodki followed lumi. Lumi brought zodki to Ambarks camp "Zodki I can't help you with this no longer...Good luck" Lumi whispered, then he faded away like dust. Zodki sighed "Again, he has left me" He said trying to hold back his tears. Zodki shook his head then peered over at pine, she was in a deep hole. The hole which held pine was heavaly gaurded with wolves. "You'll never get away with this ambark, Zodki will find me!" Pine shouted. Ambark laughed "Well it dosen't look like he is going to help you, dose it." Ambark growled. Zodki looked angerly at ambark. Pine sat down speechless, she began to cry. Zodki growled, and all of the wolves looked at the bush that zodki was hiding in. Zodki jumped out and tackled the wolves in front of the bush. Ambark growled at zodki "Get him!" He barked at the all of the wolves. Zodki Injured each wolf that challenged him, ambark finnally had enough and he tackled zodki "Are you trying to be a hero, well forget it." Ambark growled. Zodki began to see black "I will not die." Zodki whispered. Ambark pinned zodki down "Today...You will" Ambark growled then he bit into zodki's neck. Zodki's life began to flash by in his eyes. Today I walk through the vally of the shadow and death. He recited in his head. Ambark laughed and stepped off zodki, ambark walked to where pine was "Looks like your little hero is dead." Ambark laughed. Pine burst in tears "NO!" She howled. Zodki lied there motionless Pine! He screamed in his head, he began to breathe violently. Suddenly zodki hopped up, he was alive! Zodki tackled ambark, growling loudly "Remember my promise." Zodki growled at ambark. "What! You were dead!" Ambark whimpered. Zodki smiled and bit deep down onto ambarks neck. Ambark's rain of terrior ended, ambark was dead. Zodki stepped of ambark, and he ran to pine. "Your Alive!" Pine cheered. Zodki put down his paw for pine to hold. Pine grabbed zodki's paw, then zodki softly grabbed a part of the back of pines neck. Zodki forced pine up, then he nuzzled her tears began to fall down his face "I thought he killed you." Zodki said. "I thought he killed you." Pine whispered. Zodki stopped nuzzling, and looked into pines eyes "You weren't lying, I'm sorry I didn't believe you" Zodki said softly. Pine smiled and began to cry of happiness. Zodki smiled "Pine why are you crying?" Zodki said laughing and crying. Pine smiled "I'm just so happy!" She said. Zodki turned his head to ambark's pack, they gathered around their fallen leader. They all turned around and bowed to zodki "From now one, as long as you live, we are your packmates, and you are our leader" The wolf said. Zodki looked confused, pine looked at zodki blankly "Zodki You killed their leader, that makes you leader now..." Pine whispered in his ear. Zodki looked suprized "But...But...But I don't want to be a leader..." Zodki said looking at all of the wolves. Pine sighed "Then choose one to be the leader" Pine whispered into zodki's ear. Zodki nodded then pointed to a wolf with his paw "You...you will be the leader of this pack, until the day you die." Zodki said boldly. The wolf stood proud "But whay me?" the wolf asked. Zodki looked at the wolf deeply "You showed great courage and strength when you fought me, now lead your pack" Zodki said, then he turned around and began to walk up the trail. The wolf nodded, then he lead his pack to the lake. Pine followed Zodki. "Why did you just give up you leader position like that zodki?" Pine asked zodki.
-Will finish later.-